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 Phobos
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 Can anyone Title this song? 
#339233 - 06/12/01 04:39 PM (22 years, 3 months ago) |
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This song is one of my bands songs that I wrote (that didn't make sense), can anyone think of a name for it? I can't think of anything appropriate, and sorry for the language.
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If the world becomes too much for me,
Dig my hole six feet deep.
Can't even make this perfect day right
One day out of 365
And as we drive, and the sun sets,
Will you love me less?
When day turns to night,
And the roses dry,
Will you love me less?
And as we drive, and the roses dry,
Will you still love me?
Sometimes I just want to die,
But all I can do
Is lie here and cry
Until you say good-bye.
If it's not one fucking thing it's the next
Lights out, as the sun sets.
Night ends, and I enter my room,
Grim smile, ended too soon.
I'll show you a fuck up.
I'll show you what it's like to fail.
Pounding fists.
Bloody knuckles.
Scream and flail.
Sometimes I just want to die,
But all I can do
Is lie here and cry
Until you say good-bye.
Goodbye.
(Copyright 2001, Fall Of Icarus)
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 kosmic_charlie
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Re: Can anyone Title this song? [Re: Phobos]
#339237 - 06/12/01 04:42 PM (22 years, 3 months ago) |
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This may be lacking creativity but how about "When the World Becomes Too Much"?
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Phobos
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Re: Can anyone Title this song? [Re: kosmic_charlie]
#339248 - 06/12/01 04:48 PM (22 years, 3 months ago) |
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Didn't lack anything.
Hmm.. maybe, maybe.. I might use that if I can't think of anything else, but It's good (I never thought to use the lyrics as the title.. hmm smaarrtt)
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Jenny
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Re: Can anyone Title this song? [Re: Phobos]
#339485 - 06/12/01 10:16 PM (22 years, 3 months ago) |
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howabout just "Goodbye"
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Mindfulness is the aware, balanced acceptance of the present experience.
It isn't more complicated than that.
It is opening to or recieving the present moment, pleasant or unpleasant, just as it is,
without either clinging to it or rejecting it.
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coma
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Re: Can anyone Title this song? [Re: Phobos]
#339554 - 06/12/01 11:38 PM (22 years, 3 months ago) |
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"no sun"
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"the greatest trick the devil ever pulled was convincing the world he didn't exist."
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"the greatest trick the devil ever pulled was convincing the world he didn't exist."
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Phobos
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Re: Can anyone Title this song? [Re: Jenny]
#339583 - 06/13/01 12:03 AM (22 years, 3 months ago) |
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My band members tell me to name it goodbye.. but that's not what it's about really. It's not about "Goodbye"
It's more about me dreading the day when "she" will say goodbye.
It's about trying so hard to do things, and not doing it right no matter how hard you tried.. Where "she" say's it's okay, but in your mind, you know it's all just adding up.
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Anonymous
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Re: Can anyone Title this song? [Re: Phobos]
#339843 - 06/13/01 09:02 AM (22 years, 3 months ago) |
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"A Requim for Hope in B(flat)minor at 440"
Or you could just call it "Damnit, Damnit, Son of Bitch"
I like music.
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Re: Can anyone Title this song? [Re: Phobos]
#345909 - 06/21/01 10:16 AM (22 years, 3 months ago) |
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How about "The Infinite Wisdom of Prince Valium in a Can"? LOL. ok I'm sorry I did think of something serious, so nevermind that jest.
"Toward the Light, Self In Hand"....? because it does seem to be a song referencing one's death by their own hand.
just a thought.
Denial is not just a river in egypt.Edited by ZAPenlightened on 06/21/01 12:16 PM.
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Denial is not just a river in egypt.
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swift666
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Re: Can anyone Title this song? [Re: ]
#352272 - 07/01/01 01:26 AM (22 years, 3 months ago) |
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peachman where is that from?!?! i know ive heard it before... Damnit, Damnit, Son of Bitch, i just cant remember
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Re: Can anyone Title this song? [Re: Phobos]
#352306 - 07/01/01 05:10 AM (22 years, 3 months ago) |
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"Six Feet Deep"
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Anonymous
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Re: Can anyone Title this song? [Re: swift666]
#352419 - 07/01/01 11:01 AM (22 years, 3 months ago) |
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Honestly, I can't remember... it sounds like something Beavis would say when he is pissed, so that is my best guess. Or maybe Cartman on SouthPark. I dunno.
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