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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Eddeee]
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On a little paper that I sought
Was a cheery little smiley face
To let me drop out of the race
Another dimension, there's a thought!

Colors swirl, patterns form
Tunnels of reality bend, merging
Waves of consciousness surging
'Twould terrify someone of the norm

Visions I did see, a field of green
Purple trees of vibrant hues
Yes, I'm tripping, it's old news
Fantastic colors shine with ethereal sheen

Psychedelic mind, otherworldy sights
Wisdom from the stars and earth
A new me, my spirit giving birth
These experiences are our birthrights

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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Apep]
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These experiences are our birthright
we will put up the good fight
to keep what we know and believe
in our tangled minds we weave
to have a different reality
and all this creativity
there it stays forever
we will never say never


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Don't read books study life then write books
we are nothing but atoms trying to figure out what atoms are.


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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Eddeee]
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we will never say never
but we will say whatever
it sounds so mean
like a pubescent pre-teen
always acting out
so choose another rout
if you know whats good
it should be under stood
the whole world was made for you
and you act like you do not know what to do.


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Don't read books study life then write books
we are nothing but atoms trying to figure out what atoms are.


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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Eddeee]
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you act like you do not know what to do
just take a hit or two
and get it done
before the rising sun
just get your stuff
call her bluff
tell her there won't be no tomorrow
you don't need the sorrow
so get the hell out  there
do what is fair
for your mind
you need to unwind
take some deep sighs
you don't not want to here the lies
Just go man just go
and get back into the flow


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Don't read books study life then write books
we are nothing but atoms trying to figure out what atoms are.


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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Eddeee]
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get back into the flow
stop sinking so low
peak your head out
get your self a good stout
drink it down taste so good
if you only would
forget about yesterday
and just fly away
every once in a while
pay attention to someone smile
have a good look
read a good book
or just lay still
so you can have your fill
and get the good out
from drinking that stout


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Don't read books study life then write books
we are nothing but atoms trying to figure out what atoms are.


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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Eddeee]
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From drinking that stout
My mind's all a fuzz
I've been trying to dry out
From all that and the drugz

I find it hard to believe
I once went 80 days
More 'n 60 more
Man I got a ways

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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Buster_Brown]
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Man I got a ways
you say another 60 days
and then what
back on the bottle
step on the throttle
and then what
off the wagon
back to taggin
then what
time to find new friend
to get hi again
then what


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Don't read books study life then write books
we are nothing but atoms trying to figure out what atoms are.


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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Eddeee]
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"Then what..." I began,"is the purpose of man?"
I asked from the pulpit up high on the stand.
"This fundamental question about who and what we are
is looking for its answer in our minds and in our hearts.
The truth of faith and purpose is that we all make our own.
Determinism is wrong. Our destinies...unknown."
I ached inside in silence as I stared out at the crowd,
watching for reactions. The silence was so loud.
Unconsciously I wished for someone to shout out in protest,
But as I watched the faces, I knew there was none left.
We nodded in agreement in the great hall of my mind,
And I adjourned my audience, as I looked up to the sky.
"We are the sum of our actions, and the world is ours to shape.
The only destinies we have are, in truth, the ones we make."


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The moon is out, and it's time for experiments...
                                                                                             

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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Biopunk]
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in truth the ones we make
have been made by mistake
misunderstanding what it will take
throw your burdens aside, be light
see light, take flight for the ride
that will take you right to the side
of the knight in the night who lies and hides
who came right out of that crack in the sky
who caused the divide
who saw what was right
who broke the chains with all of his might
who chose to be alive
who knows your decisions are from his insight.


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:jah: everything i say is only a satirical joke, nothing serious man!:jah:



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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: AcidBath]
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"Who knows!".."Your decisions are from his insight!"

..if we all call the tune..I hummed

Then what

..To live for change so we can arrange..

This hall of echoes

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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Buster_Brown]
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This hall of echoes
Causes silence in my head
and all my friends think like geckos
sometimes  I think I'm dead
sometime its all a dream
that i don't understand
a different color scheme
nothing is ever planned
it just goes by
like slow motion life
you don't ask why
sometimes it cuts like a knife
sometimes it feels like love


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Don't read books study life then write books
we are nothing but atoms trying to figure out what atoms are.


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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Eddeee]
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Sometimes It feels like Love.
But Lovetimes feel like what exactly?
Unicorns and bright-ass doves
Are tiresome to maintain. Acting.

I apologize.
Searching Souls, have Searching Eyes.

So if you recognize them
Don't hide behind a surprised disguise when
Conflict does arise

Lets chalk it up and set our differences aside when

Clouds of doubt fill the skies
Lets dust off our differences.
Watch em wash right into the tide!


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:smileyfrog::mushroom2:SineWaveHighway's Trade List! :mushroom2:

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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: SineWaveHighway]
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watch them wash into the tide
I come alive with the sound of their cries
my hands are tied, tensions high,
sins and lies, remind me, breath the water inside.
bleed until you die fuck your alibies
you coward bastard bitch of a guy
you took that ride, its your right


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:jah: everything i say is only a satirical joke, nothing serious man!:jah:



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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: AcidBath]
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you took that ride its your right
so don't laugh at kindness
put up the good fight
go mingle with the mindless
see how far you get
see where it leads you
before you  say shit
then realize nothing is true 
this path is long
and many go this way
you have to be strong
to want to play


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Don't read books study life then write books
we are nothing but atoms trying to figure out what atoms are.


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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Eddeee]
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To want to play isn't wrong it just is
It's in our nature to judge, injustice.
Search inside your mind to find bliss.
Then turn it on and radiate that shiz.

We all have to grow and that takes change
but we can't forget our roots, we got ta maintain
Take care of each other, alleviate pain.
Cuz on a higher level we're all the same.

Commonalities of all consciousness
the undeniable truths we can't forget
Live and let live, live in each breath,
and Journey through life to the doorway of death.


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The moon is out, and it's time for experiments...
                                                                                             

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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Biopunk]
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Journey through life to the doorway of death
and at the end of life can you say there is nothing left
Hopefully there is some sort of an afterlife or a guiding light
Maybe just rotting in the ground food for worms for there delight
that is ok by me as long as I don't get hurt or feel any pain
and what is sin anyway is it achieving all this fame
is it what you where taught all these years
teaching change in life but mostly fears
And God, what is god made off
some say God is only love
The strongest emotion
the most commotion
The most
God


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Don't read books study life then write books
we are nothing but atoms trying to figure out what atoms are.


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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Eddeee]
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Nice one E. If you center align the text it would be in the shape of a diamond. With God at the tip of the diamond, and the journey of life at the top. (good bud) really though, nice... hope this next one doesn't offend anybody. It's the question of faith:

GOD
apex of the lens
oracular origin
all seeing eye
GOD
True center of zen
Energy within
Earth, wind and sky
GOD
old religeon?
original sin?
historical lie?


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The moon is out, and it's time for experiments...
                                                                                             

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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Biopunk]
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Thanks Medicine scientist  you have a good way with words as well. Thanks for Contributing.  I wish MORE SHROMMERS would contribute, Its awesome when you get a bunch of peoples thoughts, on that last line and where it can take you.
(and now for the last line)

Historical Lie ?
Is that what you ask
we all need a group sigh
and a good flask
to contemplate this thought
and toil a while in aw
this was what we were tought
The condition of God is a flaw
and why did god make sin
why did god make imperfection
it seem you can not win
but they say it was all about the resurrection.


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Don't read books study life then write books
we are nothing but atoms trying to figure out what atoms are.


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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Eddeee]
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They say it was all about the resurrection
but nobody made the connection
we all looked up into the sky
because we are sure its not a lie
How does this work anyway
just except what they have to say
that dying on a cross killed our sin
but still the evil lurks in hearts of men
why did you run away
disappear after 40 days
wouldn't it been better if you had stayed
and the hearts of men were better weighed
Many have died in your name
and some did not even want to play the game
Maybe the humans got it wrong
it seems when touched by them it don't take long
they got the words all mixed up
They spilled the holy cup
The catholic church there not right
somehow they missed the guiding light
how do I know
what can you show
to prove to me that this is right
that you are truly the guiding light


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Don't read books study life then write books
we are nothing but atoms trying to figure out what atoms are.


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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Eddeee]
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That you are truly the guiding light
that  will lighten up the dead of night
in the middle of winter will you keep me warm
in the middle of a blizzard storm.
will you hold me tight
when life is not alright
will you whisper nice thoughts in my ear
to take away my unwanted fear
will you leave me the good smoke
then leave me the last toke
would you let me weep
then let me sleep


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Don't read books study life then write books
we are nothing but atoms trying to figure out what atoms are.


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