Ferris said:

Incentive eh?  Does that mean we can make another serious attempt?

For those prizes I'll break out the A material.

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yes, you can edit and put forth REAL effort.(you should have anyway )

if my ribs dont hurt after seeing it, it wasnt good enough!

AlteredAgain said:

i just let my first thoughts paint the picture. i've always envisioned today's america to be this kind of iron porcipine that extends its black machine like tentacles to other lands to suck them dry like a mosquito. paranoid to the point of neurotic protection yet predatory towards its neighbors..

and those are some lucrative prizes there lefty.

if i knew that i woulda tried harder.

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you can. someone else asked if they could put more effort into another one and i think that is ok. you can edit it as much as you like until monday evening when i start the poll. personally i think the first one you submitted is tits, but if you think youve got better, by all means. i enjoy good laughter.

Wysefool said:

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"Here be dragons"