SunnyD said:

Patlal said:

The video doesn't seem to belong to that song. It doesn't fit the style for some reason. But it very artistic.

Great music, but here are my opinions on it.

- The drums are trying to hard. Too much snare for the guitar. Either take some snare out or have the guitarist play something more upbeat, it gets monotonous.

- The singer. Great voice. Could be a little more melodic though. He stretches every word. I barely understands the lyrics. It depresses me, seems like he's gonna commit suicide after that song

Great potential though. It sounds like Tool but it needs some work

I'm listening as I write this and the drums man... Too much snare...

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Do you even play any instrument?


Critics that have no experience in the field they are judging hardcore

I can't take too serious


Not trying to be mean

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sh4d0ws said:

SunnyD said:

Patlal said:

The video doesn't seem to belong to that song. It doesn't fit the style for some reason. But it very artistic.

Great music, but here are my opinions on it.

- The drums are trying to hard. Too much snare for the guitar. Either take some snare out or have the guitarist play something more upbeat, it gets monotonous.

- The singer. Great voice. Could be a little more melodic though. He stretches every word. I barely understands the lyrics. It depresses me, seems like he's gonna commit suicide after that song

Great potential though. It sounds like Tool but it needs some work

I'm listening as I write this and the drums man... Too much snare...

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Do you even play any instrument?


Critics that have no experience in the field they are judging hardcore

I can't take too serious


Not trying to be mean

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Don't worry Patlal is an expert on everything.

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Patlal said:

Try isolating every part of the song. Like singer with guitar only, then singer with drums only, then bass  alone, then singer alone. Just to see if everything fits well together when some intruments are absent

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searching said:

Patlal said:

Try isolating every part of the song. Like singer with guitar only, then singer with drums only, then bass  alone, then singer alone. Just to see if everything fits well together when some intruments are absent

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That's a good method. I do that when writing new songs. But recording the full band and getting everyone's part to shine is challenging. I can't exactly just cut someone's part out if it doesn't fit. Luckily everyone in the band has pretty good ears so it's not much of a problem.

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