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Offlinebutterflydawn
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new track
    #4561809 - 08/21/05 06:15 AM (11 years, 3 months ago)

hola!

well as you probably know i mostly work on ambient/chill tunes
but this one is a bit different
vocals by me.
poppiest song I've ever made i guess  :grin:

waiting for ur comments
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http://s44.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3GCKCO9RFZ6BS3TN8REVLLZHVY


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Re: new track [Re: butterflydawn]
    #4561817 - 08/21/05 06:29 AM (11 years, 3 months ago)

nice dreamy track, also cool that you did some vocals, it sounds good; you should do that more often! :thumbup:
it's good to try a new style once in a while, you learn a lot from doing that!

I should also put vocals in my tracks, but I think I'll just stick to recording spoken samples because I don't think it will sound good when I sing :tongue2:

maybe you could give the melodies a little bit more high frequencies with an equalizer


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Re: new track [Re: stefan]
    #4563736 - 08/21/05 07:54 PM (11 years, 3 months ago)

I liked it, didn't have to pay too much attention to it to get to the point...didn't like the vocals, however.

Good job


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Re: new track [Re: NosferatuMan]
    #4565626 - 08/22/05 03:42 AM (11 years, 3 months ago)

thank u stefan,
you should try singing too,as you can see my vocals arent good too
nosferatu didnt like

nosferatu,thx for listening
glad u enjoyed too.

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Re: new track [Re: butterflydawn]
    #4589173 - 08/27/05 11:56 PM (11 years, 3 months ago)

Positive criticism
- I think that the tempo can be increased a little.
- At one point the song got angry. I think that through it off.

But then again these are only my perceptions... Songs are open to interpretation.

Other than that it's pretty good.

Keep doing your thang!

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Re: new track [Re: butterflydawn]
    #4589265 - 08/28/05 12:20 AM (11 years, 3 months ago)

Hey kuzi. A very different style for sure. Kinda like housey chill, loungey music. Sorta remind me of the artist Emou. I also agree that the aggressive part isnt good, the vocals there disturb me a little. Other than that I liked the vocals and the track as a whole. Nice experiments :smile:


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Re: new track [Re: butterflydawn]
    #4589761 - 08/28/05 01:58 AM (11 years, 3 months ago)

i just wanted to let you know i listened to it.
i felt that it was kind of slow,
and didnt keep my attention very well.
The vocals could use some work,
but the key to making music is experimenting
so keep doing what you've been doing
and grow with the flow.


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Re: new track [Re: thePatient]
    #4589878 - 08/28/05 02:47 AM (11 years, 3 months ago)

heya!
thx for criticism bigd,ban and the patient.
as i said this track was the most cheesy track I've ever made
i still enjoy it but yeah i kinda find aggressive part's vocals not that good.
maybe i should change it.

i put my track falseawakened in the attachment thread
my true style :wink:
try that too

:heart: Peace&love&freedom :heart:


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