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MystikMushroom
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My poem...audio too!
#5800878 - 06/28/06 09:19 PM (17 years, 7 months ago) |
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Here's a poem that I wrote for a "certain someone" that has caught my eye. I wrote it on the 25th, but tonight decided that I wanted to record it to music. I picked the song, "Gortoz A Ran" by Hans Zimmer for the background music.
I'm using a Logitec USB mic, Audacity, Nero Soundtrax, and Adobe Audition 2.0
I'm still learning how to use all this software...but I wanted to share this heart-felt message beyond just myself...
I'm debating on giving this poem away to her...I'm not sure her reaction. But who dosen't like to be told they are loved...right?
Here's the linky...
web page
Here's the actual verbage used:
Looking into your eyes, I see myself reflected. A perfect creation– No lies or deception.
Gracefull you move, like a leaf in the sky flirting with air… I watch you flutter by.
Longing inside to share my core Wanting to show you what I have in store…
Unbridled emotion from the essence of my soul, A total union…together, in spirit my goal.
Your energy is electric, somtimes eclectic, myself I’ve found…now totally infected.
Deep inside I can feel your mind.. and I manifest joy of the purest kind.
Yearning for union, a completeness of one… bound together, our destiny, under one sun.
Inside of you I see myself, the best of the best, full of vitallity and zest
You insipire, you drive, and push my being But my surface emotions are all you are seeing…
Join me, together we can take on this place– Admist the chaos of this industrialist rat-race.
I call out to you each night before sleep, knowing you feel each telepathic peep. . .
And just as I drift off.. into the darkness of night… Miles are between us, But I can still feel your light.
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Thats what I've got...
Edited by MystikMushroom (06/28/06 09:20 PM)
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MystikMushroom
I RULE YOU!
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Re: My poem...audio too! [Re: Ngalyod]
#5812691 - 07/02/06 02:53 PM (17 years, 6 months ago) |
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WOW!!!!!!
THANKS for ALL THE SUPPORT AND FEEDBACK! 
not...
Anyway, not that I really thought anyone on here would care/listen[/b] to some bleeding heart romantic wax poetic about some girl he has no chance with.
Anyway, at least check out my gallery and other podcasts. Some are worth the time to listen to. Unlike my apparently "lame poem" that I'be been recieving feedback on...
Geeze people, im still learning how to edit/record this shit...jeeze..
Edited by MystikMushroom (07/02/06 02:59 PM)
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MystikMushroom
I RULE YOU!
Registered: 10/11/04
Posts: 400
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At least check out my other streaming Terence McKenna podcasts...
FUCK people..damn...I'm a total newbie...
feedback how I can make it better is welcome..fuck...
Damn, is humanity so fuckin' lazy?
Oh well, i'd probably be just as lazy/non-comment-posting as 99% of you all...
Just wish I knew other ppl besides myself thought this SHIT was INTERESTING
Edited by MystikMushroom (07/02/06 04:05 PM)
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