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NoxNoctum
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Poem I wrote

#13097455 - 08/24/10 08:31 PM (16 years, 1 month ago)

Doesn't have a title... haven't come up with one yet. My doctor/therapist (he's not a shrink, but we sort of have "shrink like" sessions because all the shrinks I saw before pissed me off but I like this guy) asked me what one thing I was good at it. I said English (perfect score on verbal part of SAT wohoo :P). He wanted me to write a poem for him.

Anyways... thought I'd share. It's basically about an experience I had in the woods while on 16mg of 2c-e. I don't like to talk about my poems' meanings usually... so take from it what you will. You can interpret God as being that ethereal "universal force" that you feel when tripping, or as some psychological disorder I have (if you're an atheist :smirk:

). But when I wrote this, I was and am referring to Jesus Christ.

So... ya here it is:

When I looked upon the Fractals in the Sky
I wondered how You could Love one such as I
For these fractals, though beautiful, beyond human comprehension
Next to your pure Glory, I knew, they be not worth one small mention

And so I sat, and thought, and begged for mercy
Liberation from my prison, deliverance into ecstasy
Whether by death or healing, I cared naught
For my mind was filled only with darkness of thought

Tears began to stream down my face... I felt no darkness, but I knew it was a temporary place
I asked you to free me, to let me stay there... yet you did not answer, and were silent
How can I know your love, oh my LORD and God, if you turn a blind eye to my terrors?
How can I know your mercy, if you are deaf to my cries.

Give me the soul of David I pray, each and every day.

Will you answer? Or will I end in decay.

Edited by NoxNoctum (08/24/10 09:04 PM)

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nopalero
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Registered: 08/04/10
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Re: Poem I wrote

[Re: NoxNoctum]
#13097499 - 08/24/10 08:39 PM (16 years, 1 month ago)

1+1=3

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the dinosaurs will be back.
only that which has passed can be predicted.
life is both a mirror and a window.

THE GRAYS HOPE TO WIN. STOP. RAINBOW NEEDED URGENTLY.

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