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OfflineDannyT
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A new song (dnb/ambient influenced)
    #4777575 - 10/09/05 03:26 PM (18 years, 5 months ago)
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This is my latest working of a song in progress.  I want to keep it short and sweet.  Leave any kind of feedback regarding it, good and bad  :laugh:


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Oh, no, man, I feel weird
I'm trying to get the motherfucking fuck out of here
Before there's flowers here
And sour tears



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Re: A new song (dnb/ambient influenced) [Re: DannyT]
    #4779791 - 10/09/05 11:04 PM (18 years, 5 months ago)

damn fine piece man! ye been progressing i can see. at first i was a little iffy, i think the intro could use something, but once the drums were in full swing it was superb. It did sound very very digital, but that's damn hard to avoid. I felt some of the quicker-paced voices could've used a little more distinction to differentiate them from the flood of almost church organ sines. personally i'd probably put in a beefy square-wave bassline & turn down the onslaught of sines a bit, but what you have going here is beautifully hypnotic. the first listen i forgot that i was listening to music and had to re-play it to analyze it properly. that little breakdown-fizzle near the end was really satisfying, i kept waiting and waiting for that little suspenseful lull and when it didn't come I'd given up on it- then it came ina form I didn't expect. overall magnificent work my friend, don't stop.
If ye don't mind my asking, what software/hardware did you utilize to play this?


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yeeeahh, it's gonna be well wicked

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Re: A new song (dnb/ambient influenced) [Re: DannyT]
    #4780727 - 10/10/05 02:49 AM (18 years, 5 months ago)

at first listen it sounded nice, I'll give feedback later when I have more time :thumbup:

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Re: A new song (dnb/ambient influenced) [Re: DannyT]
    #4782498 - 10/10/05 01:00 PM (18 years, 5 months ago)

Fruity loops, with orchestral/absynth 3/sytrus.  Adobe audition for all of the after processing.

And much thanks for the feedback =D  :heart:


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I'm trying to get the motherfucking fuck out of here
Before there's flowers here
And sour tears



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Re: A new song (dnb/ambient influenced) [Re: DannyT]
    #4803478 - 10/14/05 01:24 PM (18 years, 5 months ago)

Real good stuff... It builds quite nicely, with some great textural additives.
once again, you've done a great job with percussion--that's always been your forte.

The way you tweak the drums, ever thought about doing that to the harmony/pads? I know that the small details is what directs the focus and attention on a specific part, but this you can use to your advantage on what the listener should be paying most attention in certain parts of the tune.

the breakdown/sputter fucking rocks btw. as does the ending.

well done buddy!


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Re: A new song (dnb/ambient influenced) [Re: Blastrid]
    #4805741 - 10/14/05 11:30 PM (18 years, 5 months ago)

The soft synth in the background could use a better more analogue sound, perhaps kill the intial attack everytime you change notes and make it more legato if possible.

You need to tune the drums down a bit, perhaps more of that 8-bit feel to them, kinda of simplify or at least add a faded filter sound to it so its not so "in your face".

That 8th note running tune you have in the background is kickass, you need to bring that out a little more.

Overall, cool song. Has kind of an oldschool game feel to it, i like it.

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Re: A new song (dnb/ambient influenced) [Re: yousuck]
    #4808206 - 10/15/05 04:22 PM (18 years, 5 months ago)

if thats FL studios, then I'd like to know where you get your drums from. FLP? All I know is i love this track. is that a granulizer at the end? fuck this is a nice track man, although i agree with tuning the drums down just a teensy bit.
fuckin awesome man. best dnb original i've heard in a while.

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Re: A new song (dnb/ambient influenced) [Re: indica]
    #4808295 - 10/15/05 05:00 PM (18 years, 5 months ago)

It is Flstudio.. version 5-something.  The drums.. im not really sure where i found those at...It's been a year or two since i found those.

The ending is just playing around with time stretching in Adobe Audition.  Very much thanks to all of the feedback ladies and gents  :heart:


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I'm trying to get the motherfucking fuck out of here
Before there's flowers here
And sour tears



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Re: A new song (dnb/ambient influenced) [Re: DannyT]
    #4808312 - 10/15/05 05:09 PM (18 years, 5 months ago)

5.1? its the latest version. freakin awesome program. check out my track 'mycellium lullabye' in the music, arts forum

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Re: A new song (dnb/ambient influenced) [Re: stefan]
    #4810158 - 10/16/05 04:48 AM (18 years, 5 months ago)

nice one T, best I've heard from you I think :cool:
indeed good percussion  and good work on the reverb with it, adds a nice effect :thumbup:

the first pad in the very beginning needs some EQ I think because they are 'ringing' in the ears

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Re: A new song (dnb/ambient influenced) [Re: stefan]
    #4813484 - 10/16/05 10:20 PM (18 years, 5 months ago)

Nice, very jungle like, please throw me some trance,, deep hard trance.. thanks

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Re: A new song (dnb/ambient influenced) [Re: Unity333]
    #4814875 - 10/17/05 03:05 AM (18 years, 5 months ago)
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Hey hey, Here is a little thing i was playing around with ... it's some kinda trance i figure ;p Nothing special just a playing around track


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Oh, no, man, I feel weird
I'm trying to get the motherfucking fuck out of here
Before there's flowers here
And sour tears



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Re: A new song (dnb/ambient influenced) [Re: Unity333]
    #4814971 - 10/17/05 04:28 AM (18 years, 5 months ago)

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please throw me some trance,, deep hard trance.. thanks



I'm in the process of making one, finished in a few weeks I guess :cool:

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