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The_Hobbit
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Write a poem
#4109447 - 04/29/05 12:28 AM (18 years, 10 months ago) |
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This thread dedicated to writing poems.
I'm not big on poetry, but I'm bored and I have time to waste.
I'm sitting here thinking about my life I have everything to look forward to and everything to do But I'm still sitting here, not doing anything and feeling blue Why do I choose to live this way, what should I do Should I question the meaning of my situation, or just stare into the distance without thought Should I find something to do, to insure that I'm not waisting my time Or should I be content just sitting here, feeling fine I don't know how I could feel good and bad at the same time, but somehow I pull it off Sometimes I don't understand myself and it scares me I wonder if everyone else feels the way that I do I wonder if I'm scaring myself for no reason - Maybe I'm normal Maybe there is no normal, maybe there is no meaning Maybe there is a God and he's looking at me right now, waisting my life The only thing I want right now is to find love Everything else is secondary because I feel so alone I hope the girl I'm hitting on feels the same way I hope she realizes that I'm genuine even when I have nothing to say I hope she lets me in so we can be together We might not have a future, but atleast for now we could have eachother Then maybe I wouldn't feel this way I wouldn't have to question my existence, I would be happy living for today
Some parts rhyme. Others don't. I just wanted to get my thoughts down.
-------------------- Smoking my hobbit leaf... Please keep in mind that I am just a human being. Please read my posts carefully and interpret their meaning for yourself.
Edited by hobbitcg (04/29/05 12:45 AM)
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Todcasil
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4/28/05 10:34 pm - untitled i know you smile but if you knew my smiles youd close your eyes and in your mind youd see you and i see this is plenty beautiful.
you can kid around all youd like but ill tell you now i disregard any disregard you send my way- wayward jaypegs collapse in my lens
but the beauty inside is worth all the cries and the notion of you is worth every possibility
i know you smile but if you knew my smiles i know you smile you should know my smile
~Todcasil
-------------------- Men look at themselves and they see flawed humans, we look at women and we see perfect GODDESSES Women look at themselves and they seem utterly human, when looking at men they see proud GODS. ~Casil
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Todcasil
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hobbitcg said: This thread dedicated to writing poems. Don't post unless you're posting a poem that you wrote.
I'm not big on poetry, but I'm bored and I have time to waste.
I'm sitting here thinking about my life I have everything to look forward to and everything to do But I'm still sitting here, not doing anything and feeling blue Why do I choose to live this way, what should I do Should I question the meaning of my situation, or just stare into the distance without thought Should I find something to do, to insure that I'm not waisting my time Or should I be content just sitting here, feeling fine I don't know how I could feel good and bad at the same time, but somehow I pull it off Sometimes I don't understand myself and it scares me I wonder if everyone else feels the way that I do I wonder if I'm scaring myself for no reason - Maybe I'm normal Maybe there is no normal, maybe there is no meaning Maybe there is a God and he's looking at me right now, waisting my life The only thing I want right now is to find love Everything else is secondary because I feel so alone I hope the girl I'm hitting on feels the same way I hope she realizes that I'm genuine even when I have nothing to say I hope she lets me in so we can be together We might not have a future, but atleast for now we could have eachother Then maybe I wouldn't feel this way I wouldn't have to question my existence, I would be happy living for today
Some parts rhyme. Others don't. I just wanted to get my thoughts down.
i really enjoyed reading your mind <3 beautiful poem.
-------------------- Men look at themselves and they see flawed humans, we look at women and we see perfect GODDESSES Women look at themselves and they seem utterly human, when looking at men they see proud GODS. ~Casil
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Re: Write a poem [Re: Todcasil]
#4109502 - 04/29/05 12:50 AM (18 years, 10 months ago) |
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who knows what goes on behind the lines seperateing me from you from the world that surrounds us with some frantic flurry of confusion is a choice to be made by some great mind behind all these scenes which seem to happen only to the untrained eye of the soul precieves eternity and all and everything else happens to be this moment happening as I write right now is the only time to fly in the present is the most on may hope for.
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emptywisdom
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here's a little tiny thing I put down back in november while on 2cI. It's really nothing special sober, but while your tripping it packs a real punch concerning the actions of our nation in regards to Iraq and the war on terror.
Urination of desperate recovery scared dog bites infared lights bombs through the nights baghdad times fall from vultures in the sky
If you're fond of sand dunes
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Todcasil
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i really like that one emptywisdom...
-------------------- Men look at themselves and they see flawed humans, we look at women and we see perfect GODDESSES Women look at themselves and they seem utterly human, when looking at men they see proud GODS. ~Casil
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emptywisdom
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Re: Write a poem [Re: Todcasil]
#4109565 - 04/29/05 01:28 AM (18 years, 10 months ago) |
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thanks, I love to write, even if it does'nt alway turn out pretty.
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Todcasil
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pretty is subjective to the observer
-------------------- Men look at themselves and they see flawed humans, we look at women and we see perfect GODDESSES Women look at themselves and they seem utterly human, when looking at men they see proud GODS. ~Casil
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Mushie_Man
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Re: Write a poem [Re: Todcasil]
#4119290 - 05/01/05 03:48 PM (18 years, 10 months ago) |
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Erased: Kinda queer, Eh?
-------------------- Ecstacy got me standing next to you Getting sentimental as fuck spillin' guts to you We just met But I think I'm in love with you But you're on it too So you tell me you love me too Wake up in the morning like "yo, what the fuck we do?"
Edited by Mushie_Man (05/01/05 04:50 PM)
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HELLA_TIGHT
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my heart hurtz sew bad only a bullet implant will fix me, nah mean??
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PawPaw
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Ya know poems kinda suck
-------------------- Come to Paw Paws place there will be no sleeping tonight Eric just wants to catch reds .. Don?t look back, don?t look back He?s right on your trail Don?t look back, don?t look back He?s just a step away from hell WDYWFM?
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HELLA_TIGHT
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HELLA_TIGHT said: my heart hurtz sew bad only a bullet implant will fix me, nah mean??
hey paw, suck me off while i massage your testis fountains of semen
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Corporal Kielbasa
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Quote:
HELLA_TIGHT said:
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HELLA_TIGHT said: my heart hurtz sew bad only a bullet implant will fix me, nah mean??
hey paw, suck me off while i massage your testis fountains of semen
edit* testi not plural
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PawPaw
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Oh boy a poem
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emptywisdom
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I'm glad to see this thread come back to life.
I'll add a little something in a bit.
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HELLA_TIGHT
Madge the Smoking Vag
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my haiku's crush souls gangster as nemo, fer real i will stab your face
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Mushie_Man
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If you look your rhymes kinda suck why dont you get lost nobody gives a fuck coz` obviously u lack a life probially take your wrists to a knife everynight on your own waiting for a single call on your phone as the knife finally reaches the bone
-------------------- Ecstacy got me standing next to you Getting sentimental as fuck spillin' guts to you We just met But I think I'm in love with you But you're on it too So you tell me you love me too Wake up in the morning like "yo, what the fuck we do?"
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Corporal Kielbasa
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dude you are probably walking home alone playing with your lil bone.....
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Mushie_Man
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SHEIKofSHIITAKE said: dude you are probably walking home alone playing with your lil bone.....
with your penis shown talkin on the phone jacking off to some chick who secretly has a dick but you dont care you have enough seamen to spare
-------------------- Ecstacy got me standing next to you Getting sentimental as fuck spillin' guts to you We just met But I think I'm in love with you But you're on it too So you tell me you love me too Wake up in the morning like "yo, what the fuck we do?"
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Kada
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I like pizza steve, the kind with mushies and pepperoni, I like pizza steve, when i am crying and am lonley.
i got this pizza for free, cause i killed the pizza man, i got this pizza for free, i did it, cause i can.
Whiskey makes me pee.
(no pizza guys were actually harmed during the making of this poem.)
-------------------- ~The Cultivators Motherload~ "I am free, no matter what rules surround me. If I find them tolerable, I tolerate them; if I find them too obnoxious, I break them. I am free because I know that I alone am morally responsible for everything I do." -Robert A. Heinlein "There is no need for temples, no need for complicated philosophies. My brain and my heart are my temples; my philosophy is kindness."-Dalai Lama Live long and prosper.
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Mushie_Man
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The pizza guys dead i shot him in the head when he came to do the door i didnt have the money anymore i said i couldnt pay he said that wasent ok he tryed to take off wid` the pizza the food i wanted for my dinner but as he turned around i shot him to the ground so now im eatin my pizza while tokin` on a spliffa`
-------------------- Ecstacy got me standing next to you Getting sentimental as fuck spillin' guts to you We just met But I think I'm in love with you But you're on it too So you tell me you love me too Wake up in the morning like "yo, what the fuck we do?"
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Re: Write a poem [Re: Kada]
#4119774 - 05/01/05 05:35 PM (18 years, 10 months ago) |
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a lil freestyle
Flashing multicolored spotlights no sense of rhythm or reason and here they come the changing of the season Keep your hands and feet inside the car at all times, clickety clack, a crooked track, open so you can feel the wind, invigorating, heart pounding blood pumping Smile damnit, and don't be afraid to leap, to dive, headfirst from the car and fall, hands, countless attached indirectly to eyes and mouths smiling in love and awe and compassion to guide the plight of pillow, in the end you can rely on yourself alone, stagnation never leads anywhere,, its a sickness, so Leap into the great wide void, for Christ's sake leap!
A million opportunities a second, flashing lights, blinking winking, stop your stinking sinking, Leap, a million chances a second for something lemon fresh and new, thump, thump, LEAP
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There was a man from Beiruit Who had some warts on his root He poured acid on these and now when he pees he holds the darned thing like a flute
-------------------- "Being crazier than a shithouse rat is not sufficient grounds for banishment"
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hevvy_psi
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i dreamt of a place where we sat quietly amid a rushing mass of irrelevent interaction, but i held you, and i'm lying on a beach in soothing rhythmic surf under early morning sky.
-------------------- egocentrism is bangin on the door self-destructive selflessness seeps out from the core alone - eyes closed - an empty room i'm curled on the floor choose nothing, thus deciding all the nothing i've in store.
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Muppet
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I thought this one fit in with this site
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Rating Whore
The oldest job as ye may know - before the days of yore Was not a farmer as some may say, but rather of a whore Twas around with Adam, and with Eve...an even far before Before existance came to be, existed there a whore An even to this modern day...just as in times before Existing still this ancient art...the ancient art of whore But though the game be still the same, it's taken a new roar The slut-like scene is now passe...a whole new breed of whore No longer is money exchanged - tis a thing of ancient lore Ratings now are the game...an hence the RatingWhore
-------------------- Ravings of a Madman
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emptywisdom
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Re: Write a poem [Re: Muppet]
#4120230 - 05/01/05 06:45 PM (18 years, 10 months ago) |
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Here is a rant I wrote for a certain Piscies in my life that I love, It was done about 10 months ago, at a very trying time for me, a bit of a transitional phaze.
Two dimes fall from your pocket like rain falls on a mountain Rain falls from a cloud Clouds of unknowing consume souls which know of the life being had by mountains of holy existance existance is something not to be played with by minds that can not concieve of a thing besides the fate of their own sinking being falling into a hole empty without a thought of light light that only shines upon beings of darkness to consume thier hearts inside a shell of your design you constructed this shell to hold me in know I struggle to break free of the binds and chains most others call me I am defined as restraint and all the while we can't give a shit about holding back a solumn thought so share all that is you being another ripple in an ocean or pond lake of laughter bliss and pleasure come as friends baring gifts as to please in ways material and unreal is there a single soul among us who knows what real is who knows what it truley means to exist in the first place?
My style of poetry is certainly not traditional, love it or hate it, it's how I write, and I think beyond the sometimes weak delivery it can say alot with a few words. Hope someone digs it.
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emptywisdom
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so there's not many poetically minded pubbers I presume?
I feel sad that this thread is not as active as holy crap louis regarding the televison show "family guy" or a slew of others that I don't feel like mentioning.
Post your poetry, we know you write and we are not here to be judgemental, none of us are quite revolutionary at the medium yet. Let's get some words here. Poetry is a blessing for all of us, even if it is relativley weak, I'm quite sure we are all or at least most all of us are amatures. Let it flow! I love reading it, and I doubt I am alone on this.
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emptywisdom
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mattzdope said: Yeah there is a lot of cliche in this and most of my poems. I never claimed to be a poet or original writer. I just write what I feel the best that I can.
This can be said about all of us. Anyone here who is a legendary poet speak now!
I don'nt imagine there will be many legitimate responses to this call.
I liked what you wrote. I've had my addictions with many things, while coke has not been a major problem for me, I have had my issues with it. I love to get amped, it's rare that I turn down a line. I know I need to lay off the stuff but I don't, and always wish I did. You are a strong person if you can leave this substance behind after haveing a dance with it. It's not easy.
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emptywisdom
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I'll slit the throat of every emotion. Making damn sure that I'm heard.
I love this simple line, it says alot with few words, which is what I look for in poetry, it's powerfull, It evokes passion, everything good writeing should be.
Sad to think its come to this. After everything I'll surely miss. Nothing more than your sweet face. This is more than I can take. Yet I seem to stumble on.
I like the transition from the "miss" line to the 'nothing" line. In the way I precieve it, it takes two points and puts them together to make a third, which is a major direction I take in my own writeing. Don't know if you intended this, but the effect was made, and I like it.
I can relate to this whole rant here. There was no child involved in my case but regarding the most serious love of my life I could write somethign simillar. Man I thought this girl was going to be with me forefever, and it was so short lived. I don't buy into the idea of a "soul mate" but if there ever was one for me I know exactly who it was. She made me happier than any one I've ever known, at the same time, she has provoked more furry and strife in me than anyone I have ever known. I see alot of love and frustration in what you wrote above, and I can really feel that.
This is a big part of why I love poetry, and why I think this thread needs to be expanded upon.
afterall, I'm not the only one who feels around here.
keep the words comeing.
Love and blessings sent to all
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emptywisdom
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The girl I wrote about in that poem is the ONLY woman who could ever make me feel like I was the biggest piece of trash in the world to the point where I wanted to die. Then in the next moment make me feel like I was god.
this was an identical experience for me. verbatim, how it was. Recindiling is a realllllly long shot, and I'm trying to move on instead of hope for that. She has herself a man who she is happy with, thinking about getting maried and having kids, actually, and I can't get ahold of her anymore. we split while we where on maui, which was suposed to be a romantic fantisy for us, but after a couple months turned pretty shity. She eventually found someone she could be happy with, (which I am glad, truth be told, we were not exactly good for eachother, and I'm just happy to know she is doing well) and I left the islands to come back here to the mainland. Last I heard she went to kauai and they are homeless and everything, so it's pretty much imposible to contact her. I'm moveing on, and yeah, it's a motherfucker, as I've never met anyone else whou could look me staright in the eye and tell me to my face exactly what I was feeling, thinking, and about to do, and I don't expect I will ever encounter that again, but It's gone, and I have to keep truckin'. So all is well that ends well. I'll end up with who I'm supposed to be with as will she, things are not terible for me now, though not desireable, everything will get better in time.
As Bjork so efectivley stated in her tune, "all is full of love"!
I belive this, all is good, I'm feeing great and sending love to all who want to recieve it!
Peace and blessings, and Keep writeing!
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Edited by matt (02/14/09 05:45 PM)
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kaiowas
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I wrote this one a while ago
when i think of all the beautiful things in the world and I try to put them into words i can write and write and write yet words are not enough i imagine your face your mind and your heart everything that is, was, and will always be is outlined in your eyes
so when i look around and see a flower and blue sky, a shining star the void in everything is filled with your love
I surrender, I imagine, I understand and I will never forget
-------------------- Annnnnnd I had a light saber and my friend was there and I said "you look like an indian" and he said "you look like satan" and he found a stick and a rock and he named the rock ooga booga and he named the stick Stick and we both thought that was pretty funny. We got eaten alive by mosquitos but didn't notice til the next day. I stepped on some glass while wading in the swamp and cut my foot open, didn't bother me til the next day either....yeah it was a good time, ended the night by buying some liquor for minors and drinking nips and going to he diner and eating chicken fingers, and then I went home and went to bed.
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Re: Write a poem [Re: kaiowas]
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THE KRAT BARON
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Re: Write a poem [Re: kaiowas]
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Very very nice poem man. I can relate very well to it.
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THE KRAT BARON
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kaiowas
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"I play it by the day man."
thats all you can do man! hope things go well
-------------------- Annnnnnd I had a light saber and my friend was there and I said "you look like an indian" and he said "you look like satan" and he found a stick and a rock and he named the rock ooga booga and he named the stick Stick and we both thought that was pretty funny. We got eaten alive by mosquitos but didn't notice til the next day. I stepped on some glass while wading in the swamp and cut my foot open, didn't bother me til the next day either....yeah it was a good time, ended the night by buying some liquor for minors and drinking nips and going to he diner and eating chicken fingers, and then I went home and went to bed.
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THE KRAT BARON
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Re: Write a poem [Re: kaiowas]
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emptywisdom
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I went to a new place and decide to start over again from scratch. I know no one here, all my friends are either in seattle or hawaii, while i'm now here in kansas city. I'm here on my own. It's the only way things can work for me I think, to just leave that behind, take the good I can from the experience, and move on. It's hard because I've not been able to find anyone here I can really relate too so far but I'm staying possitive and , afterall, summer's almost here, and come June I start to travel, and I'll meet all new people and get back into the life I really love, which is that of a road tramp. It's never going to be easy, but I think I've got my head on as straight as It can be after all of this and things have nowhere to go but up, so I'm doing fine and actually excited about the comeing summer, I going to hit some festi's then it's rainbow time! YES! I love summer. I missed last years rainbow 'cause I was on maui, Won't happen this year. I'm psyched, all is good!
Personal setbacks are simply triumphs yet to be precieved. although my heart has been shatered, I feel good about where I go from here, and know that nothing has happened that was not supposed to, everything in my life is a blessing, even if it is hard to precieve it that way at the moment.
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Todcasil
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I'm waiting for you to come back home and say hello I'm on your list of boys you've sang sweetly to shore i woke up yesterday and saw your face beautifully framed remembered the words you sent out breaking the wall you so patiently made from dust and bones promises of sand for fear of his and your own tears kissing your pillow tonight
time is easy to lose in the embrace of the one that you love when you fall to sleep tonight your eyes will take forever to close...
the time will look for you as the numbers scroll to the infinite measurement youll count the moments off as they bleed from the infinite source of it all
I'm waiting for you to be in my arms and say nothing the list of things you keep has been burned and released i woke up during the night and saw your face next to mine remembered the worlds that we lived in at one time of dust and bones promises of sand the fear of living and our own tears kissing the pillow at night
time is easy to lose in the embrace of the one that you love when i woke up tonight i didn't ask what time that it was
-------------------- Men look at themselves and they see flawed humans, we look at women and we see perfect GODDESSES Women look at themselves and they seem utterly human, when looking at men they see proud GODS. ~Casil
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Re: Write a poem [Re: Todcasil]
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These incredulous cognitions cranked out by the masses fears and feelings flow from emotional impasses dreaded dirges divulged and dragged on Soul shattering symbolism about the moon and the sun cliches cascading so copiously and the burden of boredom bears down upon me please pardon the prattle and pun on the poem but Dear do leave your diary at home
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THE KRAT BARON
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-------------------- m00nshine is currently vacationing in Maui. Rumor has it he got rolled by drunken natives and is currently prostituting himself in order to pay for airfare back to the mainland but he's having trouble juggling a hairon addiction. He won't be back for a long while.
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Todcasil
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this whole website is a living diary
-------------------- Men look at themselves and they see flawed humans, we look at women and we see perfect GODDESSES Women look at themselves and they seem utterly human, when looking at men they see proud GODS. ~Casil
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THE KRAT BARON
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emptywisdom said: so there's not many poetically minded pubbers I presume?
I feel sad that this thread is not as active as holy crap louis regarding the televison show "family guy" or a slew of others that I don't feel like mentioning.
Post your poetry, we know you write and we are not here to be judgemental, none of us are quite revolutionary at the medium yet. Let's get some words here. Poetry is a blessing for all of us, even if it is relativley weak, I'm quite sure we are all or at least most all of us are amatures. Let it flow! I love reading it, and I doubt I am alone on this.
I suppose I could dig up a few more of mine for ya
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Could it be Love?
I find myself in such a place of which I don?t well know A place as warm as sunshine, and gentle as the snow A place that is not of this world, at least not of the flesh Mixed emotions and unknown thoughts weaving quite a mesh Within this realm of disbelief confusion?s all abound And yet it?s not unpleasant, but rather quite profound It?s a feeling of a joyful sort?quite possibly much more But what exactly it is I feel ? this I can?t be sure For these are all new things to me, and a bit undaunting Even so, I wish to know just why it?s so enchanting Could it be I know the truth and simply won?t admit it? Or am I just imagining? Should I just forget it? Exploring this ? a strange new land ? proves to be un-nerving For even now I speak of how I might just be deserving Somewhere though, deep down inside, it?s simply not that clear Could it be I ostracize completely out of fear? Or maybe I?m just seeing more then there is to see By complicating things so much I increase the mystery My instincts say I mustn?t think, but instead I should just feel But doing so denies my mind?it?s all so corporeal I truly wish for a quick fix ? perhaps a little peek To know for once and for all the answers which I seek Life, it seems, works not like that?or so it has been said And so you see uncertainty rears it?s ugly head What should I do? What should I say? Where for shall I go? Should I keep my thoughts to myself, or let my feelings show? Either way I take a risk ? neither seem that great But oh to do not one thing more but sit around and wait Is surely not the thing to do, and so I must act now But one mistake is all it takes to break my solemn vow For so much rests on this one choice that I can?t be too sure If my heart?s in the right place or my intentions pure And what of she - this distant dream ? will I too be accepted? And if it?s shown and answer known, would I be rejected? But an answer ?yes? I?m afraid, would be a bigger beast I?m certainly not some gallant knight?and that?s to say the least With questions piling higher still I can?t help but wonder why Such a pain and such a thrill would be cursed on such a guy And so I sit and ponder still not knowing what to do In hopes that things will work out themselves the way they sometimes do
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Sweet Anticipation
Time standing still, in sweet anticipation One thought in mind, in profound contemplation Problems dissolve exclusively for me For the time being, complete harmony Silently waiting for the one I desire Feelings grow deeper, emotions fly higher Sitting here still, with one thought in mind Cherishing memories left far behind Remembering a time, when mine eyes first begot A being so perfect, it defied logic thought And now, this angel of heaven, is coming to me Still waiting arival, in complete harmony One thought in mind, interwoven with love Have my dreams finally come true, have I found the dove? No longer just pigeons, have I found the best?!? Is my search finally over? Can I finally rest? Sitting alone, with memories from the past Praying to God, this will always last
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Too Intense to Describe
Another boring fuckin night sitting all alone. Another night goes drifting by without you on the phone. Another moment overlooked because your selfishness. You fail to satisy my needs...and now I'm getting pissed. How often am I there for you, with nothing in return? Always sayin I'll be there for you...when will I ever learn? It seems you only use me when life has got you down. And I always come a runnin - all you gotta do is frown. But how much more will I give out, without you giving back? How much pain can one heart take before it starts to crack? I feel I'm quickly closing 'pon the point of no return. All I need is one more reason...one more little burn. Cause I'm tired of falling victim of your crazy voodoo spell. I wish you'd just fuckin die and burn and rot in hell. And don't you dare look at me like that - you know that you deserve it. All you do is torture me, and still I think you're worth it. I've always thought you'd come through some day, You'd just grow up and finally say The things that I've longed to hear for years The only words that can stop these tears. And yet, somehow I can already see That these things I wish are fantasy. You'll never see me the same way I see you. You'll never let my dreams come true. And even worse: you'll never set me free. Cause you've made it clear that you need me. You need me to be there when you're feeling blue. You need a shoulder to cry on...someone to comfort you. You need me for all the things your man won't provide, And because I can't stand to say "no" I always abide. And when I sit and I listen to all your woeful cries, I can't help but see the thanks in your eyes. And then I think to myself: "some day she'll see" "Someday she'll realise just what she's got in me" And then, soon enough, the moment fades clean away. And again, once again, you push me away. That's when I slip away, back out of your sight. And prepare once again for one more lonely night. Another night sitting here thinking about you, And whether or not it'll ever be through. Sometimes I can't tell what it is that I feel. Is it love? Is it hate? ..... It's all so surreal. I can't tell anymore if you're even a friend. Most days it don't matter...I just want it to end. I want you to leave. I wanna break free from your spell. All that you do is just put me through hell. But, oh what a hell...what a painful bliss! You touch like none other...I just can't resist. You cause me such anguish...yet, also such glee. Like a tsunami of emotions crashing on me. And although I know not how you effect, My time spend with you I just can't regret. And whether we wind up together, or are forever apart. I know, deep inside, you'll always stay in my heart.
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End of Romance
Once upon a time there was happiness At one point in time there was pleasure But they?re now in the past, unable to last And not a one of them do I treasure
My heart has been thoroughly trampled And the walls are now being re-built The passion once strong, has long since been gone And my love is beginning to wilt
What did I do to deserve this? Why should I be in such pain? Just cause some young lass kicked me out on my ass When there was nothing farther to gain?
Blinded was I by her beauty Unable to see the abuse What once was great lust has fallen like dust Leaving nothing behind but the noose
I know now where I messed up By being entrapped in deceit In well over my head, caught in some web Refusing to admit defeat
But now those days are behind me Leaving me be to let stew Consumed with the hate of the ironic fate Of choosing a girl so untrue
How could I have been so ignorant? Why didn?t I see it before? This buxom young dame who seemed rather tame Was nothing but a skanky ass whore
^^^^^^^^^ that's pretty much how my love life always seems to go
but oh well...such is life I suppose :shrugs:
-------------------- Ravings of a Madman
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