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OfflinePurpleKush
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love poem
    #5486057 - 04/06/06 10:39 AM (17 years, 9 months ago)

this is kind of a love poem i guess...any and all comments are appreciated and taken to the heart



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i know im gonna make it
nothing less than success
just wish i had the One
to get this stress off my chest

either rich or poor
its completely irrelevant
i just want a sweet girl
that can match my intelligence

Someone to wake up to
just to watch Her sleep
kisses on Her forehead
while She takes Her breaths so deep

am I all alone?
is the One out there?
been searching all my life
for the girl that will care

too young for true love
no care for fake lust
leave a little piece of my heart
with every girl that I trust

sick of all the games
often hang my head in shame
payne was given as my name
so i guess i cant complain

because if you want to get to heaven
you?ve got to walk through lonely hell
fire all around me
feel like an empty shell

soul searching takes patience
a blessing i wont allow
always in a rush
why can?t i have Her now?

this pain will help me one day
what doesn?t kill you makes you stronger
but everyday i feel
i cant hold on any longer

and if i make it to the End
still waiting all alone
ill have wasted my most treasured gift
my passion will have no home


i can love like no one else
but i may never love again
when you lose your heart so young
its hard to make amends

this is not a poem about anyone ive met
once i meet the girl for me, i know i wont forget
i see visions in my dreams but i haven?t found You yet
still alone in the storm, teary eyed and soaking wet

do You feel the same pain?
is there an absence in Your soul?
am I the piece to Your puzzle?
will We make each other whole?

ill fight on through my loneliness
getting stronger every day
waiting for the moment
when our paths cross the other?s way

i don?t know how it will happen
but once it does ill hold you tight
we both made it through the struggle
of the long lonely night

and now We spend Our nights together
making passionate Love until the dawn
cant believe I once was lonely
You had me all along


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Offlinezappa
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Re: love poem [Re: PurpleKush]
    #5486437 - 04/06/06 12:33 PM (17 years, 9 months ago)

its really nice. how long have you been writing?


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OfflinePurpleKush
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Re: love poem [Re: zappa]
    #5487692 - 04/06/06 08:12 PM (17 years, 9 months ago)

i guess you could either say my entire life or about 1 week. im always putting words together in my head. playing with rhymes, taking other peoples phrases and changing them to suit my taste, changing lyrics in my head. i don't know why i started putting words down, i just felt like it would help one day. and it did. thanks for the comment, too.


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