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thatiAM
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new song (which is badass): the pulse
#6429124 - 01/05/07 07:52 PM (17 years, 2 months ago) |
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http://myspace.com/scarletmeadow
It's the pulse...sort of like a human pulse.
Let me hear what you think.
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Penguarky Tunguin
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Re: new song (which is badass): the pulse [Re: thatiAM]
#6429242 - 01/05/07 08:15 PM (17 years, 2 months ago) |
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It's badass.
-------------------- Every mistake, intentional or otherwise, in the above post, is the fault of the reader.
Edited by Penguarky Tunguin (01/05/07 08:44 PM)
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Syle
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too repetitive for my tastes. sorry.
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plexus
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Re: new song (which is badass): the pulse [Re: Syle]
#6429775 - 01/05/07 11:32 PM (17 years, 2 months ago) |
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sorry, i didnt like it at all. sloppy.
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thatiAM
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Re: new song (which is badass): the pulse [Re: plexus]
#6429871 - 01/06/07 12:45 AM (17 years, 2 months ago) |
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No sorries needed.
Regardless of sloppy repetitiveness I still thoroughly enjoy it
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Re: new song (which is badass): the pulse [Re: thatiAM]
#6430155 - 01/06/07 04:19 AM (17 years, 2 months ago) |
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yeah... gotta admit..... that shit blows..... on multiple levels.
It sounds like 2 downs syndrome kids trying to play guitar and dodge feces flung from a third mental invalid. Im sure the song has a face only its mother could love.... but I still have to congratulate whomever it is that grows your weed.
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Re: new song (which is badass): the pulse [Re: thatiAM]
#6430215 - 01/06/07 05:12 AM (17 years, 2 months ago) |
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Well, its a start. I'd recommend, firstly, incorporating some percussion into the song. You need some drums in there, and that might help the structure of the song as well.
Secondly, I wouldn't rely on so much effects, personally. Work more on the melody and interesting ways of phrasing it. Chorus and reverb, perhaps a slight delay on select parts...
Thirdly, referring to anything as "bad ass" is not desireable. There are much less retarded ways of expressing that one thinks something is cool.
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Re: new song (which is badass): the pulse [Re: fireworks_god]
#6430832 - 01/06/07 11:28 AM (17 years, 2 months ago) |
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Quote:
fireworks_god said: Thirdly, referring to anything as "bad ass" is not desireable. There are much less retarded ways of expressing that one thinks something is cool.
You mean like ass bad?
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plexus
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Re: new song (which is badass): the pulse [Re: thatiAM]
#6431325 - 01/06/07 02:09 PM (17 years, 2 months ago) |
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Quote:
thatiAM said:
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fireworks_god said: Thirdly, referring to anything as "bad ass" is not desireable. There are much less retarded ways of expressing that one thinks something is cool.
You mean like ass bad?
hahahahaha. at least you got a good sense of humor thats for sure. youre good at taking criticism. its not as bad as that one guy said. it just doesnt really go anyway stays a bit monotonous. keep working on stuff.
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Re: new song (which is badass): the pulse [Re: plexus]
#6431381 - 01/06/07 02:30 PM (17 years, 2 months ago) |
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I think it is an attempt at the type of musikk Tool works on, and those are big shoes to fill. The attempt is what develops, so keep at it.
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Re: new song (which is badass): the pulse [Re: plexus]
#6449054 - 01/11/07 02:26 PM (17 years, 2 months ago) |
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revised it, available at same link if interested
i agree it kind of doesn't go anywhere. i don't know why, but it still satisfies me. i will just pretend it is in the genre of ambient music.
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