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OfflineMonkah
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spirituality and poems.
    #656149 - 05/31/02 05:29 PM (14 years, 6 months ago)

i havent posted in awhile.
but i figured id post some of my newer writtings wich i feel have to do with
spirituality and philosophy.

i would tell you the meaning to them. but i want to see what you people think of them first. the object of my poems are to get people to think about stuff but everyone sees though words diferently.. and sometimes better than the origonal intention.

anyways ill tell you the meaning later if you wish.
thanks to anyone who reads this.
all comments are welcome

-Monk of the Ahhhhh's


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cut my eyes from the roots
add water for the new seeds
my pupils are in full bloom
and ready to release
diamonds erupting
spilling and thrashing
listening to the monotone distortion
of an ill reaction

lost in a cloud of trails
thoughts in a loss of sales
having what is not for need
but seeing what is too see
i set myself apon a shoulder
and watch as i unfold her
a shinning ark of blue, dimly lit
rest between her forheads kit

she said
now having two much equals too little
in such a round about way
that it ruins my twinkle
eventualy causing a wrinkle
so leave all behind
and follow my sound
of such devine
a silent mind

stuck by such beauty
i rarely remeber
to such relevant signs
ill always surender
for one isnt two
without halfs of a whole
just as me and my contender
see fit to controle
a lighting recepter
of wich this thunder storm rounds smooth concious
mind set to pin point deception
a strait path so slender
to the lucid diamond so clear
_________________________________________________________________

light rays
lonesome frays
dizzying strays
throughout all they still stay
stand by these traits
blessed by a soul i may

as though me confessing is but its best
ill continue on as if its just for the rest
and whose to say im blank and im dead
other than that spark of soul
called my conscious head

without it id be
forever set free
but free from what
but what is to be

So if im still here
forever embrace and endear
a love for life so strong
all other feelings merely tag along

while i am revolving
he is evolving
while i am resulting
he is consulting

while i am he
he will be
what he see's
through out my needs

and in this brite air
i create a stair
to a dream called heaven
so hes told
which is better to us
than being sold

_________________________________________________________________


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Re: spirituality and poems. [Re: Monkah]
    #656256 - 05/31/02 06:24 PM (14 years, 6 months ago)

Nice work man! I have a hard time figuring out what a poem means to the writer, but when i read your first poem...

i pictured someone seeing something totally new and beautiful in their life, but it wasn't that simple... it was confusing but in a subtle way. Many paths for the person to choose from in this new experience, but all in all.... its the whole and beauty of it that counts.

The words flowed nicely, it was a pleasure to read.


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OfflineMonkah
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Re: spirituality and poems. [Re: ]
    #656527 - 05/31/02 09:02 PM (14 years, 6 months ago)

i usualy have too easy of a time telling what peoples poetry means an thus it bores me.
your decsription of my poem is beautiful.. the first poem is verry complex indeed almost every sentence has its own meaning. yet.. you seem to have saw past all the aspects in it and figured out the whole meaning.

verry rare indeed that happens with my writtings.
anyways i am still yet to post the meaning it hasnt been up for verry long and i dont want to ruin it for people.
as well thank you for your comments and inspiration for me to keep writting.
anyone who says anything good about my work always inspires me to go write something else.. even myself. thank you.

-Monk of the Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh's



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Re: spirituality and poems. [Re: Monkah]
    #656659 - 05/31/02 10:33 PM (14 years, 6 months ago)

WYRD!

sounds very much like the stuff i write while Ecstatic...

normally, i sit and stare at a blank page,
but after a few caps, i become e. e. cummings!

a friend goes so far as to tie a little notebook and pen to himself while he's tripping,
being always ready to catch the next inspired moment.

he says it's become a sort of security blanket though...

thanx 4 sharing.

~


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OfflineMonkah
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Re: spirituality and poems. [Re: Middleman]
    #656667 - 05/31/02 10:47 PM (14 years, 6 months ago)


i can never seem to write while on any caps. my mind goes to fast. or not at all. although i did make a book in my head that records all thoughts for concious purposes.

anyways

normally, i sit and stare at a blank page,

that reminded me of :

A blank page begins to listen to an ink pen
as the water runs
from a leaky faucet.
A mirror admires an image from across the hall
when will it start. because i need an end..
...so the story began

anyways i usualy write while smoking nuggs. for me smoking extremly dank nugs puts me in a state were i can concentrate on any one thing for long periods of time. thus music sounding that much more better and defined.
well it helps me stay on track or in context and think clearer.

that sucks your friend thinks its a security blanket.
althought realizing it is security needed may help him come to realize
that anything that offers security should also offer enough to be able to be strong without them. whats that mean? he needs to be secure with himself? anyways.

thank you verry much for writting me back about my poetry. it inspires me =)

how about this writting?


lushcious velvet instinct
flowering with decay
pedals of individualality melt away
locked in a box of umimaginable proportions.
thoughtfully untaimed
little rounded off distortions.

almost all of my writting are "inner" lookings at ways i think. ways i comunicate with myself as "symbols"

-Monk of the AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh's


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OfflineMonkah
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Re: spirituality and poems. [Re: ]
    #660574 - 06/03/02 01:41 PM (14 years, 6 months ago)

ok so no one replied to my post on what they thought the poems meant besides LoOner. thank you loOner!

i figured you guys would like to try an figure it out. maybe its just me who likes challenges these days? or maybe it just wasnt a challenge at all...

so ill post the meanings now. disect them to peices.

_________________________________________________________________

cut my eyes from the roots
add water for the new seeds
my pupils are in full bloom
and ready to release

[ eyes are the intake of the world. what makes me who i am through sight.
[ basicly in this line im denouncing my old ways and planting seeds for new
[ visions and way to see things in the future.

diamonds erupting
spilling and thrashing
listening to the monotone distortion
of an ill reaction

[ i think of thoughts like diamonds.. they have many angles and can reflect [something diferent depending on what (mood) you shine on it
[ the last part is just about how in meditation.. listening to my bodys chemical [factory create diferent feelings.


lost in a cloud of trails
thoughts in a loss of sales
having what is not for need
but seeing what is too see

[lost in a vast of options with no thoughts on which one should be taken
[having these thoughts are not necicary.. but ill just wade through them.

i set myself apon a shoulder
and watch as i unfold her
a shinning ark of blue, dimly lit
rest between her forheads kit

[i set myself.. apon my own shoulder as if comforted by an old friend.
[lost in my thoughts i see a vision of a beautiful woman shining with blue

she said
now having two much equals too little
in such a round about way
that it ruins my twinkle
eventualy causing a wrinkle
so leave all behind
and follow my sound
of such devine
a silent mind

[should be pretty self explanitory.. basicly this "goddess" is telling me to denounce
[ all i know and all i hold onto and follow her beautiful syren voice which will lead
[ me to an infinite sigh

stuck by such beauty
i rarely remeber
to such relevant signs
ill always surender

[struck by what this goddess says. im astonished almost forgeting what she has
[tought me. but i dare not fight only to loose.


for one isnt two
without halfs of a whole
just as me and my contender
see fit to controle

[ i am not whole without my parts that function to make me who i am
[ just as conscious and sub-conscious work together to control me in the world

a lighting recepter
of wich this thunder storm rounds smooth concious

[ my concious entity that i am inbetween both conscious and sub realms.
[ as if theres a lighting storm in my brain. and it feels soothing.


mind set to pin point deception
a strait path so slender
to the lucid diamond so clear

[ in my mind theres no room for error. if error does happen. its quickly worked out.
[ and if it cant be.. then its forgotten, or set aside, not taken as a serious manner,
[ unless need be.
[ reaching out on this path ive been given to find something lucid and ethereal
[ yet too good to be true.

_________________________________________________________________

anyways. thats it striped down of all its mysticism.
tell me your comments on what you think.
ill de clothe the other one if you peoples would like.

feed back!


_-Monk of the AHhhhhhhhhhhh's









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Re: spirituality and poems. [Re: Monkah]
    #660630 - 06/03/02 02:16 PM (14 years, 6 months ago)

Heh..good shit. Deep


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