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OfflineRazman
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my story
    #3774325 - 02/13/05 03:38 PM (11 years, 9 months ago)

There arent many movies that deal with psychedelic experiences.. i have an idea for a story that i got from a dream, tell me what you think..

The main character will be a woman. (sarah) She's a biologist who goes hiking and discovers a completely isolated cave. This cave is surrounded by pockets of boiling water heated by the lack of earth's crust. She discovers that its a completely sterile environment.. but what makes it special is that a lifeform has been evolving for billions of years, compltely unrelated to evolution of all plants/animals/fungi that we know. Not only isolated, but its been evolving alot longer, back when conditions elsewhere on the planet weren't ready for life yet. It's a new discovered Kingdom of itself.

After some time, she eventually ingests some. It's the ultimate psychedelic journey. She goes into a coma for 50 years, in which she experiences the entire universe at once, living every life that has ever been born in the universe. She becomes me, she becomes you, all your friends, family, but most of all, lifeforms on other planets as well. Her brain's capacity seems to be no limit for the seemingly infinite amount of experiences she gains. She awakes from her coma in the year 2005..

and the story begins.. remember, she has lived your life up to this point..


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OfflineRazman
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Re: my story [Re: Razman]
    #3774336 - 02/13/05 03:40 PM (11 years, 9 months ago)

i'd like to name her queen salvia or something but.. it would conflict with the true origins of the name.. but the concept will be something very similar.. you experience her experiencing you when you do other drugs..


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Re: my story [Re: Razman]
    #3774340 - 02/13/05 03:41 PM (11 years, 9 months ago)

Sounds like an intriguing plot! You should write a story about it. It would be an interesting read...


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Re: my story [Re: Le_Canard]
    #3774351 - 02/13/05 03:43 PM (11 years, 9 months ago)

Thats a really interesting story. If there were a movie/novel to come out about it I would surely get it.

I guess next step is a script...  :wink:


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Re: my story [Re: Freeker]
    #3774366 - 02/13/05 03:48 PM (11 years, 9 months ago)

Pretty cool idea :thumbup:


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Re: my story [Re: LouiseLouise]
    #3774441 - 02/13/05 04:23 PM (11 years, 9 months ago)

after her story, a new story is introduced -- one of a man. A firefighter who saves lives. One night he sits down to experience Salvia (or something similar) with his old highschool buddies.. as others claim to hear a female voice within their own consciousness, he hears the voice "Find me" along with a bunch of wild shit that i wont get into. Sarah has lived his life, and finds him truely unique to the seemingly infinite lives she has already experienced. His instincts are compltely inferior to his values of human life. The rest of the movie will be based on uniting these two. dont worry it wont be a love story, but something compltely different.. unity of all life in the universe will be the result, and sarah knows it..

i see him entering this cave at the end, tripping hard (which the viewer/reader would see as well). The cave at this point will be in a natural psychedilic state of existence without the male character even ingesting anything. it will be a tripped out "unity of life" scene that will have the look of "waking life" and "the wall". The marriage on the bridge scene from 'natural born killers' with the blood dripping comes to mind for inspiration on how far i can take this..


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Re: my story [Re: Razman]
    #3774453 - 02/13/05 04:28 PM (11 years, 9 months ago)

It sounds cool as hell, but you should use a made up drug instead of Salvia.
Nothing pisses me off more than when writers try to make drugs something they are not, either due to bias against, or lack of experience with said drug.
Not that you have either one of those.
But its like in that movie altered states wher eating mushrooms turns that dude into a monkey. Stupid shite. Does Salvia really live up to the criteria you had in mind for the drug in your story?


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Re: my story [Re: Dreamer987]
    #3774471 - 02/13/05 04:33 PM (11 years, 9 months ago)

yes ill be using a different drug in it for sure..
remember its nnot nearly as strong as the stuff she finds in the cave..
the main idea is that she communicates to him through the common psychedelic drug that he tries.. because remember she has lived all lives, not just humans.. so in a way she has BEEN the plant that he smokes..


Edited by Razman (02/13/05 04:35 PM)


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Re: my story [Re: Razman]
    #3774494 - 02/13/05 04:41 PM (11 years, 9 months ago)

i love the story


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Re: my story [Re: TODAY]
    #3774524 - 02/13/05 04:48 PM (11 years, 9 months ago)

i totally think you should write it down as a novel or somethin sounds really interestin! id read it!


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Re: my story [Re: Arf]
    #3774539 - 02/13/05 04:52 PM (11 years, 9 months ago)

my writing skills arent the best..ive tried to write a script with another idea before and it turned out stupid and flakey :S
maybe ill take some classes or somethin


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Re: my story [Re: Razman]
    #3774546 - 02/13/05 04:55 PM (11 years, 9 months ago)

how about just a story as opposed to a script?


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Re: my story [Re: Arf]
    #3774556 - 02/13/05 04:58 PM (11 years, 9 months ago)

same deal.. ive never written a story before.. this plot summary is the most story writing ive ever done, lol


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Re: my story [Re: Razman]
    #3774583 - 02/13/05 05:07 PM (11 years, 9 months ago)

interesting for sure


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