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DannyT
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A new song (dnb/ambient influenced)
#4777575 - 10/09/05 03:26 PM (18 years, 5 months ago) |
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This is my latest working of a song in progress. I want to keep it short and sweet. Leave any kind of feedback regarding it, good and bad
-------------------- Oh, no, man, I feel weird I'm trying to get the motherfucking fuck out of here Before there's flowers here And sour tears
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Re: A new song (dnb/ambient influenced) [Re: DannyT]
#4779791 - 10/09/05 11:04 PM (18 years, 5 months ago) |
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damn fine piece man! ye been progressing i can see. at first i was a little iffy, i think the intro could use something, but once the drums were in full swing it was superb. It did sound very very digital, but that's damn hard to avoid. I felt some of the quicker-paced voices could've used a little more distinction to differentiate them from the flood of almost church organ sines. personally i'd probably put in a beefy square-wave bassline & turn down the onslaught of sines a bit, but what you have going here is beautifully hypnotic. the first listen i forgot that i was listening to music and had to re-play it to analyze it properly. that little breakdown-fizzle near the end was really satisfying, i kept waiting and waiting for that little suspenseful lull and when it didn't come I'd given up on it- then it came ina form I didn't expect. overall magnificent work my friend, don't stop. If ye don't mind my asking, what software/hardware did you utilize to play this?
-------------------- yeeeahh, it's gonna be well wicked
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Re: A new song (dnb/ambient influenced) [Re: DannyT]
#4780727 - 10/10/05 02:49 AM (18 years, 5 months ago) |
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at first listen it sounded nice, I'll give feedback later when I have more time
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DannyT
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Re: A new song (dnb/ambient influenced) [Re: DannyT]
#4782498 - 10/10/05 01:00 PM (18 years, 5 months ago) |
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Fruity loops, with orchestral/absynth 3/sytrus. Adobe audition for all of the after processing.
And much thanks for the feedback =D
-------------------- Oh, no, man, I feel weird I'm trying to get the motherfucking fuck out of here Before there's flowers here And sour tears
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Re: A new song (dnb/ambient influenced) [Re: DannyT]
#4803478 - 10/14/05 01:24 PM (18 years, 5 months ago) |
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Real good stuff... It builds quite nicely, with some great textural additives. once again, you've done a great job with percussion--that's always been your forte.
The way you tweak the drums, ever thought about doing that to the harmony/pads? I know that the small details is what directs the focus and attention on a specific part, but this you can use to your advantage on what the listener should be paying most attention in certain parts of the tune.
the breakdown/sputter fucking rocks btw. as does the ending.
well done buddy!
-------------------- Blas'?trid (bl?s tr?d) n. 3rd generation derivitave of a combination of 'bastard' and 'blasted'. Used as both an insult or an expletive. ex. Blastrid! Stereopattern <--My music.
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Re: A new song (dnb/ambient influenced) [Re: Blastrid]
#4805741 - 10/14/05 11:30 PM (18 years, 5 months ago) |
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The soft synth in the background could use a better more analogue sound, perhaps kill the intial attack everytime you change notes and make it more legato if possible.
You need to tune the drums down a bit, perhaps more of that 8-bit feel to them, kinda of simplify or at least add a faded filter sound to it so its not so "in your face".
That 8th note running tune you have in the background is kickass, you need to bring that out a little more.
Overall, cool song. Has kind of an oldschool game feel to it, i like it.
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Re: A new song (dnb/ambient influenced) [Re: yousuck]
#4808206 - 10/15/05 04:22 PM (18 years, 5 months ago) |
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if thats FL studios, then I'd like to know where you get your drums from. FLP? All I know is i love this track. is that a granulizer at the end? fuck this is a nice track man, although i agree with tuning the drums down just a teensy bit. fuckin awesome man. best dnb original i've heard in a while.
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Re: A new song (dnb/ambient influenced) [Re: indica]
#4808295 - 10/15/05 05:00 PM (18 years, 5 months ago) |
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It is Flstudio.. version 5-something. The drums.. im not really sure where i found those at...It's been a year or two since i found those.
The ending is just playing around with time stretching in Adobe Audition. Very much thanks to all of the feedback ladies and gents
-------------------- Oh, no, man, I feel weird I'm trying to get the motherfucking fuck out of here Before there's flowers here And sour tears
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Re: A new song (dnb/ambient influenced) [Re: DannyT]
#4808312 - 10/15/05 05:09 PM (18 years, 5 months ago) |
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5.1? its the latest version. freakin awesome program. check out my track 'mycellium lullabye' in the music, arts forum
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stefan
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Re: A new song (dnb/ambient influenced) [Re: stefan]
#4810158 - 10/16/05 04:48 AM (18 years, 5 months ago) |
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nice one T, best I've heard from you I think indeed good percussion and good work on the reverb with it, adds a nice effect
the first pad in the very beginning needs some EQ I think because they are 'ringing' in the ears
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Re: A new song (dnb/ambient influenced) [Re: stefan]
#4813484 - 10/16/05 10:20 PM (18 years, 5 months ago) |
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Nice, very jungle like, please throw me some trance,, deep hard trance.. thanks
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DannyT
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Re: A new song (dnb/ambient influenced) [Re: Unity333]
#4814875 - 10/17/05 03:05 AM (18 years, 5 months ago) |
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Hey hey, Here is a little thing i was playing around with ... it's some kinda trance i figure ;p Nothing special just a playing around track
-------------------- Oh, no, man, I feel weird I'm trying to get the motherfucking fuck out of here Before there's flowers here And sour tears
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Re: A new song (dnb/ambient influenced) [Re: Unity333]
#4814971 - 10/17/05 04:28 AM (18 years, 5 months ago) |
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Quote:
please throw me some trance,, deep hard trance.. thanks
I'm in the process of making one, finished in a few weeks I guess
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