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Re: First line last line poetry. [Re: Eddeee]
#17967627 - 03/17/13 07:46 AM (11 years, 1 month ago) |
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I just have to wake up And I do And 70 virgins are touching me My feet and everything else too I am confused Was it me that was a 'terorist'? like they say happens when you Light a fuse A butterly I would rather choose Because now I not know not where now who
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Re: First line last line poetry. [Re: zzripz]
#17969046 - 03/17/13 02:09 PM (11 years, 1 month ago) |
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Because now I not know not where now who Hmmm you must be huffing to much glue I don't think those were Virgins touching you for the simple fact virgins have no clue and really do not know what to do except just lay there like an old shoe wondering "what is all that goo"?
Are you a Terrorist probably not nor virgins wondering about that stuff that feels like snot Just in a dream where all of them are hot and all you have to do is take your best shot because 70 virgins is a huge lot. way to many to trot. But what the hell that is why you fought.
As for me I like mine with some experience you see those are the ones that make me happy as can be A Virgin bores the hell out of me a virgin prostitute should always be free Her pimp should be ashamed for charging a fee and feel the punch of a well aimed knee To do a Virgin I'd rather sleep in a tree
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Re: First line last line poetry. [Re: Eddeee]
#17970613 - 03/17/13 07:50 PM (11 years, 1 month ago) |
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I just have to wake up! snap the fuck out of it... pull my chi chord tighter. Got to shed this techno-muck, transcend, rise up out of it, light my top up like a lighter.
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Re: First line last line poetry. [Re: Biopunk]
#17970794 - 03/17/13 08:31 PM (11 years, 1 month ago) |
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To do a virgin i'd rather sleep in a tree for 40 days and 40 nights, as high as I can be. I'd purify my mind and body, and set my spirit free. No bed to rest my earthly body, I learn to be a leaf. In this state my mind roams far, and my third eye can see. I become the concept of conception, creation energy. The leaf curls and dries and floats down from the tree. A life, a light that lives inside, rests now in a seed. Form and spirit join again, new dimension, new world tree. All things, all times, everyone and everywhere are we. Purpose is a paradox, and life is a cycle, evolving endlessly.
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Re: First line last line poetry. [Re: Biopunk]
#17972511 - 03/18/13 03:48 AM (11 years, 1 month ago) |
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Purpose is a paradox, and life is a cycle, evolving endlessly. Maybee but you just broke a rule its called 'first line last line poetry'? for this I should put you over my knee And whack your arse relentlessly but on this occasion because i love chaos if it is kind i will rather love you dearly and not mind but be aware when you jump into a deep and swirling pool to always follow the ruddy rule lol
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Re: First line last line poetry. [Re: zzripz]
#17975715 - 03/18/13 06:35 PM (11 years, 1 month ago) |
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To Always follow the ruddy rule Laugh out loud and now I grab the royal shroud and Knight thee keeper of the rule here are the keys to the executive pool You will have to take a secret Oath and this may mean that some may loath what you have to do as keeper of the rule
First line last line poetry how hard can that be no other rule to keep in mind say what you wish, all is fine say it what ever in a 110 lines nothing to deep no topic to weak as long as we fallow rule number 1
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Re: First line last line poetry. [Re: Eddeee]
#17985767 - 03/20/13 05:55 PM (11 years, 30 days ago) |
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as long as we follow rule number 1 say anything i want and its just for fun? i see shroomers above talking virgin cum i came to learn about the oysters and the swiss its go me thinking i have found bliss this place is awesome and i love it so makes me happier than three lines of blow
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Re: First line last line poetry. [Re: jaygee]
#17986721 - 03/20/13 08:43 PM (11 years, 30 days ago) |
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Makes me happier than three lines of blow but when that it gone Ill have nothing left to show and nowhere to go but back to the grow ill have to take it slow
and everyone is just having a tizzy fit Thought it would be different now that the world has quit time to spit better yet i'll just split on the way Ill yell shit shit shit
Turn up the tunes and listen to the song for get about your head and what is right or wrong Think about being strong it wont take long then take another hit off the bong
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Re: First line last line poetry. [Re: Eddeee]
#17995554 - 03/22/13 03:46 PM (11 years, 28 days ago) |
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then take another hit off the bong and sink down into a mushy sponge the one you feel you need to get along through many lanes of life we move this way that corridors with windows blue light hazy glow round the bend you bump into someone their face is radiant tears fall you hug and share stories travelling here and there they listen as Bach's music enfolds you without a care you bathe in wet eyes
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Re: First line last line poetry. [Re: zzripz]
#17996516 - 03/22/13 07:31 PM (11 years, 28 days ago) |
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Without a care you bath in wet eyes it is always good to make new ties with people of kinder spirit make you no longer fear it expressing ones self from just a simple elf They say spring is here and the time is almost near to head for the hills batten up the seals and look for my fungus friends cause the money will trend my days will be, head to the ground and I will have found a morel or two or three the spring will set me free and at night after the hunt Ill be in a tent smoking a blunt But for now I'll have to pass because right now winter is kicking springs ass
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Re: First line last line poetry. [Re: Eddeee]
#18384804 - 06/07/13 07:40 PM (10 years, 10 months ago) |
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But right now winters is kicking springs ass but that won't last and summer is coming really fast so I'll bring this thread back alive even though some of you might sigh and who knows someone might try to right a line or two or three and set your mind free to write about a tree I usually have better things to do than sit on the putor writing you and things about school but there is a lull in the season it always happens with out reason but now that it is not freezin and the sun is shining its time to quit whining and start the good dining with all the shrooms you have found with your neck to the ground and your mushroom hound so soon Ill be off again wondering the hills with my friend until mushroom season end
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Re: First line last line poetry. [Re: Eddeee] 1
#18412507 - 06/13/13 08:01 AM (10 years, 10 months ago) |
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Until mushroom season end I have no want, Nor need to spend...
I take my fill, My want and will.....
To summers stir,I owe a life No troubled fortune No radiant wife....
As morning breaks And tides do flow, I take a breath And colours grow
Waves in wind And rays in sync How happy I am No thoughts to think...
And now I leave For distant shores No possible outcome From a land of spores
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( nice thanks for that)
From the land of spores and hung up opium whores It is the land of chili and a whole lot of pill billy They think it is proper to steal all your copper and any thing you got until they get shot In this land I do not understand how one can get a pill unless there is a deal with the doctors that prescribe who are fueling this drive So they can get high and maybe even die I know its all about the buck so that is why they don't give a fuck I know I know it cost a lot to put gas in that yacht
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Re: First line last line poetry. [Re: Eddeee]
#18461083 - 06/23/13 02:01 PM (10 years, 9 months ago) |
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To put gas in that yacht, to cut the grass around the yard, Wear a fake and silly smile, Dream of a new BMW for awhile, forget yourself in the delusion, feel your lungs with the polution, inject yourself with mindless tv, eat another tasteless kiwi, wake up to sweat during the night, because of money worries fright, We have been through this loop before, let's eat some shrooms,open the door
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Lets eat some shrooms, open the door and think of life before eat some more then hit the floor
What is to become of me when this door I see is suppose to set me free If I drink this tea
Ive been here a lot my battles have all been fought everything has been tought is it time to take another shot?
To see if there is more behind this psychic door even though my heart's been tore It all seems such a bore
In thease older years when you have lost all your fears you have shed all your tears because you have no more peers
Shrooms is there a new day behind the door you say will it be a better lay or a Whole better way
to do things right? or an unknown light with unknown sight or my brain wrapped to tight
I ve been here before even when I took more its the same ol door with the same ol floor
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Re: First line last line poetry. [Re: Eddeee]
#18901062 - 09/27/13 11:04 PM (10 years, 6 months ago) |
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its the same ol door with same ol floor but i looked above and aske for more and more did i get I eally got lit summer is gone and im back to this song time to get this thread restarted it was becasue of mushrooms we parted the season and all but now its fall and time to do some ryming about a thing or two its been a good season and for a lot of reason The mushrooms where everywhere growing alone and in piar grwoing in tres growing everywhere It was a good year so many shroom I had to cheer but now fall is here and I fear all my shroom frineds will be gone and I'll be back on this computor way to long But Im back for now don't ask how Im back to write the first line last line and hopefully make a ryme and all you new poets that don't know it goin on in in here its even ok to sin
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Re: First line last line poetry. [Re: Eddeee]
#18901519 - 09/28/13 04:55 AM (10 years, 6 months ago) |
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in here its even ok to sin and suddenly I am back in I been bemushroomed possessed down in the depths shpongled I have learnt quiet isn't quiet but full of strange sounds as I went down and round and round through pathways that cannot be explained try to film this and all will be in vain ho ho a merry merry ho cow fields are full of magic ya know amongst the dung are the places they grows if you understand this riddle then you will know~~~
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Re: First line last line poetry. [Re: zzripz]
#18904954 - 09/28/13 10:48 PM (10 years, 6 months ago) |
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Then you will know after seeing that after glow oh yes you will know Im sure it will put on quite a show so there no way you would not know but then again they may not show and you may feel very low and then you can throw what you know out to some crow so it can glow then go buy some good blow and a really good Hoe and off we go to forget about my wo and let the halucination flow so I can go and and call every one bro but hey what do I know
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Re: First line last line poetry. [Re: Eddeee]
#18905874 - 09/29/13 05:34 AM (10 years, 6 months ago) |
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but hey what do I know you know know and it can go as far as it can go and when it gets to the end thats the beginning and so it goes you know?
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Re: First line last line poetry. [Re: zzripz]
#18944151 - 10/07/13 10:45 AM (10 years, 6 months ago) |
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You know? This is what I know I am Human I am the center I am the center of all things WHY? Because I think about it I comtemplate it I try and figure it out It matters to me Where I belong In the Grand skem of things I am the only species that thinks that thinks this way Therefor it is Truth Truth has meaning If I where not here it would all be meaningless Therefor I Me I am Human I am the center
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