ok so no one replied to my post on what they thought the poems meant besides LoOner. thank you loOner!
i figured you guys would like to try an figure it out. maybe its just me who likes challenges these days? or maybe it just wasnt a challenge at all... so ill post the meanings now. disect them to peices.
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cut my eyes from the roots add water for the new seeds my pupils are in full bloom and ready to release [ eyes are the intake of the world. what makes me who i am through sight. [ basicly in this line im denouncing my old ways and planting seeds for new [ visions and way to see things in the future.
diamonds erupting spilling and thrashing listening to the monotone distortion of an ill reaction
[ i think of thoughts like diamonds.. they have many angles and can reflect [something diferent depending on what (mood) you shine on it [ the last part is just about how in meditation.. listening to my bodys chemical [factory create diferent feelings.
lost in a cloud of trails thoughts in a loss of sales having what is not for need but seeing what is too see
[lost in a vast of options with no thoughts on which one should be taken [having these thoughts are not necicary.. but ill just wade through them.
i set myself apon a shoulder and watch as i unfold her a shinning ark of blue, dimly lit rest between her forheads kit [i set myself.. apon my own shoulder as if comforted by an old friend. [lost in my thoughts i see a vision of a beautiful woman shining with blue
she said now having two much equals too little in such a round about way that it ruins my twinkle eventualy causing a wrinkle so leave all behind and follow my sound of such devine a silent mind
[should be pretty self explanitory.. basicly this "goddess" is telling me to denounce [ all i know and all i hold onto and follow her beautiful syren voice which will lead [ me to an infinite sigh
stuck by such beauty i rarely remeber to such relevant signs ill always surender
[struck by what this goddess says. im astonished almost forgeting what she has [tought me. but i dare not fight only to loose.
for one isnt two without halfs of a whole just as me and my contender see fit to controle
[ i am not whole without my parts that function to make me who i am [ just as conscious and sub-conscious work together to control me in the world a lighting recepter of wich this thunder storm rounds smooth concious [ my concious entity that i am inbetween both conscious and sub realms. [ as if theres a lighting storm in my brain. and it feels soothing.
mind set to pin point deception a strait path so slender to the lucid diamond so clear
[ in my mind theres no room for error. if error does happen. its quickly worked out. [ and if it cant be.. then its forgotten, or set aside, not taken as a serious manner, [ unless need be. [ reaching out on this path ive been given to find something lucid and ethereal [ yet too good to be true.
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anyways. thats it striped down of all its mysticism. tell me your comments on what you think. ill de clothe the other one if you peoples would like.
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