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OfflineSpooge
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What you think of my new song?
    #7907260 - 01/20/08 08:45 PM (16 years, 12 days ago)
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You like it? It still needs something more, possibly a bass line, but it's close to finished I think.


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Re: What you think of my new song? [Re: Spooge]
    #7907282 - 01/20/08 08:50 PM (16 years, 12 days ago)

Some constructive critixism... 



The whole first minute sounds like it's building up to something, but then it just switches back to the basic beginning beat.  If it's a song without lyrics that's cool, but I can't imagine what it would sound like with words to it.  :shrug:


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Re: What you think of my new song? [Re: Spooge]
    #7907285 - 01/20/08 08:50 PM (16 years, 12 days ago)

A bass line and a badass metal climax. I listened to the entire thing waiting for the climax that never came.


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Re: What you think of my new song? [Re: Newbie]
    #7907307 - 01/20/08 08:55 PM (16 years, 12 days ago)

hey cool. Actually, I did write some lyrics for it. I can see what you mean about waiting for something that doesn't come though. The other poster also mentioned this. Maybe I'll have to work on it some more.

I play entirely different riffs until the 2:00 mark though. And then I start over.

It sort of breaks down like this:

the structure as follows, roughly(the times are when it starts and is just approx.)

Intro A - 0
Intro B - 20
Intro C - 28
Verse 1A - 44
Verse 1B - 1:00
Pre Chorus - 1:27
Chorus - 1:43
Verse 2A - 2:00
Verse 2B - 2:16
Pre Chorus - 2:43
Chorus - 3:00
Some sort of bridge thingy - 3:16
Pre Chorus - 4:03
chorus - 4:19
outro (Intro C fading out) - 4:35


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Re: What you think of my new song? [Re: Spooge]
    #7907332 - 01/20/08 09:01 PM (16 years, 12 days ago)

Sounds good to me, throw a sitar in the mix if you can...

What software/hardware did you use to record it?


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Re: What you think of my new song? [Re: Observer]
    #7907417 - 01/20/08 09:16 PM (16 years, 12 days ago)

I used a Tradition acoustic(not a dean acoustic) and believe it or not, the rock band microphone to record it.

I first came up with some drum beats in fruity loops(which I'm very new at, so I'm not sure if I'm really doing it right. I don't know much about the drums) and then loaded that file in cool edit and played along with my acoustic.


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Re: What you think of my new song? [Re: Spooge]
    #7907429 - 01/20/08 09:19 PM (16 years, 12 days ago)

I really like that man.:thumbup:


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Re: What you think of my new song? [Re: CokedUpHobit64]
    #7907444 - 01/20/08 09:21 PM (16 years, 12 days ago)

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CokedUpHobit64 said:
I really like that man.:thumbup:




thanks :smile:

I'm still working on it though.  I might re record the rythm...maybe deliver a little better on that "build up" the others were talking about.


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