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Rate my Poem (Short Poem)
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Rate between 1 and 5. "One" being putrid vomit and "five" being fluffy gold edible candy from heaven.

Well, here goes nothing:

Decapitated body, thats not even bloody, please shovel those pills down my neck.
Dip me in gold, and preserve me in honey. Then sell me on Ebay, we'll make lot's of money.

Ok, thanks for reading. Please rate me:) I know that this may be the one .....Im a struggling poet that wants to make it big..


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When it comes
I'll know, I know
Just take my clothes and leave
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Re: Rate my Poem (Short Poem) [Re: Northernsoul]
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I give it a ?

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Re: Rate my Poem (Short Poem) [Re: Northernsoul]
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Wrong forum

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Re: Rate my Poem (Short Poem) [Re: Northernsoul]
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i dont like it. it has no point
write about something clear


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God says dance with your heart
And shake free of you desire

Where theres a will theres always a way
When you get confused listen to the music play


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Re: Rate my Poem (Short Poem) [Re: CerebralFlower]
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No worries:) I couldnt care less about it...I just thaught it was a weird poem.....

Oh...and The Pub is almost like a censored OTD forum or something...I see just about the same kind of posts in here as I do over there.....I never really understood the point of THE PUB.....Does anyone here follow this forum more than any of the other forums? Just curious.


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I'll know, I know
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Re: Rate my Poem (Short Poem) [Re: Northernsoul]
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hahahaah i love the poem.

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Re: Rate my Poem (Short Poem) [Re: Northernsoul]
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4 for funny


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Yes, with my own three eyes.
Depression, Misspells , wanting everying thing i cant have haveing nothing i want

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Re: Rate my Poem (Short Poem) [Re: CerebralFlower]
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CerebralFlower said:
i dont like it. it has no point
write about something clear



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Sometimes karma needs a little help.

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Re: Rate my Poem (Short Poem) [Re: BigNerd]
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Not bad, but it could use work. I'll give it a 3. This poem can be used for those who aren't on the same page as you. 


"Cut the throats of those who despise, let them see the world through your eyes.  Choking on my pain and misery, they'll never live to be 23." 
  -SporeX- :3rd_eye:

I hope this gives you insight.  Never give up on what you cherish.


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Behold on the horizon a pale horse, and behind it hell followed.

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Re: Rate my Poem (Short Poem) [Re: Northernsoul]
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Northernsoul said:
No worries:) I couldnt care less about it...I just thaught it was a weird poem.....

Oh...and The Pub is almost like a censored OTD forum or something...I see just about the same kind of posts in here as I do over there.....I never really understood the point of THE PUB.....Does anyone here follow this forum more than any of the other forums? Just curious.


Man the pub is much better than OTD.  I see how they are like when it comes to general talk but, but its nice to have two froums since the OTD is more for immature chaotic talk whilst the pub is for more pleasant conversation.  If they were one and the same it would be annoying to scroll through all the stupid threads to get to one that makes sense... no offense to the otd but I like tohang out here more than there, that hello.jpg is just scary :shocked:!

I would rather not rate the poem, is it a serious poem?!?!


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Re: Rate my Poem (Short Poem) [Re: Northernsoul]
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Northernsoul said:
No worries:) I couldnt care less about it...I just thaught it was a weird poem.....

Oh...and The Pub is almost like a censored OTD forum or something...I see just about the same kind of posts in here as I do over there.....I never really understood the point of THE PUB.....Does anyone here follow this forum more than any of the other forums? Just curious.


this is the only forum here I read on a consistent basis... the rest I just scan through and read if anything catches my eye.. but the pub rocks.
maybe because of all the  :beer: +  :gd_icon: +  :stash: +  :heartpump: +  :mushroom2: =  :thumbup:


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Re: Rate my Poem (Short Poem) [Re: Northernsoul]
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Definitely a 1. If I could give you a zero I would of.


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Words of Wisdom: Individual Rights BEFORE Collective Rights

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Re: Rate my Poem (Short Poem) [Re: RunDMT]
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I would say "B"


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The bus came by and I got on that's when it all began!


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Re: Rate my Poem (Short Poem) [Re: filthysock]
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poop

Edited by PsiloSteve (03/15/04 04:36 PM)

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Re: Rate my Poem (Short Poem) [Re: PsiloSteve]
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:noway: :devil: :noway:  :rasta::noway: :noway: :yawn: :noway: :noway: :nonono: :rolleyes: :noway: :noway: :noway: :noway: :lol: :tongue: :noway: :smile: :noway: :noway: :noway: :biggrin: :noway: :noway: :noway: :thumbdown: :shiftyeyes: :noway: :noway: :noway: :oogle: :oogle: :oogle: :tongue2: :oogle: :noway: :nonono: :nonono:  :thumbdown::noway: :razz: :yawn: :razz: :razz:

                                                                  (above)The audience as I saw it while reading this poem aloud to them...


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When it comes
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Re: Rate my Poem (Short Poem) [Re: Northernsoul]
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Pop culture references are like wine. I like in-line rhymes. 4.


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if(human==autoPart){
for(i=1;i<infinity;i++){
getBorn(mind,soul);
getEdu(mind,soul);
getJob(mind,soul);
retire(mind,soul);
die(mind,soul);
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Re: Rate my Poem (Short Poem) [Re: Northernsoul]
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Northernsoul said:
:noway: :devil: :noway:  :rasta::noway: :noway: :yawn: :noway: :noway: :nonono: :rolleyes: :noway: :noway: :noway: :noway: :lol: :tongue: :noway: :smile: :noway: :noway: :noway: :biggrin: :noway: :noway: :noway: :thumbdown: :shiftyeyes: :noway: :noway: :noway: :oogle: :oogle: :oogle: :tongue2: :oogle: :noway: :nonono: :nonono:  :thumbdown::noway: :razz: :yawn: :razz: :razz:

                                                                  (above)The audience as I saw it while reading this poem aloud to them...


LOL!  hehe, yeah I see what you mean!


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