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euphoricpoison
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Watch my stand up comedy........... please 4
#21816702 - 06/16/15 09:07 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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Hey shroomery friends, been a while but I still fucking love you guys to death. The shroomery got me through some of the toughest times in my life, bad break ups, jail, 3 years of probation, life. OTD kept me smart and witty with any filth thrown my way, I love the second chance I have in life and life is a lot easer when you are going after your dreams and what you really love, but more importantly it's fun now!
I moved to NYC about 4 years ago to pursue my dreams, climbing up ladders and kicking down doors, constantly learning, and loving. Anyways I wanted to share this, with the one group of people I know will understand it best. Please watch, FB me, follow me on Instagram A_HUNGRY_ARTIST (I'm also a photographer and actor) and always do what you love. Hope all is well, hope you enjoy. Share, critique, love, hate, it's all good.
- Jonathon Marin
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JvF
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Re: Watch my stand up comedy........... please [Re: euphoricpoison]
#21816763 - 06/16/15 09:17 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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Man, i love to hate, but youre really good.
I love standup comedy and watch alot of it.
Your stage presence is excellent, delivery is excellent.
You seem very confident and your movements and way of storytelling is very good.
Now you just need more jokes/stories. Bit with the bank was amazing.
Excellent man, very good stuff
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Edited by JvF (06/16/15 09:23 PM)
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Envix
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Re: Watch my stand up comedy........... please [Re: JvF]
#21816818 - 06/16/15 09:31 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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ish good. i like tongue-in-cheek personally
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Detached
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Re: Watch my stand up comedy........... please [Re: Envix]
#21816990 - 06/16/15 10:12 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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You definitely have a good foundation for what you have going. Keep it up and your stage act will evolve.
Don't be afraid to push boundaries. Comedy is one of the few platforms where it is allowed.
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Seriously_trippin
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Re: Watch my stand up comedy........... please [Re: euphoricpoison]
#21817030 - 06/16/15 10:26 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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Bookmark, stand up is one of the few areas in which I have a lot of knowledge in.
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euphoricpoison
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Thanks guys, that means a lot, I have a lot of stories, and finally getting more confident on stage, loosing my ego and doing it from a place of love, rather than to compete or stress over superficial bullshit. I love the honesty, love and support, really means a lot. I love this community, you guys rock!!!! Hope all is well, sending good vibes to you all!
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PDU
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Re: Watch my stand up comedy........... please [Re: euphoricpoison]
#21817169 - 06/16/15 11:17 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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I enjoyed it - definitely laughed, you are a good story teller.
Perhaps you were playing to the audience, but i found "dude...man..." and excessive swearing to be a distraction/filler.
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kr0nik0
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Re: Watch my stand up comedy........... please [Re: euphoricpoison]
#21817281 - 06/16/15 11:55 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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Awesome! Welcome back man.
I just started using instagram about a month ago but I've been seeing your photography on there (through FB as well) and you have some amazingly beautiful shots. I just checked and you follow me as well under the same handle I use here. I'm the one that posts the "Art Of Vaping" pics if that rings a bell.
I've also seen all your stand up sets posted on youtube.
Keep up the good work. I love how your comedy relates so well not only to my life, but I bet to a lot of other members here as well. My only critique is that I wish your sets were longer.
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Edited by kr0nik0 (06/17/15 12:27 AM)
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Enjoywho
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Re: Watch my stand up comedy........... please [Re: kr0nik0]
#21817298 - 06/17/15 12:04 AM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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I can't open it. The shroomery is dumb on my phone. Can you link it in url form. Click able link.
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Speckles
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Re: Watch my stand up comedy........... please [Re: euphoricpoison]
#21817306 - 06/17/15 12:10 AM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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You made me laugh man 
I'd watch more, like please post more when you got it
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ballsalsa
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Re: Watch my stand up comedy........... please [Re: Speckles]
#21817321 - 06/17/15 12:19 AM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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shit was funny.
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kr0nik0
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Re: Watch my stand up comedy........... please [Re: Enjoywho]
#21817342 - 06/17/15 12:30 AM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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Quote:
Enjoywho said: I can't open it. The shroomery is dumb on my phone. Can you link it in url form. Click able link.
I don't know how to make it clickable but here's the url with some spaces added in so you can copy, paste and then get rid of the spaces.
https:// www .youtube.com/ watch?v=Mgzyh-7Ugg0
If that doesn't work you can just search for his name on youtube (John Marin) and it'll be the newest video he uploaded on there.
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Seriously_trippin
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Re: Watch my stand up comedy........... please [Re: euphoricpoison]
#21817402 - 06/17/15 12:52 AM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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It was funny man,I agree you didn't need to cuss that much but it was still very good. I liked the homeless/coinstar bit . It took you a minute to go from pretty general to talking about funny shit you observe in your life. It could use some refining and more smooth delivery but you're very hood man.
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akira_akuma
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Re: Watch my stand up comedy........... please [Re: euphoricpoison]
#21817449 - 06/17/15 01:06 AM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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Your performance in the Brooklyn comedy club was much better delivery of the jokes imo. Still great. Also maybe look into the fact that the U.S. government did try to weaponize marijuana in the 50s in a similar way to what you described. I think you have so much potential though.
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akira_akuma
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the delivery was really what suffered here. if you're gonna be doing stand up black comedy you gotta deliver in much more nonchalant way or else suffer silence.
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Rebelutionsssss
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Re: Watch my stand up comedy........... please [Re: akira_akuma]
#21817467 - 06/17/15 01:13 AM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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There you fucking go dude! I thought it was hillarious
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kr0nik0
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Re: Watch my stand up comedy........... please [Re: akira_akuma]
#21817472 - 06/17/15 01:15 AM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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If you check out some of his sets from over a year ago his delivery used to be quite a bit different.
Imo the delivery was better and he had some hilarious jokes/stories about running from the cops on coke, tripping on psychedelics, etc. It's good stuff.
I believe he's also been in quite a few episodes of Gotham as well as other popular TV shows but with mostly non speaking roles. If you have a FB account I really suggest sending him a friend request. He's one of the few people on my news feed that posts things worth reading and/or watching.
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“[...]the only people for me are the mad ones, the ones who are mad to live, mad to talk, mad to be saved, desirous of everything at the same time, the ones who never yawn or say a commonplace thing, but burn, burn, burn like fabulous yellow roman candles exploding like spiders across the stars and in the middle you see the blue centerlight pop and everybody goes “Awww!”
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Oeric McKenna
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Re: Watch my stand up comedy........... please [Re: kr0nik0]
#21817494 - 06/17/15 01:27 AM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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Poasting to watch laterrr
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Re: Watch my stand up comedy........... please [Re: Oeric McKenna]
#21817516 - 06/17/15 01:46 AM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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Hahaha!
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