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ohmatic
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a lil poem i just wrote
#4354294 - 06/30/05 03:19 AM (18 years, 9 months ago) |
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just wrote a little poem, thought of sharing.
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the continuum
Slowly, the drop falls, endless miles, continuing, steadily.
The beams of light, shed into thousand of millions of singular rays, as they hit the drop, fractalise, each hope in itself, but still, useless in their singularity.
Eventually, the drop hits soil, the journey is over, no more light, no more reflection, no more fractals, the journey is over -
- and the long forgotten seedling sprouts.
any thoughts? peace ohm
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Edited by ohmatic (06/30/05 03:20 AM)
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Re: a lil poem i just wrote [Re: ohmatic]
#4354341 - 06/30/05 03:50 AM (18 years, 9 months ago) |
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about death?
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Re: a lil poem i just wrote [Re: lechuck]
#4354352 - 06/30/05 03:59 AM (18 years, 9 months ago) |
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life after death?
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Re: a lil poem i just wrote [Re: RESTLESS]
#4354357 - 06/30/05 04:07 AM (18 years, 9 months ago) |
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whem drop hit ground is death, I guess
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Re: a lil poem i just wrote [Re: lechuck]
#4354365 - 06/30/05 04:26 AM (18 years, 9 months ago) |
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but once it hits the ground, it sprouts, its almost liek the baby coming out the womb... guess it could be used in many ways... guess you could use the travel the the kid goin through the womb to show life, and when he comes out and sees the light, its death/enlightenment.... its late... mayb im thinkin all wierd...
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Re: a lil poem i just wrote [Re: ohmatic]
#4354374 - 06/30/05 04:36 AM (18 years, 9 months ago) |
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hey i wrote a good one a week ago mays well post :
The Diamond of Leary
On site, I took a purple diamond I closed my eyes and listened to the wind I was launched into space like a world on its head
I was transported back to another plane of existence Like a cloud in the galaxy I had a taste of death I visited the realm of unknown souls
So I wake up into a dream And this realm I will stay
Terence Place
I close my eyes And breathe so easy I am walking towards the light As my Vision turns to black I rise to the Heavens
I look at them with two eyes And they look back with a thousand As I take a deep breath and jump in the river of rainbows As it flows into the sea of souls I am a grain of sand being thrown through the universe of ghosts
As my eyes peel back to reality I leave my soul with the grateful dead
by liveby 05 , TM
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Edited by liveby (06/30/05 05:55 AM)
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Re: a lil poem i just wrote [Re: liveby]
#4354419 - 06/30/05 05:37 AM (18 years, 9 months ago) |
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That was very nice too
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Re: a lil poem i just wrote [Re: RESTLESS]
#4354506 - 06/30/05 06:56 AM (18 years, 9 months ago) |
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mine are easy to firgure out , 1st ones about acid (hence leary ) and the second one is about DMT ( hence "Terence Place" terence Mckenna)
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Re: a lil poem i just wrote [Re: liveby]
#4354513 - 06/30/05 07:00 AM (18 years, 9 months ago) |
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Manifesting troubles brewing within,
Incestuous arguements having no end,
To whomever the victor
Will soon fight again
To wash his hands of their childrens sin.
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Re: a lil poem i just wrote [Re: imadouche]
#4355117 - 06/30/05 11:47 AM (18 years, 9 months ago) |
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actually, nice reponses in here, but the poem actually wasnt about death at all
its like, about hope, hope bein "birthed" when the lightrays fractelise within the entity of the drop, getting seperated into individual beams.
as it falls, hope fades, and as it hits the ground, the drops existance has become redundant as the drop itself, but as it merges with the soil, it gives way for the seed to sprout and in this very moment, of "senselessness" it gives birth to another life.
peace ohm
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Re: a lil poem i just wrote [Re: ohmatic]
#5017257 - 12/05/05 11:04 AM (18 years, 4 months ago) |
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HEY !
i bring this old thread of mine back up as my university department's newspaper has chosen to print it in its current issue !
also, ive been invited to READ it in front of audience along with some other work of mine !
a total of 5 students has been chosen and i am one of them, weeeeeeeee im so happy right now
lotsa love to all of u ! peace ohm
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Re: a lil poem i just wrote [Re: ohmatic]
#5017314 - 12/05/05 11:16 AM (18 years, 4 months ago) |
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and as one tricklet of blood is lost one thousand more raindrops are earased and everything stops to the tincture of sorrow that is carved in stone and cries alone like distant rune far from halcyon
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