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Offlinepolarity
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Need some help with music
    #2013513 - 10/16/03 03:04 AM (13 years, 9 months ago)

Hey all. I write alot of lyrics.. I'm curious if any of you musicians out there might be willing to check out some of my lyrics and put them to song? Anyone willing to help me out..

Also just a few proof-readers could be nice aswell.. I'm not really that good but maybe someone can check them out for me and give me soem tips?



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Re: Need some help with music [Re: polarity]
    #2013605 - 10/16/03 03:40 AM (13 years, 9 months ago)

hey man.
The best way I get good criticism from good artists is just to post em up here, for open forum.
I can do pretty well to imagine words to a tune, but I dunno if i could write you a song for your words... I'd be happy to proof-read em, tell you what I think, see if it flows. :smile:
There's a lot of good musicians around here, i'm sure they'd drop a line too.


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Offlinepolarity
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Re: Need some help with music [Re: Blastrid]
    #2013637 - 10/16/03 04:04 AM (13 years, 9 months ago)

I'm sure mine are horrible compared to some of you out here in shroomery land... but here we go.. please go easy on me.

I will give a bried reason as to why the song was written (kind of my thoughts or what was going on in my life at the time) then the words..

First song was written when someone close to my died. It was about a year later when I wrote it. I felt like I was forgetting her and I couldn't even remember what she looked like.

Pictures

Today was a day like any other.
Not nearly cruel but there again not very kind.
The world, is rushing by so very quickly.
And your face is growing dimmer in my mind.

And now it seems that every passing day.
Makes a mochery of what I felt for you.
Please don't let the pictures fade away
Don't let them fade away.

And if I never hold you again.
Then my best time was spent, as part of you.
And now there's nothing left but my memories.
Oh please don't let the pictures fade away.
Please don't let the pictures fade way.
Don't let them fade away.

That's the first.. any comments?


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But I still feel that this ain?t livin.


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Re: Need some help with music [Re: polarity]
    #2014392 - 10/16/03 01:46 PM (13 years, 9 months ago)

Nice, man. Any chance you sing? Interested in metal? Still looking for a singer, I be.. :grin:
Peace.


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I wouldn't fear
For I've never known completeness
Like being here
Wrapped in the warmth of you
Loving every breath of you

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