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First line last line poety. * 1
    #17471852 -

Ok Shroominites I know there are some poets out there. This is the last line first line poetry thread. The poem below ends with a line and the next person has to use the last line for there first line.

The snow is falling down
once again it makes me frown
nothing to do but light a blunt
and think about next years mushroom hunt

Sometime in the spring
when the birds start to sing
Ill light another blunt
and go on my mushroom hunt

And find the things I like the most
a Gymonpilus on its host
or just a good edible
that will make life incredible.


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Don't read books study life then write books
we are nothing but atoms trying to figure out what atoms are.


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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Eddeee]
    #17476218 -

That will make life incredible
if our skins where shredable
to grow them back again
in a totally different skin


To live for change
so we can arrange
everything that comes our way
only if we want that day


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Don't read books study life then write books
we are nothing but atoms trying to figure out what atoms are.


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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Eddeee]
    #17480910 -

only if we want that day
to come where I have to say
please write a line or four
and if you want write some more

so come on First line last line
don;t make it all mine
come on its lonely in here
cuz only 15 people have peered


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Don't read books study life then write books
we are nothing but atoms trying to figure out what atoms are.


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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Eddeee] * 1
    #17484874 -

cuz only 15 people have peered
straight into the bright new day
of all of those that dared to stray;
only two remain

cast down was one
touched too harshly by the sun
the second wandered longer
forever to be stronger

cast your eyes upwards
live no more as drunkards
stare long enough and you'll find truth
or forever remain existing in youth

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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Stopwhispering]
    #17485233 -

( that was awesome thanks for your mind )


Or forever remain existing in youth
because there you think you'll find truth
when in truth aging reveals the unknown path
of good and evil and all its wrath

or perhaps its better to just lie still
take another blotter just for the thrill
just to watch the walls breath
while inside you secretly grieve.


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Don't read books study life then write books
we are nothing but atoms trying to figure out what atoms are.


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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Eddeee]
    #17488951 -

While inside you secretly grieve
The plastic smile remains still
There is more than they perceive
Your mind decayed, your soul ill.

The pain lasts for days and days
There's no sun to light your path
When all the world is made of grays
There must come divine inner wrath.

Inferno rising, destroying the pain
Storm of swords, killing the liar
Crush it, you have everything to gain
When purified by sacred fire.

(inspired by my depressive episodes)

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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Eddeee]
    #17489041 -

while you secretly grieve, the voices dont leave,
heard like breeze through trees, this voice is never pleased
the more innocent bleed the more it seems to me
that the voices that i mean are all just a dream
in between the seams of this never ending scheme

How charade are all the bystanders adding their taxes
while those who stand ready sharpen their axes
money coffers will be made into burnt offers
igniting a blaze inextinguishable by water
burning away that damn whore, Babylons daughter.


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:jah: everything i say is only a satirical joke, nothing serious man!:jah:



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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: AcidBath]
    #17490359 -

Burning away that damn whore, Babylons daughter
Under house arrest (aint that oughta?)
But with mansions like these
Where we do as we please
Is it any wonder no-one yet caught her?

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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Buster_Brown]
    #17490550 -

Is it any wonder no one yet caught her
nor sought the essence of her lure
her eyes looking deep inside you
your one of the the very few

to gaze upon her unknown world
deep inside you knew that girl
you and her had it all
but that was before the fall

and now like the each day
she has gone her own way
just to be the past
that you thought would always last

(In regards to Apep the wanderer very nice}

when purified by sacred fire
brings forth a mind that keeps itself wired
and the things we thought of most
were lost in some one else  post

so I look and the white and grey
hoping for the day
the sun shines again
then broken heart will mend   



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Don't read books study life then write books
we are nothing but atoms trying to figure out what atoms are.


Edited by Eddeee (01/03/13 10:46 AM)

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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Eddeee]
    #17494271 -

Then broken heart will mend
Because of the garden of the soul
That you did graciously tend
Planting love in that great hole

Gentle rains do come, healing
And new life erupts forth
As the scabs fade away, peeling
Filled with hope, I turn north

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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Apep]
    #17494442 -

Filled with hope I turn north
then think of days a head
and what they may bring forth
I remembered what you said

I remember those words
like it was yesterday
when we sat and ate cheese curds
and you wanted to play

you said those were the good ol days
that was when we had it right
and we knew our ways
toward  the purple light


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Don't read books study life then write books
we are nothing but atoms trying to figure out what atoms are.


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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Eddeee]
    #17497258 -

toward the purple light
with no end in sight
I look for the good fight
to end my plight.

And whats wrong with you
and all that acting blue
YOU act like nothing new
did you think it was all true

you did not have to believe
nor did you have to see
in order to be free
you just have to leave.


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Don't read books study life then write books
we are nothing but atoms trying to figure out what atoms are.


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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Eddeee]
    #17500344 -

You just have to leave
when they all start to seethe.
Their green faces are mean
and melting like dreams,
and you just want to scream
Cause the pain in your mind is affecting your spleen!
and your shit eating grin is too plasticene!
They know, and the scene is becoming obscene!
You gotta run like the wind!Fly away!Flee!
Believe me, the world is not as it seems!


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The moon is out, and it's time for experiments...
                                                                                             

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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Biopunk]
    #17500597 -

Believe me the world is not as it seems
its all someones dream
which makes you think you can grow
but really you don't know
you think you can but you can;t
so all there is to do is rant
about how cruel the world can be
if you could you'd set yourself free

when you find out about all this
it will just make you piss
and make  you feel blue
like getting over the flue
so good luck don't get stuck
all you have to do is not give a fuck


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Don't read books study life then write books
we are nothing but atoms trying to figure out what atoms are.


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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Eddeee]
    #17501369 -

All you have to do is not give a fuck
Get an inflatable pool all filled up with ducks
and leave it to sit in the back of a truck
Now dive in as they fit and get down in the muck
And grab up some shit. 2 handfulls, you must!
Then say with a grin,"I GIVE SHITS, NOT FUCKS!"


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The moon is out, and it's time for experiments...
                                                                                             

Edited by Biopunk (01/05/13 11:20 AM)

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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Biopunk]
    #17501914 -

Then say with a grin I give shits not fucks
but wouldn't  that just be bad luck
If the girl of your dreams was there
and she told you "that is just not fair"
you have to listen because she knows
what your  thinking really blows
isn't it better to shake your head
look  around and head off to bed
to dream again of future days
that will bring better lays


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Don't read books study life then write books
we are nothing but atoms trying to figure out what atoms are.


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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Eddeee]
    #17506689 -

that will bring you better lays
but then you can change your ways
and turn in a different direction
look in a mirror and make the connection

go to collage
and get some knowledge
buy some land to save a tree
to love the earth that is key 

your in charge now
so its up to you what to allow
In this new life you have won
now its time to have some fun


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Don't read books study life then write books
we are nothing but atoms trying to figure out what atoms are.


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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Eddeee]
    #17508893 -

Now its time to have some fun
Its my birthday man sun of a gun
another day another year
goes by so fast it makes you fear
so count your blessings
and remove those battle dressings
put a way the good fight
and lets all go party tonight


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Don't read books study life then write books
we are nothing but atoms trying to figure out what atoms are.


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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Eddeee]
    #17510673 -

And let's all go party tonight
Two days pass and you hand me a light
I drag it in and blow out the tar
Some how we left a deer in the in the car
The mushrooms are missing the the lesbians are still kissing
The night will close in and the stars will still grin
Psilocybin still dabbles in the blood, LSD still simmers on my chin


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My solitude...
My shield...
My armour...

TESTED
WITH
FULL
FORCE

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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: circastes]
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(nice thanks for that)

Psilocybin still dabbles in the blood,LSD still simmers on my chin
and in the morning i realized it was not a sin
except in the minds of those you call kin.
wow what a party last night
I never saw so many a sight
almost walked into the light
but they all said don't go
stay here and watch the show
if you do then you will know
I opened my eye
and I started to fly
and I never asked why
But in the end
my mind did bend
and my soul did mend
and all is well
it wasn't hell
it was a good sell
in which I bought
a little thought
on a little paper that I sought


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Don't read books study life then write books
we are nothing but atoms trying to figure out what atoms are.


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