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Offlinealakona
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My First Poem
    #4293381 - 06/13/05 11:44 PM (11 years, 5 months ago)

I was going through a shit of all my old school work from elementry school and I found my first poem. I wrote it on at my Grandmas table when I was 8.

ahem.

"The Heart
By alli p.
age 8 1/4

the heart is good,
the heart is wise
the heart is one to open eyes

the heart can tell
from right and wrong
but we do not all hear its song

we do not hear its whispering ways
when it speaks to us on those lonely days

we do not hear its comforting sigh
when we laugh or when we cry

we just choose to ignore,
to shut the hearts open door

but one day the door will open again
and we'll find our everlasting friend:

The heart"

hahahaha i was so cute.


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TrippinTeddy said:
sometimes when I'm raping a bitch, I like to tickle her ribs and under neath her arms, and I say "loosen up bitch, lets have fun now because if I have to kill your squirming ass, only one of us will be having fun, and you can't have a party all by yourself can you?" Then its usually all laughs and good times from there.

leftysurprise said:
  ive been fucking praying for 2 years that she would just get over her phobia of jizz and take a load right down the gullet for me.


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Re: My First Poem [Re: alakona]
    #4293384 - 06/13/05 11:45 PM (11 years, 5 months ago)

:heart:

That's so cute. I have poems published online. I'll never tell where though.


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Re: My First Poem [Re: Redstorm]
    #4293387 - 06/13/05 11:46 PM (11 years, 5 months ago)

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Redstorm said:
:heart:

That's so cute. I have poems published online. I'll never tell where though.




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Re: My First Poem [Re: Redstorm]
    #4293393 - 06/13/05 11:47 PM (11 years, 5 months ago)

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Redstorm said:
:heart:

That's so cute. I have poems published online. I'll never tell where though.




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TrippinTeddy said:
sometimes when I'm raping a bitch, I like to tickle her ribs and under neath her arms, and I say "loosen up bitch, lets have fun now because if I have to kill your squirming ass, only one of us will be having fun, and you can't have a party all by yourself can you?" Then its usually all laughs and good times from there.

leftysurprise said:
  ive been fucking praying for 2 years that she would just get over her phobia of jizz and take a load right down the gullet for me.


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Re: My First Poem [Re: alakona]
    #4293396 - 06/13/05 11:48 PM (11 years, 5 months ago)

My first poem ....

Roses are red
Violets are blue
my dicks hard
its because of you


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Re: My First Poem [Re: PaulAtreides]
    #4293403 - 06/13/05 11:51 PM (11 years, 5 months ago)

Nasty old man :nonono:


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Re: My First Poem [Re: alakona]
    #4293410 - 06/13/05 11:54 PM (11 years, 5 months ago)

That is a cool poem and very good for only being 8! :sun: :thumbup:


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Re: My First Poem [Re: alakona]
    #4293456 - 06/14/05 12:07 AM (11 years, 5 months ago)

People really do underestimate the intellect of youngsters. That was a good poem. You were "8 1/4" years old? :lol:


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Re: My First Poem [Re: alakona]
    #4293513 - 06/14/05 12:23 AM (11 years, 5 months ago)

Sweet.


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Re: My First Poem [Re: BanJankri]
    #4293522 - 06/14/05 12:27 AM (11 years, 5 months ago)

Pretty good for an 8 year old


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Re: My First Poem [Re: alakona]
    #4293523 - 06/14/05 12:28 AM (11 years, 5 months ago)

it's wonderful


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Re: My First Poem [Re: alakona]
    #4293533 - 06/14/05 12:30 AM (11 years, 5 months ago)

Very good I am a major poetry fan and poet myself ... My first poem was when I was 5 ..... but it wasnt good like your first poem it really suck actually soo great job :smile: :handth:


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Re: My First Poem [Re: KristiMidocean]
    #4293585 - 06/14/05 12:52 AM (11 years, 5 months ago)

:heart:


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TrippinTeddy said:
sometimes when I'm raping a bitch, I like to tickle her ribs and under neath her arms, and I say "loosen up bitch, lets have fun now because if I have to kill your squirming ass, only one of us will be having fun, and you can't have a party all by yourself can you?" Then its usually all laughs and good times from there.

leftysurprise said:
  ive been fucking praying for 2 years that she would just get over her phobia of jizz and take a load right down the gullet for me.


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Re: My First Poem [Re: alakona]
    #4293588 - 06/14/05 12:54 AM (11 years, 5 months ago)

You still write poetry at all Alakona?


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Re: My First Poem [Re: THE KRAT BARON]
    #4293615 - 06/14/05 12:59 AM (11 years, 5 months ago)

yeah, my dream is to write a childrens book.

i write rhyming poetry... im pretty lame.


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TrippinTeddy said:
sometimes when I'm raping a bitch, I like to tickle her ribs and under neath her arms, and I say "loosen up bitch, lets have fun now because if I have to kill your squirming ass, only one of us will be having fun, and you can't have a party all by yourself can you?" Then its usually all laughs and good times from there.

leftysurprise said:
  ive been fucking praying for 2 years that she would just get over her phobia of jizz and take a load right down the gullet for me.


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Re: My First Poem [Re: alakona]
    #4293618 - 06/14/05 01:00 AM (11 years, 5 months ago)

Ahh I wouldnt say its totally lame. You can make some decent cash if you're really into writing. Just go with it. :thumbup: :smile:


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