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Pooks
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poetry(feel free to contribute) lolz
#11254791 - 10/15/09 05:14 PM (14 years, 5 months ago) |
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Three dam times ive been down this road Too much drama just to bust a load I used to think you were all the same; in that every last one of you was fuckin insane
Then i realized that i was right Not a single 1 of u knows how to close ur legs Just like a virgen who cant help but beg and plead that soon his seed will spray inside a moist vagin*
*pronounced Va Geen
-pooks
Edited by Pooks (10/15/09 05:15 PM)
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Smitington
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Re: poetry(feel free to contribute) lolz [Re: Pooks]
#11254847 - 10/15/09 05:22 PM (14 years, 5 months ago) |
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Obseen it may sound, but worry not, the now virgen, just scored some pot.
In a day or three, he will learn the ways, of getting in panties, with head games he plays.
The pot made him wise, chill as a fox, now every single day, the cat scores box.
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Pooks
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Re: poetry(feel free to contribute) lolz [Re: Smitington]
#11254860 - 10/15/09 05:24 PM (14 years, 5 months ago) |
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wow dude did you purousely make yours correlate with the theme of mine or was it just coincidence. Either way great writing man
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Pooks
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Re: poetry(feel free to contribute) lolz [Re: Pooks]
#11254871 - 10/15/09 05:26 PM (14 years, 5 months ago) |
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oh nvm my last part was just kinda like urs, my beef. nice poem
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Smitington
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Re: poetry(feel free to contribute) lolz [Re: Pooks]
#11254879 - 10/15/09 05:28 PM (14 years, 5 months ago) |
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thanks man, i tried to keep yours goin'
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Smitington
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Re: poetry(feel free to contribute) lolz [Re: Smitington]
#11254904 - 10/15/09 05:32 PM (14 years, 5 months ago) |
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keep it goin'
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Envix
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Re: poetry(feel free to contribute) lolz [Re: Smitington]
#11254912 - 10/15/09 05:34 PM (14 years, 5 months ago) |
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one time, this brotha blew my bathroom up trying to get relief; but didn't know, I roll my toilet paper on poison ivy leaf
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crackawebsta
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Re: poetry(feel free to contribute) lolz [Re: Envix]
#11255394 - 10/15/09 06:49 PM (14 years, 5 months ago) |
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"Why are you late?" you had to inquire "I forgot to put my pants in the dryer. I meant to do a load late last night But I fell asleep on the couch watchin the fight."
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Salomon
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Re: poetry(feel free to contribute) lolz [Re: crackawebsta]
#11255422 - 10/15/09 06:54 PM (14 years, 5 months ago) |
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smokeing and toking no fucking joking vaped as hell cant you tell? and i have mushrooms drying all of dem in mah room good vibes here and drink a beer
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Smitington
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Re: poetry(feel free to contribute) lolz [Re: Salomon]
#11255665 - 10/15/09 07:36 PM (14 years, 5 months ago) |
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'bout a half passed nine, this peom is lookin' fine, not a jok'n, this poems a smokin', here comes the next line:
Me and my buddy z walked down to the bar, planned to get wasted, didn't bring no car. Couple of ladies, lookin' real cute, I busted out my shit so they could play on my flute!
Ha ha, such immature shit, if I acted any younger i'de be throwin' a fit. It's all good tho, cus life's about the fun, if u can't have none, you won't be gettin' no hun'.
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Edited by Smitington (10/15/09 07:38 PM)
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SayWhat
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Re: poetry(feel free to contribute) lolz [Re: Smitington]
#11255862 - 10/15/09 08:11 PM (14 years, 5 months ago) |
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this is an actual poem I wrote about a girl I know. Rough draft, probably will never get revised.
Co-Co-Nuts
I was a baby monkey and as I drifted through the jungle I felt my tummy rumble So I climbed right up a tree And when I got up to the top Your co-co-nuts were there for me So I picked a little one And I got a little flavor So I picked a bigger one 'cuz I felt a little braver But as I tried to get a grip I felt a co-co-nutty slip So I grabbed onto a vine And I dropped down to the ground Just to have a look around To see if I could find your fruit And I looked and looked and looked and looked And grabbed your trunk and shook and shook But no more co-co-nuts for me So I climbed back to the tippy top Your friends were there I took a seat We shared your co-co-nutty treat And though I wanted all for me They were here first and they want you So I will share I'm happy to
The End
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desiretoheal
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Re: poetry(feel free to contribute) lolz [Re: Pooks]
#11255905 - 10/15/09 08:17 PM (14 years, 5 months ago) |
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those all suck. my opinion rules all
-------------------- If there were no rewards to reap,No loving embrace to see me through This tedious path I've chosen here,I certainly would've walked away by now. Gonna wait it out. If there were no desire to heal The damaged and broken met along This tedious path I've chosen hereI certainly would've walked away by now. And I still may ... (sigh) ... I still may.Be patient. I must keep reminding myself of this.
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DimensionX
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Re: poetry(feel free to contribute) lolz [Re: Pooks]
#11255929 - 10/15/09 08:20 PM (14 years, 5 months ago) |
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Marijuana and acid My penis is flaccid From the pills I'm the equivalent of a man with gills All weird and fucked up Yet appearing normal Mostly like Mel Gibson in the thunder dome Suffering from Kaleidoscopic mind syndrome Drinking dream foam which dosent work.
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desiretoheal
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Re: poetry(feel free to contribute) lolz [Re: Pooks]
#11256155 - 10/15/09 08:50 PM (14 years, 5 months ago) |
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fuck you fucks you mother fuck sitting in front of this screen pretending to be the lord of kings I sit and watch you die like a pigeon on the street fly away bitch fly and die I will drink cough syrup till the day I die fucking fucks
-------------------- If there were no rewards to reap,No loving embrace to see me through This tedious path I've chosen here,I certainly would've walked away by now. Gonna wait it out. If there were no desire to heal The damaged and broken met along This tedious path I've chosen hereI certainly would've walked away by now. And I still may ... (sigh) ... I still may.Be patient. I must keep reminding myself of this.
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Smitington
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Re: poetry(feel free to contribute) lolz [Re: desiretoheal]
#11256251 - 10/15/09 09:04 PM (14 years, 5 months ago) |
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damn bro, you got some issues, need me to hand you a box of tissues?
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desiretoheal
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Re: poetry(feel free to contribute) lolz [Re: Smitington]
#11256258 - 10/15/09 09:05 PM (14 years, 5 months ago) |
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nah man i'm good. I just had to vent
-------------------- If there were no rewards to reap,No loving embrace to see me through This tedious path I've chosen here,I certainly would've walked away by now. Gonna wait it out. If there were no desire to heal The damaged and broken met along This tedious path I've chosen hereI certainly would've walked away by now. And I still may ... (sigh) ... I still may.Be patient. I must keep reminding myself of this.
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iamu
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Re: poetry(feel free to contribute) lolz [Re: desiretoheal]
#11256414 - 10/15/09 09:33 PM (14 years, 5 months ago) |
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he had to vent this seemed to be the place to do it most niggas get mad but we'll talk you through it cause we're here for you man we would understand how can i help a young man we gotta get you a plan
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Salomon
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Re: poetry(feel free to contribute) lolz [Re: iamu]
#11256436 - 10/15/09 09:35 PM (14 years, 5 months ago) |
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ill kick your ass ill dowse you with gas throw a match you die in a flash if you dont pass the blunt
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desiretoheal
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Re: poetry(feel free to contribute) lolz [Re: Salomon]
#11257219 - 10/15/09 11:53 PM (14 years, 5 months ago) |
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The blunt is now passed as we sit and watch moonlight strike the grass like silver Friends and foes you all are but when I return we wont be far Far from the truth of it all The truth that we are all one mind All one kind All one joint wrapped tightly to be smoked by the almighty pork rind
-------------------- If there were no rewards to reap,No loving embrace to see me through This tedious path I've chosen here,I certainly would've walked away by now. Gonna wait it out. If there were no desire to heal The damaged and broken met along This tedious path I've chosen hereI certainly would've walked away by now. And I still may ... (sigh) ... I still may.Be patient. I must keep reminding myself of this.
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thomasbe
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Re: poetry(feel free to contribute) lolz [Re: desiretoheal]
#11257466 - 10/16/09 12:52 AM (14 years, 5 months ago) |
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Bus Stop
A cigarette, attached to her decaying hand
smoke trails aimlessly upward, reaching an ecstasy of nothingness Her withered face, worn so very blank, from waiting The concrete greyness, like another mindless hell, greets me, from across the black, creased tarmac, and tells me, “ Don’t stop” And I look to the sky, yet all I can see/ smell is cigarette smoke. And I guess we are all waiting, just some, are counting every slow second.
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