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PurpleKush
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love poem
#5486057 - 04/06/06 10:39 AM (17 years, 9 months ago) |
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this is kind of a love poem i guess...any and all comments are appreciated and taken to the heart
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i know im gonna make it nothing less than success just wish i had the One to get this stress off my chest
either rich or poor its completely irrelevant i just want a sweet girl that can match my intelligence
Someone to wake up to just to watch Her sleep kisses on Her forehead while She takes Her breaths so deep
am I all alone? is the One out there? been searching all my life for the girl that will care
too young for true love no care for fake lust leave a little piece of my heart with every girl that I trust
sick of all the games often hang my head in shame payne was given as my name so i guess i cant complain
because if you want to get to heaven you?ve got to walk through lonely hell fire all around me feel like an empty shell
soul searching takes patience a blessing i wont allow always in a rush why can?t i have Her now?
this pain will help me one day what doesn?t kill you makes you stronger but everyday i feel i cant hold on any longer
and if i make it to the End still waiting all alone ill have wasted my most treasured gift my passion will have no home
i can love like no one else but i may never love again when you lose your heart so young its hard to make amends
this is not a poem about anyone ive met once i meet the girl for me, i know i wont forget i see visions in my dreams but i haven?t found You yet still alone in the storm, teary eyed and soaking wet
do You feel the same pain? is there an absence in Your soul? am I the piece to Your puzzle? will We make each other whole?
ill fight on through my loneliness getting stronger every day waiting for the moment when our paths cross the other?s way
i don?t know how it will happen but once it does ill hold you tight we both made it through the struggle of the long lonely night
and now We spend Our nights together making passionate Love until the dawn cant believe I once was lonely You had me all along
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zappa
please excusethe filth, yourmom was justhere


Registered: 02/23/06
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its really nice. how long have you been writing?
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I GARY SINISE!!!!
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PurpleKush
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Re: love poem [Re: zappa]
#5487692 - 04/06/06 08:12 PM (17 years, 9 months ago) |
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i guess you could either say my entire life or about 1 week. im always putting words together in my head. playing with rhymes, taking other peoples phrases and changing them to suit my taste, changing lyrics in my head. i don't know why i started putting words down, i just felt like it would help one day. and it did. thanks for the comment, too.
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