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InvisibleYarry
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Since my poems were ridiculed in OTD
    #3473422 - 12/09/04 11:43 PM (11 years, 11 months ago)

I guess ill post here.. anyways my dad had a very bad incident with his diabetes tonite and had to go to the hosp.. it set me to writing:

lovely desert,
all around,
murdered trees
and dried up ground.
not a creature
in my sight
all are dead
their bones bleached white.
no one travels
out on the sand
not a mouse
not a man.
all thats there
is death and trap
would you like
a verbal map?
If you listened
from the start
you would know
this is my heart.



Wilted Flower
Used to live
Now it dies
No more then an empty shell
The beauty that once was rots
and will provide food to the next flower
Unless the rotted is unwilling;
Passing on to others
is not something needed
But something done of ones own love
But when one cannot love
the garden wilts.
Forever


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Grumpy Old Man.


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OfflineWysefool
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Re: Since my poems were ridiculed in OTD [Re: Yarry]
    #3473517 - 12/10/04 12:02 AM (11 years, 11 months ago)

Nice work, I especially like the second one. But how can the rotted flower choose to not become food? Oh well I guess literally it doesn't work but in the context you use it it makes perfect sense.


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Offlinekadakuda
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Re: Since my poems were ridiculed in OTD [Re: Yarry]
    #3473581 - 12/10/04 12:15 AM (11 years, 11 months ago)

Not a poetry guy myself btu the second one is cool. definatly fitting.

good luck with your pops. diabetes can be very scary, chin up.


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Re: Since my poems were ridiculed in OTD [Re: kadakuda]
    #3473792 - 12/10/04 12:55 AM (11 years, 11 months ago)

Nice poems. Good luck with your dad, bro


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Re: Since my poems were ridiculed in OTD [Re: License_to_Chill]
    #3474109 - 12/10/04 01:49 AM (11 years, 11 months ago)

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License_to_Chill said:
Nice poems.  Good luck with your dad, bro




:lol:


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