Mafeki said:

I actually didn't make up this poem, I just used this site: Watchout4snakes.
I use it for a creativity tool, I think you're talking about Metre, I understand it a little I understand rhymes even better so I can implement it in songwriting. I learned most of the stuff I know from a book called "writing better lyrics".

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sonnet -

Prosody . a poem, properly expressive of a single, complete thought, idea, or sentiment, of 14 lines, usually in iambic pentameter, with rhymes arranged according to one of certain definite schemes, being in the strict or Italian form divided into a major group of 8 lines (the octave) followed by a minor group of 6 lines (the sestet), and in a common English form into 3 quatrains followed by a couplet.
http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/sonnet

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My mistress' eyes are nothing like the sun;
Coral is far more red than her lips' red;
If snow be white, why then her breasts are dun;
If hairs be wires, black wires grow on her head.
I have seen roses damask'd, red and white,
But no such roses see I in her cheeks;
And in some perfumes is there more delight
Than in the breath that from my mistress reeks.
I love to hear her speak, yet well I know
That music hath a far more pleasing sound;
I grant I never saw a goddess go;
My mistress, when she walks, treads on the ground:
  And yet, by heaven, I think my love as rare
  As any she belied with false compare.

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iamb -
(Literature / Poetry) a metrical foot consisting of two syllables, a short one followed by a long one (˘ ¯)
http://www.thefreedictionary.com/iamb

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Mafeki said:

Your stretched corpse bicycles within the heroin.
Sex dodges above the metal orbit.
How does skill ink the future postscript?
My surface chops the viewer.
Sex learns Skill.

A vicar dines behind the commissioned age.
Should a fabric advertise?
Icelander speculates in my lust.
How will icelander prime diploid?
The arc conforms icelander.
Diploid dooms icelander with your trivial arithmetic.

Does the exact sacrifice wave the mayor?
Should the sober caffeine reason inside the constant?
The resolve treks with the directory sigh.
The subsidiary garble strays around a ringing art.
An astronomer rips our innovative sand.
The blast harms a warning nostalgia.

Should shroomery jail a juice?
The surrounding nurse breaks shroomery.
How will shroomery lose?
Will moderators format each utter ghost?
How will shroomery defeat moderators?
Moderators prosecutes shroomery.

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teknix said:

Line 13: "Should the sober caffeine reason inside the constant?"

This really captures my attention beginning with the oxymoron "sober caffeine" which makes me think of decafinated coffee, The "sober caffeine" is not only an oxymoron but also being personified by being gifted the ability to "reason" and rationale seems to be a uniquely human trait. So you could possibly be depersonifying yourself in the form of a question, and wrote this while you were mostly sober? Was the 13th line a question or dilemma to continue through life sober? You have the option to insert two words "diploid, icelander, shroomery, moderator" were four words I used for two of them.

I'm really curious about that and hope you can shed some light on that line for me.

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xFrockx said:

Will a governor abort?
The symptom aids Murder after her demented funeral.
The mental beach migrates beneath a mummy.
Murder smiles Sex in a substitute.
Sex trashes Murder.
Sex plagues a robot.

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