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Re: Check out my band's first music video. [Re: SunnyD]
#25035587 - 03/03/18 09:28 AM (6 years, 27 days ago) |
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Patlal said: The video doesn't seem to belong to that song. It doesn't fit the style for some reason. But it very artistic.
Great music, but here are my opinions on it.
- The drums are trying to hard. Too much snare for the guitar. Either take some snare out or have the guitarist play something more upbeat, it gets monotonous.
- The singer. Great voice. Could be a little more melodic though. He stretches every word. I barely understands the lyrics. It depresses me, seems like he's gonna commit suicide after that song
Great potential though. It sounds like Tool but it needs some work
I'm listening as I write this and the drums man... Too much snare...
Do you even play any instrument?
Critics that have no experience in the field they are judging hardcore
I can't take too serious
Not trying to be mean
Don't worry Patlal is an expert on everything.
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Patlal
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Re: Check out my band's first music video. [Re: sh4d0ws]
#25035591 - 03/03/18 09:32 AM (6 years, 27 days ago) |
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sh4d0ws said:
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SunnyD said:
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Patlal said: The video doesn't seem to belong to that song. It doesn't fit the style for some reason. But it very artistic.
Great music, but here are my opinions on it.
- The drums are trying to hard. Too much snare for the guitar. Either take some snare out or have the guitarist play something more upbeat, it gets monotonous.
- The singer. Great voice. Could be a little more melodic though. He stretches every word. I barely understands the lyrics. It depresses me, seems like he's gonna commit suicide after that song
Great potential though. It sounds like Tool but it needs some work
I'm listening as I write this and the drums man... Too much snare...
Do you even play any instrument?
Critics that have no experience in the field they are judging hardcore
I can't take too serious
Not trying to be mean
Don't worry Patlal is an expert on everything.
I have a doctorate in doctorology
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Re: Check out my band's first music video. [Re: Patlal]
#25035611 - 03/03/18 09:41 AM (6 years, 27 days ago) |
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Patlal said: Try isolating every part of the song. Like singer with guitar only, then singer with drums only, then bass alone, then singer alone. Just to see if everything fits well together when some intruments are absent
That's a good method. I do that when writing new songs. But recording the full band and getting everyone's part to shine is challenging. I can't exactly just cut someone's part out if it doesn't fit. Luckily everyone in the band has pretty good ears so it's not much of a problem.
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Patlal
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Re: Check out my band's first music video. [Re: searching]
#25035671 - 03/03/18 10:19 AM (6 years, 27 days ago) |
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Patlal said: Try isolating every part of the song. Like singer with guitar only, then singer with drums only, then bass alone, then singer alone. Just to see if everything fits well together when some intruments are absent
That's a good method. I do that when writing new songs. But recording the full band and getting everyone's part to shine is challenging. I can't exactly just cut someone's part out if it doesn't fit. Luckily everyone in the band has pretty good ears so it's not much of a problem.
Don't cut out anything. Record everything, every riff, every part or everything and put and save it somewhere. Those are jigsaw piece you might add to a song that's missing something. Listen to them on shuffle. Sometimes random will connect two riffs or drum beats that will connect them perfectly and create the begging of an awesome future song.
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