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Monkah
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spirituality and poems.
#656149 - 05/31/02 03:29 PM (22 years, 8 months ago) |
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i havent posted in awhile. but i figured id post some of my newer writtings wich i feel have to do with spirituality and philosophy.
i would tell you the meaning to them. but i want to see what you people think of them first. the object of my poems are to get people to think about stuff but everyone sees though words diferently.. and sometimes better than the origonal intention.
anyways ill tell you the meaning later if you wish. thanks to anyone who reads this. all comments are welcome
-Monk of the Ahhhhh's
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cut my eyes from the roots add water for the new seeds my pupils are in full bloom and ready to release diamonds erupting spilling and thrashing listening to the monotone distortion of an ill reaction
lost in a cloud of trails thoughts in a loss of sales having what is not for need but seeing what is too see i set myself apon a shoulder and watch as i unfold her a shinning ark of blue, dimly lit rest between her forheads kit she said now having two much equals too little in such a round about way that it ruins my twinkle eventualy causing a wrinkle so leave all behind and follow my sound of such devine a silent mind
stuck by such beauty i rarely remeber to such relevant signs ill always surender for one isnt two without halfs of a whole just as me and my contender see fit to controle a lighting recepter of wich this thunder storm rounds smooth concious mind set to pin point deception a strait path so slender to the lucid diamond so clear _________________________________________________________________
light rays lonesome frays dizzying strays throughout all they still stay stand by these traits blessed by a soul i may
as though me confessing is but its best ill continue on as if its just for the rest and whose to say im blank and im dead other than that spark of soul called my conscious head
without it id be forever set free but free from what but what is to be
So if im still here forever embrace and endear a love for life so strong all other feelings merely tag along
while i am revolving he is evolving while i am resulting he is consulting
while i am he he will be what he see's through out my needs
and in this brite air i create a stair to a dream called heaven so hes told which is better to us than being sold
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Re: spirituality and poems. [Re: Monkah]
#656256 - 05/31/02 04:24 PM (22 years, 8 months ago) |
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Nice work man! I have a hard time figuring out what a poem means to the writer, but when i read your first poem...
i pictured someone seeing something totally new and beautiful in their life, but it wasn't that simple... it was confusing but in a subtle way. Many paths for the person to choose from in this new experience, but all in all.... its the whole and beauty of it that counts.
The words flowed nicely, it was a pleasure to read.
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Monkah
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Re: spirituality and poems. [Re: ]
#656527 - 05/31/02 07:02 PM (22 years, 8 months ago) |
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i usualy have too easy of a time telling what peoples poetry means an thus it bores me. your decsription of my poem is beautiful.. the first poem is verry complex indeed almost every sentence has its own meaning. yet.. you seem to have saw past all the aspects in it and figured out the whole meaning.
verry rare indeed that happens with my writtings. anyways i am still yet to post the meaning it hasnt been up for verry long and i dont want to ruin it for people. as well thank you for your comments and inspiration for me to keep writting. anyone who says anything good about my work always inspires me to go write something else.. even myself. thank you.
-Monk of the Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh's
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Middleman

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Re: spirituality and poems. [Re: Monkah]
#656659 - 05/31/02 08:33 PM (22 years, 8 months ago) |
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WYRD!
sounds very much like the stuff i write while Ecstatic...
normally, i sit and stare at a blank page, but after a few caps, i become e. e. cummings!
a friend goes so far as to tie a little notebook and pen to himself while he's tripping, being always ready to catch the next inspired moment. he says it's become a sort of security blanket though...
thanx 4 sharing.
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Monkah
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Re: spirituality and poems. [Re: Middleman]
#656667 - 05/31/02 08:47 PM (22 years, 8 months ago) |
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i can never seem to write while on any caps. my mind goes to fast. or not at all. although i did make a book in my head that records all thoughts for concious purposes.
anyways
normally, i sit and stare at a blank page,
that reminded me of :
A blank page begins to listen to an ink pen as the water runs from a leaky faucet. A mirror admires an image from across the hall when will it start. because i need an end.. ...so the story began
anyways i usualy write while smoking nuggs. for me smoking extremly dank nugs puts me in a state were i can concentrate on any one thing for long periods of time. thus music sounding that much more better and defined. well it helps me stay on track or in context and think clearer. that sucks your friend thinks its a security blanket. althought realizing it is security needed may help him come to realize that anything that offers security should also offer enough to be able to be strong without them. whats that mean? he needs to be secure with himself? anyways. thank you verry much for writting me back about my poetry. it inspires me =) how about this writting?
lushcious velvet instinct flowering with decay pedals of individualality melt away locked in a box of umimaginable proportions. thoughtfully untaimed little rounded off distortions.
almost all of my writting are "inner" lookings at ways i think. ways i comunicate with myself as "symbols"
-Monk of the AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh's
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Monkah
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Re: spirituality and poems. [Re: ]
#660574 - 06/03/02 11:41 AM (22 years, 8 months ago) |
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ok so no one replied to my post on what they thought the poems meant besides LoOner. thank you loOner!
i figured you guys would like to try an figure it out. maybe its just me who likes challenges these days? or maybe it just wasnt a challenge at all... so ill post the meanings now. disect them to peices.
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cut my eyes from the roots add water for the new seeds my pupils are in full bloom and ready to release [ eyes are the intake of the world. what makes me who i am through sight. [ basicly in this line im denouncing my old ways and planting seeds for new [ visions and way to see things in the future.
diamonds erupting spilling and thrashing listening to the monotone distortion of an ill reaction
[ i think of thoughts like diamonds.. they have many angles and can reflect [something diferent depending on what (mood) you shine on it [ the last part is just about how in meditation.. listening to my bodys chemical [factory create diferent feelings.
lost in a cloud of trails thoughts in a loss of sales having what is not for need but seeing what is too see
[lost in a vast of options with no thoughts on which one should be taken [having these thoughts are not necicary.. but ill just wade through them.
i set myself apon a shoulder and watch as i unfold her a shinning ark of blue, dimly lit rest between her forheads kit [i set myself.. apon my own shoulder as if comforted by an old friend. [lost in my thoughts i see a vision of a beautiful woman shining with blue
she said now having two much equals too little in such a round about way that it ruins my twinkle eventualy causing a wrinkle so leave all behind and follow my sound of such devine a silent mind
[should be pretty self explanitory.. basicly this "goddess" is telling me to denounce [ all i know and all i hold onto and follow her beautiful syren voice which will lead [ me to an infinite sigh
stuck by such beauty i rarely remeber to such relevant signs ill always surender
[struck by what this goddess says. im astonished almost forgeting what she has [tought me. but i dare not fight only to loose.
for one isnt two without halfs of a whole just as me and my contender see fit to controle
[ i am not whole without my parts that function to make me who i am [ just as conscious and sub-conscious work together to control me in the world a lighting recepter of wich this thunder storm rounds smooth concious [ my concious entity that i am inbetween both conscious and sub realms. [ as if theres a lighting storm in my brain. and it feels soothing.
mind set to pin point deception a strait path so slender to the lucid diamond so clear
[ in my mind theres no room for error. if error does happen. its quickly worked out. [ and if it cant be.. then its forgotten, or set aside, not taken as a serious manner, [ unless need be. [ reaching out on this path ive been given to find something lucid and ethereal [ yet too good to be true.
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anyways. thats it striped down of all its mysticism. tell me your comments on what you think. ill de clothe the other one if you peoples would like.
feed back!
_-Monk of the AHhhhhhhhhhhh's
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Re: spirituality and poems. [Re: Monkah]
#660630 - 06/03/02 12:16 PM (22 years, 8 months ago) |
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Heh..good shit. Deep
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