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OfflineCptnGarden
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NEW SONG! LISTEN AND COMMENT!
    #5786705 - 06/24/06 02:14 PM (17 years, 7 months ago)

Wouldn't be able to tell you what style it is exactly, but its an attempt towards some triphop. As usual I made the beat in FL5PE and exported to Sonar 4 for vocals and remastering.
The lyrics are kinda quiet though, sorry.

tell me what you think!


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Re: NEW SONG! LISTEN AND COMMENT! [Re: CptnGarden]
    #5786871 - 06/24/06 03:51 PM (17 years, 7 months ago)

this is a very unfinished product of a song off my next CD "A Taste of Sinspiration"


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Re: NEW SONG! LISTEN AND COMMENT! [Re: CptnGarden]
    #5786889 - 06/24/06 04:06 PM (17 years, 7 months ago)

I didnt like it.


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Re: NEW SONG! LISTEN AND COMMENT! [Re: AaronEvil]
    #5786920 - 06/24/06 04:25 PM (17 years, 7 months ago)

thanks for listening :thumbup:


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Re: NEW SONG! LISTEN AND COMMENT! [Re: CptnGarden]
    #5788474 - 06/25/06 02:26 AM (17 years, 7 months ago)

any juggalos?


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Re: NEW SONG! LISTEN AND COMMENT! [Re: CptnGarden]
    #5788520 - 06/25/06 03:02 AM (17 years, 7 months ago)

like the gliding sounds. at some parts it sounds a little chaotic (for example at 1 minute; the loud droning sound is at the same place as the vocals. maybe that would sound better if the sound was a little less loud and more panned to the left?)

interesting beat, I like most parts but sometimes I seemed to loose the flow of the song.

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I didn't like it



maybe next time when you give such a reply you could elaborate on why you didn't like it. only a comment like this with no explanationisn't really helpfull for an artist. It is sometimes hard to describe what you don't like about it, but see that as a challenge :wink:


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Re: NEW SONG! LISTEN AND COMMENT! [Re: stefan]
    #5788908 - 06/25/06 08:59 AM (17 years, 7 months ago)

thanks stefan for the comment :laugh:


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Re: NEW SONG! LISTEN AND COMMENT! [Re: CptnGarden]
    #5791660 - 06/26/06 05:10 AM (17 years, 7 months ago)

Not really my cup of tea, but that's no judgment on it's value.

As much as I loathe telling an artist what to do with their work, I'll try and make some constructive suggestions. Try being the operative word.

I agree with Stefan's comments. Maybe try compressing it a little, making it tighter, less loose, compact. It just felt like it lost it's way sort of past the half-way mark, if that makes any sense.

But yeah, nice work man. Keep at it! Keep honing you skills! You'll get there.


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