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Re: First line last line poetry. [Re: GilbertC06]
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I AM NOT EVEN A PERSON
I awoke from another reality cursin
what the hell what the fuck
this one sure sucks
It just my anger
no offense to any stranger
This week has been lost
at a very high cost
I don't want to talk about it
I just want to pout about it
and bitch and complain
I don't want to explain
I just want to rant and rave
I want to go live in a cave
You have NO idea how I feel
living a life that is not real
sometimes I want out real bad
I  get so so very sad
that at times
when I can't find the rhymes
to what I need to do right now
I should throw in the towel
but I won't do it
I won't put up with that shit
don't take me down
don't make me frown
Im just looking up now
I know how
and where I need to go
so my life once again, will glow


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Don't read books study life then write books
we are nothing but atoms trying to figure out what atoms are.


Edited by Eddeee (02/09/13 04:50 PM)

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Re: First line last line poetry. [Re: Eddeee]
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So my life once again will glow
When I find a means to piggyback the flow
Of societies relentless stride
The constraints of its binary tide

I need to navigate a path
Through its red threaded wrath
To feel the warmth in personal rays
Whilst calmly respecting its ways

Forever standing tall in frivolously starched poses
My mind dances and frolicks amongst secreted roses


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i became fragmented, small and then slowly began to blossom into a more coherent, steady structure .

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Re: First line last line poetry. [Re: Expiscator]
    #17776142 -

My mind dances and frolicks amongst secreted roses
But the thorns tear my flesh
And when I cry
they say I imagine it
They say I dont know my pain
That it is not real


I'm not even a person
I am a non-person
They go into the jungle
And with their flaming metal spiders
seek out the land of the non people
spewing toxic curdling oil
Into the fresh waters
I am non
Non
Non
Non
my mask is without eyes ears lips nose

Edited by zzripz (02/10/13 06:38 AM)

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Re: First line last line poetry. [Re: zzripz]
    #17776674 -

( zz rips thanks for that some times I can relate nice )


My mask is without eyes ears lips nose
my heart is silent i can't feel my toes
I must be dead and this is hell
I lost my head and cast a spell
That silence my world
and lost my girl
and now life is all a dream
living strife it always seems
no where to rest my head
this must be like being dead
I roam the night in my search
I look for light high in my perch
I don't know what I am anymore
a broken human lying on the floor


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Don't read books study life then write books
we are nothing but atoms trying to figure out what atoms are.


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Re: First line last line poetry. [Re: Eddeee]
    #17782062 -

A broken human lying on the floor
Surrounded by one thousand doors
Out of one a young boy appears
His cheeks freshly flushed
Showing his fresh young years
He kicks my pieces absentmindedly
Is he me he kicks
Is he me?

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Re: First line last line poetry. [Re: zzripz]
    #17791741 -

Is he Me
Or does he just want to be me
not again
another friend
trying to be me
I do not see
why being me
that is something you want to be
when you have yourself you see
so stop trying to be me
be a tree
or a flea
or a guy named Steve
but stop being me
I hope you agree
that being me
is not what you should be
You should be you
and I should be me
so that we will agree,


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Don't read books study life then write books
we are nothing but atoms trying to figure out what atoms are.


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Re: First line last line poetry. [Re: Eddeee]
    #17794584 -

so that we will agree,

I see a Tree and it beckons me
it is purple and its trunk is velvety
within its bark run arteries of
Blood like my blood
and I long to touch this vision of mine
to let its canopy's shadow
gently caress my skin
its silence is the rustle of leaves

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Re: First line last line poetry. [Re: zzripz]
    #17794749 -

Its silence is the rustle of leaves
They shed themselves for it to breathe
Yearning they to be returned
Into the ground where all has burned

Laid across the fallen land
The peat and pyres make a stand
With ashen souls they feed the tree
Which breathes new life into it's leaves


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You can't teach AwesumDawg lame tricks

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Re: First line last line poetry. [Re: Tryscair]
    #17795864 -

Which breathes new life into its leaves
From the particles that lay beneath
Broken shards of glass
The chance to live again is here at last
I am renewed
Faith restored
Dead promises
The empty knock at the door
I can make sense of it all
The sand beneath my feet
the quiver of my lip
The books with symbols in them
The moldy piece of bread in the pantry.
The rustle of dead leaves
The green apple you never took the time to eat
The grey slab of concrete
They are still here, but you aren't, I wasn't

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Re: First line last line poetry. [Re: GilbertC06]
    #17797464 -

They are still here, but you aren't, I wasn't
I missed it  and now I have resent
1000 views for my amuse
and 88 post
I give you all a toast
my glass raise high
for all who gave it a try
to write some lines
and make some rhymes
for the whole world to see
it helps the mind go free
that first line last line poetry


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Don't read books study life then write books
we are nothing but atoms trying to figure out what atoms are.


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Re: First line last line poetry. [Re: Eddeee]
    #17800259 -

That first line last line poetry
I’m a deep dreamer
Chasing and watching dragon clouds fly
Streaking across the darkness of my room, so high.
Your smell so bitterly sweet and vapour so white
I choose to live without sunlight
The nights become longer
But some say that I would become stronger
Life is like a gamble
And I try to scramble
Cause the precious days that I thought were the best
Nearly laid me to my rest
I feel so conflicted
But this quest is up to me
If I chose and want to be free
My sleep of recklessness, with no dragon clouds, no spoons or tinfoil
Tossing and turning late at night, my hair beginning to coil
Sometimes I felt that there wouldn’t be a new tomorrow
Because I believed that there was nothing else but more pain and sorrow
I told everyone a crafty lie
And thankfully the painful withdrawal went by
But the lord knew that I wouldn’t change
Everything seemed so dull and strange
Kicking bad habits is no laughing game, for it’s pure pain
Cause there nothing else that you can gain

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Re: First line last line poetry. [Re: 245willow19]
    #17800986 -

Cause there nothing else that you can gain
So my breath purples the night air
And the spiral moon glows around
Silhouettes the image of myself
In the mirrors which change into
Smaller and smaller facets of my pain
Receding down holes of grasping
Hands that sex me and hex me
Into realms of ecstatic despair

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Re: First line last line poetry. [Re: zzripz]
    #17809449 -

Into realms of ecstatic despair
I wandered  just for a moment
when I herd the news
Michal Leary was dead
He died on the 7th
The leprechaun we called him
a little man bowed skinny legs
and a grin
He was a drunk.
he drank every day
for 30 years
because of a woman
but it was spinal cancer
not a rotten liver
that took him away
that what they said
He died in a hospital
not in the run down
camper he called home
but that is where
they found him
Laying cold and unable to
walk or talk
So they took him to
the hospital
He was gone in 4 days
At least he died warm
his friend said.
so upon this news
I pour a pint
and raise my glass
in one last toast
to you Michal Leary
Rest in peace Bro


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Don't read books study life then write books
we are nothing but atoms trying to figure out what atoms are.


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Re: First line last line poetry. [Re: Eddeee]
    #17823072 -

Rest in peace Bro
I think of yo
Make rhymes that
Live your life
For others to know
How many die
In lonely rooms
The clock ticking to slow
To stop to sirens
That recede in the night and
People just carry on
As your body coldens and stiffens
But yet love is still here
Always here
Such gentle love caressing the still pungent air

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Re: First line last line poetry. [Re: zzripz]
    #17826756 -

such gentle love caressing the still pungent air
I still remember the taunting stare
of someone not going nowhere
and saying it just not fair
but more could of been done
if you fallowed the son
but instead you 
you wound up dead
you fallow the bottle
and took the throttle
and now all is a loss
but not for me
you see
  me i am now free
of all that bull shit
and I no longer need it
so my life goes on just fine
and still I drink a little wine
and all is good
I've always understood
how to be happy and live
and you don't even have to give
but it helps the karma if you do
it more about being true
and bout liking yourself
even if you have no wealth
its easy to be happy


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Don't read books study life then write books
we are nothing but atoms trying to figure out what atoms are.


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Re: First line last line poetry. [Re: Eddeee]
    #17829238 -

its easy to be happy
when the grass is green
when the air flows through you
refreshing your taste
here there aint no haste
and you gaze up at the blue
ears hear those distant sounds
you do like tinkles
and strange roars
then follow them into infinity
beyond feeling bored

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Re: First line last line poetry. [Re: zzripz]
    #17832220 -

Beyond feeling bored
it really strikes a cord
because You have to guard the grow
you just want to go and show
but you can't do that
cause somewhere there is a rat
you have to guard to grow
just 8 more weeks to go
If your found out you'll go to jail
and that means only one thing fail
you started this on your own
and nobody can ever be shown
but there is plenty of food and beer
if I leave it will bring me fear
cause you have to guard the grow
all you want to do is show
but you can't do that
cause there just might be a rat
you have to guard the grow
6 more weeks to go
your feeling like you don't exist
but life goes on it persists
you haven't seen no one
this is starting to be no fun
but you have to guard the grow
all you want to do is show
but you can't do that
cause look there is a rat
you have to guard the grow
4 more weeks to go
your out of bud and out off beer
if you leave will only bring fear
there is no one to call
to risk the fall
but you have to guard the grow
you just want to show
but you can't do that
look there are a lot of rats
got to guard the grow
two more week to go
God damn I'm about  to have a fit
getting tired of guarding this shit
I hope its good and stoney
i hope its worth being lonely
I have to guard the grow
is there any one I can show
No I can't do that
all of you are rats
I have to guard the grow
one more week to go.
was it worth the sorrow
never knowing about tomorrow
doing the same thing
living life on the wing
I have to guard the grow
someday Im gonna show
but really I cant do that
every one is a rat
I have to guard the grow
today its time to show
and let them all know
what became of me
I imprisoned me
in my own Jail
so I would not fail
so tomorrow plant some more seed
give lots of feed
and then like before
go to the store
buy some beer and some wine
and maybe a little shine
then go back home
where Ill be alone
beyond feeling bored
It really strikes a cord
its time to guard the grow
I just want to show
but I can't do that
you never know when there is a rat
I have to guard the grow
18 weeks to go


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Don't read books study life then write books
we are nothing but atoms trying to figure out what atoms are.


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Re: First line last line poetry. [Re: Eddeee]
    #17834244 -

18 weeks to go
126 days you know
Thats 3024 hours
Which means 181440 minutes
Yes 10886400 sec-onds to go
Tick Tock Tick Tock
Time is slow
When you wait
Morning comes again
Now evening
Now midnight
What is time?
Tick tock tick tock
Will my rhyme ease my mind
Will it answer this riddle of
What is time?

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Re: First line last line poetry. [Re: zzripz]
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What is time but another line to cross,
I have not stopped at that thought,
Mirrored smiles on the lakes rocks
A water drop, get me lost
Still I can't know what I'm taught
Is what I'm told, its fools gold
And an old fool knows tenfold,
Its sent as symbols,
Through my tent windows
To mend my spent spindles
Beginning to think simple
Now its clearer, as the end draws nearer
Fear of the fear full is what we are here for
Nearly or hardly either way is ungodly
Sweet whispers so softly , my justice has robbed me


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:jah: everything i say is only a satirical joke, nothing serious man!:jah:



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Re: First line last line poetry. [Re: AcidBath]
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Sweet whispers so softly , my justice has robbed me
While I sway and roll in this
Ship of Fools
In this sea of shit and litter
On plastic islands
The birds land and pluck
To after regurgitate to
Feed their young
The plastic toxic muck
Haunted by this hell
I seek to break the spell

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