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OfflineTodcasil
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a poem that ive written
    #3524359 - 12/20/04 03:53 PM (11 years, 11 months ago)

straight from the heart, written as if to her face, though she was not there to listen.



if i have any doubts
of your confessed intentions for me
i may as well end this now,
politely letting go of your heart
& your imaginary hand.
though i've described looking into your eyes
i've yet to be that deep up close
only surface thoughts and hidden memories
grace my screen.
it all sounds so cynical
so full of a broken heart.
despite this, you evoke in me the emotions of fire and earth,
the caress of water, the dance of the wind.
you see,
when i was a child
i picked fruit from a tree in my yard.
she gave me sweetness & beauty as i climbed her branches
and i've never fell from that high place
even now after i've moved and grown,
i find she exists in many forms.
keeping me aloft
with her sugar and grace
your latest incarnation
has left me shaking and within love.

<3


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Men look at themselves and they see flawed humans, we look at women and we see perfect
GODDESSES
Women look at themselves and they seem utterly human, when looking at men they see proud
GODS.


~Casil



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Re: a poem that ive written [Re: Todcasil]
    #3524370 - 12/20/04 03:58 PM (11 years, 11 months ago)

:smile: :megaman:


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Re: a poem that ive written [Re: Corporal Kielbasa]
    #3525719 - 12/20/04 11:34 PM (11 years, 11 months ago)

sheik that was for you :wink:

hehe


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Men look at themselves and they see flawed humans, we look at women and we see perfect
GODDESSES
Women look at themselves and they seem utterly human, when looking at men they see proud
GODS.


~Casil



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Re: a poem that ive written [Re: Todcasil]
    #3527034 - 12/21/04 10:45 AM (11 years, 11 months ago)

SHEIK is a lucky man! :grin:

Beautiful as always, Todcasil.


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Re: a poem that ive written [Re: adrug]
    #3527540 - 12/21/04 01:49 PM (11 years, 11 months ago)

thank you :smile:

your opinion means a great deal to me..

:sun:


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Men look at themselves and they see flawed humans, we look at women and we see perfect
GODDESSES
Women look at themselves and they seem utterly human, when looking at men they see proud
GODS.


~Casil



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Re: a poem that ive written [Re: Todcasil]
    #3528383 - 12/21/04 05:57 PM (11 years, 11 months ago)

Heres my first one in like a year its kinda rusty, didnt realy falow traditional poetry I guess eather if there is such a thing.

I scrape, shovel, pick at this earth
I slpinter ,bend, break and blister
I plant seeds and feed them with blood
from my cold cracked hands
I sweat, I moan, and pace hopeing theyed grow.
But its to cold now so maybe next year.


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Re: a poem that ive written [Re: Corporal Kielbasa]
    #3530075 - 12/22/04 01:57 AM (11 years, 11 months ago)

thtas awesome!

fuck tradition sheik, poetry is all about expressing oyurself, not pleasing others... if it does, more the better :smile:  if not, you did what you had to do!


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Men look at themselves and they see flawed humans, we look at women and we see perfect
GODDESSES
Women look at themselves and they seem utterly human, when looking at men they see proud
GODS.


~Casil



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