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OfflineNorthernsoul
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Rate my Poem (Short Poem)
    #2431941 - 03/14/04 06:51 PM (13 years, 5 months ago)

Rate between 1 and 5. "One" being putrid vomit and "five" being fluffy gold edible candy from heaven.

Well, here goes nothing:

Decapitated body, thats not even bloody, please shovel those pills down my neck.
Dip me in gold, and preserve me in honey. Then sell me on Ebay, we'll make lot's of money.


Ok, thanks for reading. Please rate me:) I know that this may be the one .....Im a struggling poet that wants to make it big..


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InvisibleRunDMT
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Re: Rate my Poem (Short Poem) [Re: Northernsoul]
    #2431962 - 03/14/04 06:58 PM (13 years, 5 months ago)

I give it a ?


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Re: Rate my Poem (Short Poem) [Re: Northernsoul]
    #2431974 - 03/14/04 07:01 PM (13 years, 5 months ago)

Wrong forum


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OfflineCerebralFlower
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Re: Rate my Poem (Short Poem) [Re: Northernsoul]
    #2432031 - 03/14/04 07:27 PM (13 years, 5 months ago)

i dont like it. it has no point
write about something clear


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OfflineNorthernsoul
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Re: Rate my Poem (Short Poem) [Re: CerebralFlower]
    #2432072 - 03/14/04 07:41 PM (13 years, 5 months ago)

No worries:) I couldnt care less about it...I just thaught it was a weird poem.....

Oh...and The Pub is almost like a censored OTD forum or something...I see just about the same kind of posts in here as I do over there.....I never really understood the point of THE PUB.....Does anyone here follow this forum more than any of the other forums? Just curious.


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OfflineThe_Red_Crayon
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Re: Rate my Poem (Short Poem) [Re: Northernsoul]
    #2432198 - 03/14/04 08:19 PM (13 years, 5 months ago)

hahahaah i love the poem.


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Re: Rate my Poem (Short Poem) [Re: Northernsoul]
    #2432259 - 03/14/04 08:39 PM (13 years, 5 months ago)

4 for funny


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Re: Rate my Poem (Short Poem) [Re: CerebralFlower]
    #2432263 - 03/14/04 08:42 PM (13 years, 5 months ago)

Quote:

CerebralFlower said:
i dont like it. it has no point
write about something clear




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Re: Rate my Poem (Short Poem) [Re: BigNerd]
    #2433726 - 03/15/04 04:15 AM (13 years, 5 months ago)

Not bad, but it could use work. I'll give it a 3. This poem can be used for those who aren't on the same page as you. 


"Cut the throats of those who despise, let them see the world through your eyes.  Choking on my pain and misery, they'll never live to be 23." 
  -SporeX- :3rd_eye:

I hope this gives you insight.  Never give up on what you cherish.


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Re: Rate my Poem (Short Poem) [Re: Northernsoul]
    #2433738 - 03/15/04 04:24 AM (13 years, 5 months ago)

Quote:

Northernsoul said:
No worries:) I couldnt care less about it...I just thaught it was a weird poem.....

Oh...and The Pub is almost like a censored OTD forum or something...I see just about the same kind of posts in here as I do over there.....I never really understood the point of THE PUB.....Does anyone here follow this forum more than any of the other forums? Just curious.




Man the pub is much better than OTD.  I see how they are like when it comes to general talk but, but its nice to have two froums since the OTD is more for immature chaotic talk whilst the pub is for more pleasant conversation.  If they were one and the same it would be annoying to scroll through all the stupid threads to get to one that makes sense... no offense to the otd but I like tohang out here more than there, that hello.jpg is just scary :shocked:!

I would rather not rate the poem, is it a serious poem?!?!


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Re: Rate my Poem (Short Poem) [Re: Northernsoul]
    #2433788 - 03/15/04 04:46 AM (13 years, 5 months ago)

Quote:

Northernsoul said:
No worries:) I couldnt care less about it...I just thaught it was a weird poem.....

Oh...and The Pub is almost like a censored OTD forum or something...I see just about the same kind of posts in here as I do over there.....I never really understood the point of THE PUB.....Does anyone here follow this forum more than any of the other forums? Just curious.




this is the only forum here I read on a consistent basis... the rest I just scan through and read if anything catches my eye.. but the pub rocks.
maybe because of all the  :beer::gd_icon::stash::heartpump::mushroom2::thumbup:


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Re: Rate my Poem (Short Poem) [Re: Northernsoul]
    #2433904 - 03/15/04 07:05 AM (13 years, 5 months ago)

Definitely a 1. If I could give you a zero I would of.


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Re: Rate my Poem (Short Poem) [Re: RunDMT]
    #2434468 - 03/15/04 12:41 PM (13 years, 5 months ago)

I would say "B"


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Re: Rate my Poem (Short Poem) [Re: filthysock]
    #2435793 - 03/15/04 06:33 PM (13 years, 5 months ago)

poop


Edited by PsiloSteve (03/15/04 06:36 PM)


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Re: Rate my Poem (Short Poem) [Re: PsiloSteve]
    #2452262 - 03/19/04 06:52 PM (13 years, 5 months ago)

:noway: :devil: :noway:  :rasta::noway: :noway: :yawn: :noway: :noway: :nonono: :rolleyes: :noway: :noway: :noway: :noway: :lol: :tongue: :noway: :smile: :noway: :noway: :noway: :biggrin: :noway: :noway: :noway: :thumbdown: :shiftyeyes: :noway: :noway: :noway: :oogle: :oogle: :oogle: :tongue2: :oogle: :noway: :nonono: :nonono:  :thumbdown::noway: :razz: :yawn: :razz: :razz:

                                                                  (above)The audience as I saw it while reading this poem aloud to them...


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Re: Rate my Poem (Short Poem) [Re: Northernsoul]
    #2452309 - 03/19/04 07:08 PM (13 years, 5 months ago)

Pop culture references are like wine. I like in-line rhymes. 4.


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Re: Rate my Poem (Short Poem) [Re: Northernsoul]
    #2452369 - 03/19/04 07:27 PM (13 years, 5 months ago)

Quote:

Northernsoul said:
:noway: :devil: :noway:  :rasta::noway: :noway: :yawn: :noway: :noway: :nonono: :rolleyes: :noway: :noway: :noway: :noway: :lol: :tongue: :noway: :smile: :noway: :noway: :noway: :biggrin: :noway: :noway: :noway: :thumbdown: :shiftyeyes: :noway: :noway: :noway: :oogle: :oogle: :oogle: :tongue2: :oogle: :noway: :nonono: :nonono:  :thumbdown::noway: :razz: :yawn: :razz: :razz:

                                                                  (above)The audience as I saw it while reading this poem aloud to them...




LOL!  hehe, yeah I see what you mean!


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