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sandman_130
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3 More songs for Shroomers to Review!
#5656161 - 05/21/06 12:42 PM (17 years, 8 months ago) |
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Hey shroomery, I'm back again with a few more songs. Just wanted to know what everyone thinks of these 3 songs. I know the drums are fairly lame but its all I can really do for now. I would like everyone who is listening to try to focus on the guitar rythm's. I'm very interested in comments or ideas for the songs for improvement. But if you like it I would love to hear that as well!
shroom on! 
http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=8465DDC56CEC0AF7
http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=138A8AC95FB754B3
http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=CC0E2F8647745EBB
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Very Good
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Fairly Good
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Ok
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Fairly Bad
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Shit ass shit fuck piss
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sandman_130
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Re: 3 More songs for Shroomers to Review! [Re: sandman_130]
#5660276 - 05/22/06 01:50 PM (17 years, 8 months ago) |
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listen to the 3rd link please at least
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  "There is a world beyond ours, a world that is far away, nearby, and invisible. And there is where God lives, where the dead live, the spirits and the saints, a world where everything has already happened and everything is known. That world talks. It has a language of its own. I report what it says. The sacred mushroom takes me by the hand and brings me to the world where everything is known. It is they, the sacred mushrooms, that speak in a way I can understand." 
 Maria Sabina
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Re: 3 More songs for Shroomers to Review! [Re: sandman_130]
#5661983 - 05/22/06 09:35 PM (17 years, 8 months ago) |
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heh nice, metal at its finest.
Good solid rhythm you got going there (I just listened to the third one), you should definatley throw a solo overtop of that. Get some screeching lyrics, you're good to go.
as for suggestions I would say make the guitar more chunkier, add more bass (I dunno what programs you use, but like a simple EQ effect could help) Also, record the exact same rhythm you played as a seperate track (so you got two guitars going, get a diff tone maybe as well) and then pan each one like 75% to the left and right. Largenizes! the sound 
A thing i have been doing lately is running my guitar through my bass amp. Gets a thiick sound going, you could try that as well for something different
I'm just throwing out suggestions, not trying to tell you what to do 
But sounds good man, keep it up!
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sandman_130
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Re: 3 More songs for Shroomers to Review! [Re: sandman_130]
#5662485 - 05/22/06 11:53 PM (17 years, 8 months ago) |
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thanks alot for the suggestions! I've been dying to find out what other ears besides mine think would sound better. I'm happy to hear all of em!
Next time I will definetly get it going in stereo 
Glad to know you enjoyed it though, I can't wait to get some more time to perfect the sound of all my songs. I have more than enough for a full cd, but I gotta take it easy producing one at a time.
would be alot easier if I had a real drummer but my gnx3 should work good enough for now. Although the first link is pretty shady...lol...don't know why I even posted that, sounds nicer with just the guitar.
If you want to hear a song I wrote for basically a jam/solo song, I suggest you check this out.
http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=ACFBEC7124A384F2
It's mostly improvising(except for 2 or 3 licks) so forgive any perfections, but I think its got a nice "live" feel to it....
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  "There is a world beyond ours, a world that is far away, nearby, and invisible. And there is where God lives, where the dead live, the spirits and the saints, a world where everything has already happened and everything is known. That world talks. It has a language of its own. I report what it says. The sacred mushroom takes me by the hand and brings me to the world where everything is known. It is they, the sacred mushrooms, that speak in a way I can understand." 
 Maria Sabina
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