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BluMonkee
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Help me write this song......
#2061514 - 10/31/03 06:56 PM (20 years, 4 months ago) |
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If I shared my sunset with you would you be with me come dawn....
-------------------- "If I don't see ya' in the future, I'll see ya' in the pasture"
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Zildjian
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Re: Help me write this song...... [Re: BluMonkee]
#2061694 - 10/31/03 08:25 PM (20 years, 4 months ago) |
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probably, because your pretty high and your parents will be waiting at home
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BluMonkee
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Re: Help me write this song...... [Re: Zildjian]
#2061705 - 10/31/03 08:31 PM (20 years, 4 months ago) |
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no need for you to leave now--- ah haaa you'd be better - just stay with me
-------------------- "If I don't see ya' in the future, I'll see ya' in the pasture"
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scotsman1
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Re: Help me write this song...... [Re: BluMonkee]
#2062615 - 11/01/03 12:10 PM (20 years, 4 months ago) |
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chorus
we're lying here today....we're lying here tonight come on over baby.....snuggle up real tight
everything will be ok...everything will end up bright dealer man is coming...to ease this nightmare night
-------------------- We're Bought and Sold For English Gold
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fireworks_god
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Re: Help me write this song...... [Re: scotsman1]
#2062657 - 11/01/03 12:32 PM (20 years, 4 months ago) |
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And when we got to his house, there was no wife! Only a short short letter.... It said I'm leaving you for your brother... Because he fucks me better!!!
Peace.
-------------------- If I should die this very moment I wouldn't fear For I've never known completeness Like being here Wrapped in the warmth of you Loving every breath of you
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Grandpa
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Re: Help me write this song...... [Re: fireworks_god]
#2062661 - 11/01/03 12:34 PM (20 years, 4 months ago) |
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fireworks_god said: And when we got to his house, there was no wife! Only a short short letter.... It said I'm leaving you for your brother... Because he fucks me better!!!
Peace.
His eyes filled with tears of sadness, and his heart was filled with grief, He almost beat that old goat's ass, but now he's smoking some reef.
-------------------- I don't intend for this to take on a political tone. I'm just here for the drugs. --Nancy Reagan, former First Lady
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fireworks_god
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Re: Help me write this song...... [Re: Grandpa]
#2062673 - 11/01/03 12:41 PM (20 years, 4 months ago) |
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Grandpa said: His eyes filled with tears of sadness, and his heart was filled with grief, He almost beat that old goat's ass, but now he's smoking some reef.
Hehe, nice little twist. God, I used to be able to fucking sing that full fucking song on my own... It is so fucking sweet, so dramatic..
Someday my band is going to cover it as a bonus track or something. It will be a hell of a lot of fun to do... Peace.
-------------------- If I should die this very moment I wouldn't fear For I've never known completeness Like being here Wrapped in the warmth of you Loving every breath of you
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scotsman1
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Re: Help me write this song...... [Re: fireworks_god]
#2062693 - 11/01/03 12:54 PM (20 years, 4 months ago) |
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if we're forming a band i demand a separate tour bus
-------------------- We're Bought and Sold For English Gold
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fireworks_god
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Re: Help me write this song...... [Re: scotsman1]
#2062885 - 11/01/03 02:38 PM (20 years, 4 months ago) |
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scotsman1 said: if we're forming a band i demand a separate tour bus
Well, I get to have a limousine to drive me from radio station to radio station, like good ole Lars.. Peace.
-------------------- If I should die this very moment I wouldn't fear For I've never known completeness Like being here Wrapped in the warmth of you Loving every breath of you
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Zero7a1
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Re: Help me write this song...... [Re: BluMonkee]
#2064138 - 11/02/03 01:06 AM (20 years, 4 months ago) |
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when the eternal fires light hits the lawn
-------------------- What?
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Zildjian
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Re: Help me write this song...... [Re: scotsman1]
#2069407 - 11/04/03 02:28 AM (20 years, 4 months ago) |
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nice drumkit, is that an old swingstar?
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Rose
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Re: Help me write this song...... [Re: BluMonkee]
#2069463 - 11/04/03 03:04 AM (20 years, 4 months ago) |
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2nd verse, same first line: If I shared my sunset with you would you be with me come dawn.... 'cause the last gal I slept with, Threw my shit on the lawn.
-------------------- Fiddlesticks.
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scotsman1
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Re: Help me write this song...... [Re: Zildjian]
#2069880 - 11/04/03 09:16 AM (20 years, 4 months ago) |
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Zildjian said: nice drumkit, is that an old swingstar?
i dunno i was away from drums for a while and lost touch i was told it was premier, maybe the snare is but the rest? thats a nice kit you got there
-------------------- We're Bought and Sold For English Gold
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BluMonkee
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Re: Help me write this song...... [Re: scotsman1]
#2070344 - 11/04/03 04:53 PM (20 years, 4 months ago) |
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k, we're moving right along now thanks for all the input thus far, here's what we got so far........
If I shared my sunset with you would you be with me come dawn.... probably, because your pretty high and your parents will be waiting at home no need to be runnin? off no need to be alone stay right here tonight with me baby I feel somethin? comin? on
(chorus) we're lying here today....we're lying here tonight come on over baby.....snuggle up real tight
everything will be ok...everything will end up bright dealer man is coming...to ease this nightmare night
V2 If I shared my sunset with you would you be with me come dawn.. 'cause the last gal that I slept with, Threw my shit out on the lawn.
-------------------- "If I don't see ya' in the future, I'll see ya' in the pasture"
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zorchmedia
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Re: Help me write this song...... [Re: BluMonkee]
#2070581 - 11/04/03 06:03 PM (20 years, 4 months ago) |
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Think I`ll finish off V2, and slide a bit deeper into the gutter...
V2 If I shared my sunset with you would you be with me come dawn.. cause the last gal that I slept with, Threw my shit out on the lawn, Would you share my syringe with me, When the dealer sets us free, And is your love and trust, Stong enough, To use it AFTER me!?!?
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Rose
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Re: Help me write this song...... [Re: zorchmedia]
#2072615 - 11/05/03 08:24 AM (20 years, 4 months ago) |
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Repeat chorus,
Bridge.
Now, all you need is Verse 3 and you've got a hit.
-------------------- Fiddlesticks.
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