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A poem I wrote.
    #7518774 - 10/15/07 09:27 AM (16 years, 3 months ago)

This is a poem I wrote when I was feeling pretty low one day. The original is on the back of a Quattro Club membership application. I wrote it in traffic, on my way back to work from lunch.

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I miss you.
I lost you,
and would you comeback if I told you I was sorry, and I didn't mean to drive you away?
You wreck me, and you twist me around, and you turn me upside down.
I love you, and everything you do. I miss the way you smile, and I miss the way you talk, and I miss your voice, and I miss your touch, and I miss your smell.
All of your clothes all over our room, I miss that too.
I love you,
I lost you.


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WAFFLEZZ!!!11!!!1!!!1!!!!


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Re: A poem I wrote. [Re: Sunny]
    #7518858 - 10/15/07 10:04 AM (16 years, 3 months ago)

we are the hollow men
we are the stuffed men


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Re: A poem I wrote. [Re: TheCow]
    #7518946 - 10/15/07 10:56 AM (16 years, 3 months ago)

I wrote a really stellar (at least in my opinion) poem the other day, about people as flowers. Unfortunately, I gave the only copy I have to the woman I wrote it about.

I'll try and get it back from her one of these days, at least long enough to copy it.


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Re: A poem I wrote. [Re: Sunny]
    #7518982 - 10/15/07 11:13 AM (16 years, 3 months ago)

"People that read their poetry in public may have other nasty habits"
Heinlein

JK


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Re: A poem I wrote. [Re: El Zorro]
    #7518990 - 10/15/07 11:16 AM (16 years, 3 months ago)

Quote:

El Zorro said:
"People that read their poetry in public may have other nasty habits"
Heinlein





Oh, I have all kinds of horrible habits. :pills::blazed::faded:


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