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OfflineKristiMidocean
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anyone here do poetry here some of mine love to here yours
    #3714493 - 02/01/05 07:08 PM (11 years, 11 months ago)

this is the story of my life and love tell me if you think it makes since ,,, I'm not sure it does.. it makes sense to me because i wrote it but tell me if it does to you and also i would love to here anything you guys have wrote well here it goes
SABOTAGE
One after the other, tears have fallen,
Empty voices they wont quit callin.

Drifting deep past lucid dreams,
crying reveals silent screams.

Desperately trying to abolish the shame,
Knowing inside your full to blame.

Fingertips trace, the places he kissed,
If only he knew how much he was missed

Wanting so badly to be face to face,
Hands now stopping, wishing his would replace

Stomach is aching, remember his touch,
glassy eyes water, his love was so much.

Sabotaging lives each passing day,
Never believing you should be loved this way.

Closed eyes now held tightly shut,
Asking yourself, why did you give up.

Searching your mind for all the right answers,
questioning yourself, can you kill this cancer?

Wrote by:: KRisti ShaREE

WHAT DO YOU THINK? MAKE ANY SINCE


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Re: anyone here do poetry here some of mine love to here yours [Re: KristiMidocean]
    #3714528 - 02/01/05 07:14 PM (11 years, 11 months ago)

nice poem!

Here is one of mine. For my GF :wink:


A soft light and gentle hue show me truly what is you,
a gentle hand, a loving voice, hide the heart that has no choice.
For choices made and never told to choices soon to unfold,
a beautiful soul on a difficult road, taking paths never told.

A quite night in loves embrace two people falling into place,
the love of two becomes one, A love that can not be undone.
A loving light of two old souls, fills a heart of endless holes.
The conditions of love are simple and few, I be me and you be you.

Love is truly hard to find, It takes a heart and takes a mind,
It takes two souls as old as time,that were once separated by the divine. Two souls meet and know at a glance, that they are the ones separated by chance. From my heart to yours, and yours to mine, unconditional love is always blind.

Love is truly nothing to fear, It fills a place where once was tear.
It fills the heart and fills the mind, and binds two souls as old as time. It accepts all things and makes things right, It opens a closed heart to the light. When life is over and all is done it takes two souls and makes them one.


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Re: anyone here do poetry here some of mine love to here yours [Re: KristiMidocean]
    #3714563 - 02/01/05 07:19 PM (11 years, 11 months ago)

Is all good KRisti ShaREE it makes but is does it make sense? Well I think its pretty klear.

Clear.
Like krystal klear like the beginning of the word began with a k ok? Don?t spell it don?t yell it the closer we get to the thoughts in your head the faster you can relate to me. I?m talking about chemistry I'm talking about synapse...
What if we are right about most things? What if we start with that assumption and move on then what? Then where would we be?

What if we are right?

He grasped her hand
To make a run through the crowd.
It was a cold Michigan Ave.
The Festival of Lights.
The excited laugh she gave out and tightened grip
Fueled the 6 month long quiet obsession,
With her rare smile
And intelligent, deep brown eyes.
Dashing ten feet, twenty,
And suddenly they found themselves through the obstacle,
Past the busy Ave. and in a Silent Moment of Awareness.
She tugged her fingers,
He released her hand.
The feeling died in a swift grip of empty air.
?Lets go,? she said quickly slightly embarassed at the physical contact,
And lead off.
Not looking back.
He followed,
Fingers growing colder.

Question:

Hey all you smart people out there?
What the fuck is up?
I got feelings of emotion pushing action,
I have fluidity, I have color, I have love
And I have others,
I can read, and I read what matters,
I can recognize a saint from a typical bastard.
I feel sun to bare skin warmth from a beautiful smile,
I cry when the curve of a human eye reveals her inner style.
So its...
So its so goddamn amazing out there?

What the hell am I bitter about?

DoubleE

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testing one two three any connection made?


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OfflineKristiMidocean
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Re: anyone here do poetry here some of mine love to here yours [Re: DoubleE]
    #3714597 - 02/01/05 07:25 PM (11 years, 11 months ago)

wow guys thats awesome!


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Re: anyone here do poetry here some of mine love to here yours [Re: KristiMidocean]
    #3714608 - 02/01/05 07:28 PM (11 years, 11 months ago)

I lost alot of my poems in recent moves, but I will see if I can find them.


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Re: anyone here do poetry here some of mine love to here yours [Re: KristiMidocean]
    #3714616 - 02/01/05 07:30 PM (11 years, 11 months ago)

I don't remember what I did with all my poetry...I'm not really a poet anyhow. All I have from my poetic days are pieces of dark, depressing shit that will go into the "Nobody-can-read" vault until I die.

Well, here is one I just found that's not depressing:

Ashen clouds drop change anew
The forest shadow extends a claw
To the bastion of waiting gloom
The winter queen of seasons gone.

Flowers tuck their bonnets away
The sinful night speaks long
The moon a kindred and loyal display
The looping future dwindles on.

Taking on a cruel visage
The cleansing crystals of ages
Wrap the earth in towels fading
In a white marked page of sages.

Glistening tumble of the year
The unbidden frame of kin
Pregnant Mother sculpts and waits
The world melts real again.




It's about winter.


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Re: anyone here do poetry here some of mine love to here yours [Re: MOTH]
    #3714634 - 02/01/05 07:35 PM (11 years, 11 months ago)

Indecisiveness paved the way
We, as Leaders, Stood over the monastary
Tear Down The Walls, Everyone Get Down!
Throw Down your swords brothers
Throw down your shields, your pride, and now...
Brethren, get down



-Very old poem which I wrote in 7th grade for a project, have had it around ever since. Its short, but something about it just captures me.
If I remember correctly it was about the Ottoman Empire.

(in a way it makes no sense)


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Re: anyone here do poetry here some of mine love to here yours [Re: runawayjim]
    #3714727 - 02/01/05 07:48 PM (11 years, 11 months ago)



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Free Laws: Things to understand before I am Free

1. I am alone
2. There is Nothing
3. I must actualize myself
4. Sex is a tool for pleasure, not status
5. Dependency restricts me
6. Emotions are dangerous if not administered properly



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Re: anyone here do poetry here some of mine love to here yours [Re: KristiMidocean]
    #3714854 - 02/01/05 08:06 PM (11 years, 11 months ago)

I've written a lot of poetry. And I've put hours more to memory. Been a hobby of mine since I was a kid. I've posted many of my poems here over the years. Maybe if the mood strikes I'll throw another one in this thread tonight.


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Re: anyone here do poetry here some of mine love to here yours [Re: ToTheSummit]
    #3715416 - 02/01/05 09:29 PM (11 years, 11 months ago)

my script is a mess
you can see from the ink on my thumb and forefinger
but picked apart from words
is a transient notion that im not making this up
so do you see between the lines
the letters spell symbols and differentials and chimes
hidden by magic only heart can reveal
and when i see your eyes light up i know
i know you know
that this is real


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Men look at themselves and they see flawed humans, we look at women and we see perfect
GODDESSES
Women look at themselves and they seem utterly human, when looking at men they see proud
GODS.


~Casil



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Re: anyone here do poetry here some of mine love to here yours [Re: Todcasil]
    #3715498 - 02/01/05 09:48 PM (11 years, 11 months ago)


fear
bottled in a breath
colors
take the dark in their grip


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