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OfflineTodcasil
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does anyone care about a new song i wrote?
    #3283929 - 10/27/04 01:15 PM (12 years, 1 month ago)

its just lyrics, i havnt recorded anything... and its a bit "folk" sounding... but that is the way i sing em. here are the words if anyone cares.

pillbug



i see you dance with a bottle brown
and little plastic bags as you make your rounds
trying to catch up with your breath

as you crush up little white rounds
you see clear all the habits you kick around
you know this one could be your death

and i know why
you know too much
but the elusive truth
you can never touch
you can never quite touch

& you could break a hundred hearts
because its yours thats falling apart
crumbling down around your soles

all the while you fantasize
about who you might just be inside
i guess youll never know

and you know why
you know too much
but the elusive truth you can never touch
you can never quite touch

(((every time i turned her upside down
she said shed give me all shes found
but of what shes found
can i ever get enough?
will it ever be enough?)))

so dance another day away
inside your head, cuase you never move your feet
you cant even feel the ground

cause when the sickness comes you know your done
you cant prepare your heart for when the euphoria departs
she doesnt love you like you thought

and you know why
you take too much
you came from the earth you wanna go back to dust
youre gonna go back to dust


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Men look at themselves and they see flawed humans, we look at women and we see perfect
GODDESSES
Women look at themselves and they seem utterly human, when looking at men they see proud
GODS.


~Casil



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Re: does anyone care about a new song i wrote? [Re: Todcasil]
    #3284519 - 10/27/04 03:35 PM (12 years, 1 month ago)

sounds good man

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--Krem


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"Human suffering has been caused because all too many of us cannot grasp that words are only tools for our use, and that the mere presence of a word in the dictionary does not mean it necessarily refers to something definitive in the real world"
--Richard Dawkins, "The Selfish Gene"

"It is the mind which creates the world about us, and even though we stand side by side in the same meadow, my eyes will never see what is beheld by yours."
-George Gissing

"Without a firm idea of himself and the purpose of his life, man cannot live, and would sooner destroy himself than remain on earth, even if he was surrounded by bread."
--Fyodor Dostoevsky


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Re: does anyone care about a new song i wrote? [Re: Todcasil]
    #3285481 - 10/27/04 06:41 PM (12 years, 1 month ago)

I dig it. A little hard to pick out the flow, but I can't judge on that unless I hear it anyway.


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Re: does anyone care about a new song i wrote? [Re: JacquesCousteau]
    #3285633 - 10/27/04 07:17 PM (12 years, 1 month ago)

give me some time, and ill have an mp3 up here for you all...

LOTS of time, but it will happen :laugh:


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Women look at themselves and they seem utterly human, when looking at men they see proud
GODS.


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Re: does anyone care about a new song i wrote? [Re: Todcasil]
    #3286003 - 10/27/04 08:19 PM (12 years, 1 month ago)

indeed, good luck. heh.


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Re: does anyone care about a new song i wrote? [Re: JacquesCousteau]
    #3286021 - 10/27/04 08:20 PM (12 years, 1 month ago)

thanks, i just recently have been realizing my dream as a songwriter/singer type.

i have all the skills and the connections, now i just need serendipity.


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GODDESSES
Women look at themselves and they seem utterly human, when looking at men they see proud
GODS.


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Re: does anyone care about a new song i wrote? [Re: Todcasil]
    #3286104 - 10/27/04 08:38 PM (12 years, 1 month ago)

Well you're 2-up on me then, because I don't have any connections and my skills are lacking in 2/3 areas. (I'm a pretty good writer, but my singing and technical guitar skills are both lacking a bit)


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Re: does anyone care about a new song i wrote? [Re: JacquesCousteau]
    #3286206 - 10/27/04 08:55 PM (12 years, 1 month ago)

thats cool! im not the best guitarist, but i have a couple aces up my sleeve and you only two for a full house...


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Men look at themselves and they see flawed humans, we look at women and we see perfect
GODDESSES
Women look at themselves and they seem utterly human, when looking at men they see proud
GODS.


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