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OfflineBluMonkee
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Help me write this song......
    #2061514 - 10/31/03 08:56 PM (14 years, 1 month ago)

If I shared my sunset with you
would you be with me come dawn....


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"If I don't see ya' in the future, I'll see ya' in the pasture"


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InvisibleZildjian
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Re: Help me write this song...... [Re: BluMonkee]
    #2061694 - 10/31/03 10:25 PM (14 years, 1 month ago)

probably, because your pretty high
and your parents will be waiting at home


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OfflineBluMonkee
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Re: Help me write this song...... [Re: Zildjian]
    #2061705 - 10/31/03 10:31 PM (14 years, 1 month ago)

no need for you to leave now--- ah haaa
you'd be better - just stay with me


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Re: Help me write this song...... [Re: BluMonkee]
    #2062615 - 11/01/03 02:10 PM (14 years, 1 month ago)

chorus


we're lying here today....we're lying here tonight
come on over baby.....snuggle up real tight

everything will be ok...everything will end up bright
dealer man is coming...to ease this nightmare night


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We're Bought and Sold
For English Gold


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Offlinefireworks_godS
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Re: Help me write this song...... [Re: scotsman1]
    #2062657 - 11/01/03 02:32 PM (14 years, 1 month ago)

And when we got to his house, there was no wife!
Only a short short letter....
It said I'm leaving you for your brother...
Because he fucks me better!!!

:grin:
Peace.


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:redpanda:
If I should die this very moment
I wouldn't fear
For I've never known completeness
Like being here
Wrapped in the warmth of you
Loving every breath of you

:heartpump: :bunnyhug: :yinyang:

:yinyang: :levitate: :earth: :levitate: :yinyang:


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OfflineGrandpa
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Re: Help me write this song...... [Re: fireworks_god]
    #2062661 - 11/01/03 02:34 PM (14 years, 1 month ago)

Quote:

fireworks_god said:
And when we got to his house, there was no wife!
Only a short short letter....
It said I'm leaving you for your brother...
Because he fucks me better!!!

:grin:
Peace. 




His eyes filled with tears of sadness,
and his heart was filled with grief,
He almost beat that old goat's ass,
but now he's smoking some reef.


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I don't intend for this to take on a political tone. I'm just here for the drugs.
--Nancy Reagan, former First Lady


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Re: Help me write this song...... [Re: Grandpa]
    #2062673 - 11/01/03 02:41 PM (14 years, 1 month ago)

Quote:

Grandpa said:
His eyes filled with tears of sadness,
and his heart was filled with grief,
He almost beat that old goat's ass,
but now he's smoking some reef. 




Hehe, nice little twist. God, I used to be able to fucking sing that full fucking song on my own... :grin: It is so fucking sweet, so dramatic..

Someday my band is going to cover it as a bonus track or something. It will be a hell of a lot of fun to do...
Peace.


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:redpanda:
If I should die this very moment
I wouldn't fear
For I've never known completeness
Like being here
Wrapped in the warmth of you
Loving every breath of you

:heartpump: :bunnyhug: :yinyang:

:yinyang: :levitate: :earth: :levitate: :yinyang:


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Re: Help me write this song...... [Re: fireworks_god]
    #2062693 - 11/01/03 02:54 PM (14 years, 1 month ago)

if we're forming a band
i demand a separate tour bus



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We're Bought and Sold
For English Gold


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Re: Help me write this song...... [Re: scotsman1]
    #2062885 - 11/01/03 04:38 PM (14 years, 1 month ago)

Quote:

scotsman1 said:
if we're forming a band
i demand a separate tour bus





Well, I get to have a limousine to drive me from radio station to radio station, like good ole Lars..
Peace.


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:redpanda:
If I should die this very moment
I wouldn't fear
For I've never known completeness
Like being here
Wrapped in the warmth of you
Loving every breath of you

:heartpump: :bunnyhug: :yinyang:

:yinyang: :levitate: :earth: :levitate: :yinyang:


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InvisibleZero7a1
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Re: Help me write this song...... [Re: BluMonkee]
    #2064138 - 11/02/03 03:06 AM (14 years, 1 month ago)

when the eternal fires light hits the lawn


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What?


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InvisibleZildjian
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Re: Help me write this song...... [Re: scotsman1]
    #2069407 - 11/04/03 04:28 AM (14 years, 1 month ago)

nice drumkit, is that an old swingstar?



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OfflineRoseM
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Re: Help me write this song...... [Re: BluMonkee]
    #2069463 - 11/04/03 05:04 AM (14 years, 1 month ago)

2nd verse, same first line:

If I shared my sunset with you
would you be with me come dawn....

'cause the last gal I slept with,
Threw my shit on the lawn.


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Re: Help me write this song...... [Re: Zildjian]
    #2069880 - 11/04/03 11:16 AM (14 years, 1 month ago)

Quote:

Zildjian said:
nice drumkit, is that an old swingstar?

i dunno i was away from drums for a while
and lost touch
i was told it was premier, maybe the snare
is but the rest?
thats a nice kit you got there


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OfflineBluMonkee
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Re: Help me write this song...... [Re: scotsman1]
    #2070344 - 11/04/03 06:53 PM (14 years, 1 month ago)

k, we're moving right along now  :thumbup: thanks for all the input thus far, here's what we got so far........

  If I shared my sunset with you
would you be with me come dawn....
probably, because your pretty high
and your parents will be waiting at home
no need to be runnin? off
no need to be alone
stay right here tonight with me baby
I feel somethin? comin? on

(chorus)
we're lying here today....we're lying here tonight
come on over baby.....snuggle up real tight

everything will be ok...everything will end up bright
dealer man is coming...to ease this nightmare night

V2
If I shared my sunset with you
would you be with me come dawn..
'cause the last gal that I slept with,
Threw my shit out on the lawn.
 


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Offlinezorchmedia
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Re: Help me write this song...... [Re: BluMonkee]
    #2070581 - 11/04/03 08:03 PM (14 years, 1 month ago)

Think I`ll finish off V2, and slide a bit deeper into the gutter...

V2
If I shared my sunset with you
would you be with me come dawn..
cause the last gal that I slept with,
Threw my shit out on the lawn,
Would you share my syringe with me,
When the dealer sets us free,
And is your love and trust,
Stong enough,
To use it AFTER me!?!? :wink:

     


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Re: Help me write this song...... [Re: zorchmedia]
    #2072615 - 11/05/03 10:24 AM (14 years, 1 month ago)

Repeat chorus,

Bridge.

Now, all you need is Verse 3 and you've got a hit.


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