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 meatcakeman
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 Read if you must. 
#11280139 - 10/19/09 08:20 PM (14 years, 5 months ago) |
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I believe in you.
Do you believe in me, too?
Well, do you?
I look up to your wisdom;
I believe in you and your isms.
Cubiculum prisons,
prisms arisen
from the formalities of Nature's precision.
I'll listen.
I promise.
But are you receptive of me?
Do you even seek to see
what truly lies beneath
my facade of teeth;
my epidermal plane?
I'm sane!
I know of it!
I show of it!
But do you trust this?
Love me,
for I love thee.
Your wind caresses my skin,
a breath I breathe akin,
and a Breath I breathe within.
You grant me the gift of Life,
but what's the catch?
I live and I thrive,
but am undoubtedly detached.
-MCM
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大开眼界
Hasta siempre, comandante.
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meatcakeman
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I just noticed we had a Music, Art, and Media forum.
If this belongs there and not here, would a mod please move it.
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Hasta siempre, comandante.
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Mykologist
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Marijuana definitely makes poetic language flow a lot better. 
I like it. Far better than some of the shallow poetry I'd hear classmates create throughout high-school 
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meatcakeman
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Yeah. I was high and just listening to some good music, and this brain fart was conceived.
It's strange what good weed and music can do to you.
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Todcasil
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Pub is a totally appropriate place for your songs/poetry 
(just prepare for criticism!)
some of mine; read if you must 
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my underwater torch
my heart grew three times its size.
my body did not know how to handle this.
how to cope with all the burning & the crying and the nervous endings ripped.
my face once used for facing and defacing.
melodies hung out to dry from a dirty mouth to a poor song clothes line.
but now its a blanket stare
just wanting to smile at all the future that it felt.
it only ever wanted to smile at the all future that it felt.
the hair covering my body now keeps me warm.
keeps me warm through the cold cold songs of snow.
I want to chew on your fingertips
use the blood as ink for my poetry
of a language that you will never read
but can still speak.
like the strange names hidden in your deepest dream.
when you speak to all the strange beings.
have you noticed the way your accent lays inside your head.
how you can dance around any lie until you believe in it.
because I've heard you think, your thoughts you herd like cattle courting
a Fischer Price farmyard animal sound generator.
a Fischer Price barnyard animal sound generator.
a string activated thought suppressant for now and later.
my telepathy is not necessary with you.
my telepathy is not needed whatsoever.
not with the ways our auras blaze when we deliver desire.
blessings cures curses for sure are the ones that inspire,
us to burn.
like underwater torches.
no I cannot say no to you face to face.
and I cannot save up for you when I've no -
soul.
income.
soul income.
income.
income outcome.
you know, I just cant come for you, income outcome, come on.
your stomach used to be my canvas and I miss.
I miss writing on your stomach with my thick.
I wrote Joss Whedon for he is my advocate.
he told me in not so many words that I am a sleeping prophet.
and he is not sure how to profit.
he is not sure how to prophet off of me...
but he sure wants me to sell him all my dreams.
take them away from me.
and I've only ever wanted to smile at all the future that I felt.
I only ever wanted to smile at all the future that I felt.
I only ever wanted to smile at all the future.
I only ever wanted to smile at all.
I only ever wanted to smile.
I only ever wanted. (how selfish)
I only ever.
~A. Casil
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Sunspots, Teethmarks
your eyes want to watch the sun
making a worm hole for all to see
dragged behind infinity.
mouthing the sounds of inability
that remind us of the humans playing
humans that are playing rough
weren't you playing...
I was playing too.
I didn't mean to make anyone love me
I only meant to make love
love never forced me to live
but, it was reason enough to die, once I did.
were you loving humans loving
I was still loving you
were you dragging hearts behind you
I was still drugged by you.
mouthing the sounds of inability
that reminded me you were human
because humans play with other humans
humans play rough when there's too much
weren't you playing...
I was playing too.
we were playing...
I was thanking you.
~
when you declared to no one in particular that I was dead,
I became no one in particular
just watching sunspots where i used to find you
a wormhole for all to see
drugged behind infinity.
~A. Casil
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Men look at themselves and they see flawed humans, we look at women and we see perfect
GODDESSES
Women look at themselves and they seem utterly human, when looking at men they see proud
GODS.
~Casil 
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Poptart
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Quote:
meatcakeman said:
I believe in you.
Do you believe in me, too?
Well, do you?
I look up to your wisdom;
I believe in you and your isms.
Cubiculum prisons,
prisms arisen
from the formalities of Nature's precision.
I'll listen.
I promise.
But are you receptive of me?
Do you even seek to see
what truly lies beneath
my facade of teeth;
my epidermal plane?
I'm sane!
I know of it!
I show of it!
But do you trust this?
Love me,
for I love thee.
Your wind caresses my skin,
a breath I breathe akin,
and a Breath I breathe within.
You grant me the gift of Life,
but what's the catch?
I live and I thrive,
but am undoubtedly detached.
-MCM
+ Beautiful - just + Beautiful. -
I fucking love it.
Keep it up.
Alot of people do
- n't Take the time to listen. +
PJ - JP
Eventually everything you do is art.
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meatcakeman
the search for bodhisattva
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Re: Read if you must. [Re: Todcasil]
#11280788 - 10/19/09 09:49 PM (14 years, 5 months ago) |
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My Underwater Torch was beautiful, man.
I loved how it ended. It's a thoughtful piece.
Sunspots, Teethmarks was also a good one. It's deep and that's just how I like 'em.
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Hasta siempre, comandante.
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Poptart
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Re: Read if you must. [Re: Poptart]
#11280795 - 10/19/09 09:49 PM (14 years, 5 months ago) |
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Faith fuels me.
Does she do the
Same for you???
Silence is my..
G U R U
J P
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Poptart
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Re: Read if you must. [Re: Poptart]
#11280802 - 10/19/09 09:51 PM (14 years, 5 months ago) |
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Quote:
Poptart said:
Faith fuels me.
Does she do the
Same for you???
Silence is my..
G U R U
J P
It didn't look the way I spaced it out before I posted it...
Edited by Poptart (10/19/09 09:51 PM)
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 hokusai
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Re: Read if you must. [Re: Poptart]
#11280826 - 10/19/09 09:54 PM (14 years, 5 months ago) |
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Poptart
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Posts: 1,821
Last seen: 6 years, 11 months
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Quote:
meatcakeman said:
I believe in you.
Do you believe in me, too?
Well, do you?
I look up to your wisdom;
I believe in you and your isms.
Cubiculum prisons,
prisms arisen
from the formalities of Nature's precision.
I'll listen.
I promise.
But are you receptive of me?
Do you even seek to see
what truly lies beneath
my facade of teeth;
my epidermal plane?
I'm sane!
I know of it!
I show of it!
But do you trust this?
Love me,
for I love thee.
Your wind caresses my skin,
a breath I breathe akin,
and a Breath I breathe within.
You grant me the gift of Life,
but what's the catch?
I live and I thrive,
but am undoubtedly detached.
-MCM
Keep doing that.
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meatcakeman
the search for bodhisattva
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Posts: 8,380
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getting over someone [Re: Poptart]
#11282322 - 10/20/09 05:53 AM (14 years, 5 months ago) |
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It was a flash beyond his faith,
succumbing to his innate fate.
Truly, one must lose his sense
once dear life becomes past tense.
But a record not so for he was neat
to not bring demons upon his sleep.
Good and honest,
this man be,
if only Life
weren’t travesty.
For since the time that he could see,
he lived to die so obviously.
So I say be gone
upon my wishes.
You’re just muck,
and I’m cleaning dishes.
So I say be gone
Goodnight, move on.
Eternal sleep is nothing wrong.
So, haunt me not, you need to leave here.
There is nothing about Death that one needs to fear.
The Last Lullaby.
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Hasta siempre, comandante.
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batheinthefountain
ॐ ॐ ॐ
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hobbies: weed, music
seriously... nothing else makes you relax better after a hard day of work 
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Poptart
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Quote:
batheinthefountain said:
hobbies: weed, music
seriously... nothing else makes you relax better after a hard day of work
Your name...batheinthefountain....Lateralus?
Spiral out...keep going.
http://fractalartcreations.files.wordpress.com/2009/03/6d-sacred-geometry2.jpg
Edited by Poptart (10/20/09 07:28 AM)
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tiny_rabid_birds
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Posts: 15,653
Loc: estados unidos 
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Re: getting over someone [Re: Poptart]
#11282587 - 10/20/09 07:58 AM (14 years, 5 months ago) |
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okay. what the fuck. i don't even like poetry, but there's some good shit here. christ, i was surprised at how much i enjoyed reading these. meatcake, your rhyme scheme was fun as fuck. todcasil, i was stricken with thoughts if ee cummings, a poet i actually enjoy. also, joss whedon ftw.
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Re: Read if you must. [Re: Todcasil]
#11282600 - 10/20/09 08:04 AM (14 years, 5 months ago) |
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Quote:
Todcasil said:
Pub is a totally appropriate place for your songs/poetry
the music & art forum is so neglected. 
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funky ass music: Planet of Dinosaurs // Rich Whiskey
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meatcakeman
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Time, you’re so apparent.
But, where are you from?
You’re going where I’m going;
where I lead you shall come.
Pack your bags for we shall go.
You going with me, to and fro.
Thus, a trip, we shall venture,
partaking in life’s adventures.
You and I stay side by side,
you following me along this ride.
But, lastly,
drop me off where you shall please,
lacking in remembrance of me.
Alas, follow me you shall not do
for I’m the one who’s following you.
Mistaken
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Hasta siempre, comandante.
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Todcasil
rogue DMT elf
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Bump for a new one? sure why knott. Sorry it's kind of epic  but it is what it is.
The Midnight Garage Sale
Midnight laid bare
Nothing is for sale
only trade, for equal hearts, I mean parts...
we each have bled
each have a bed
Is that how we find each other?
so distant... But memory
no matter how distant,
Singularity
Oh, Memory
Oh, singularity
Midnight tonight love, I am remember.
...
Our water ritual
performed so long ago
fell in love we did
with the way we both cut ourselves
I watched you bleed all night
you sewed my heart in tight
now we carry each other places we thought neither of us would go...like
Midnight
every night
sleep or no, we open ourselves like we were told
so long ago
fell in love we did
and we keep falling in
so long ago
but every last night we have
do it all again
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You are not here with me except in blood and visions,
my dreams, ephemeral or written
you lay there
Midnight
every night
...
I am not there with you except in pain and deliverance
fresh cuts will be old scars
but I kiss the new
oh, I kiss the new
the new need to know
how high and to where
and to press with care, my Felon
those old scars to my heart
when we finally get close, get through.
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Our water ritual
fell in love we did
there are still kisses from years ago
flying around your dreams, waiting
for when I tell them to land
whenever I see your lids
leaking with miss
my lips will always be there to lick away the salty twiss
like we used to lick away the copper on each others wrists.
the asphalt soaking up what we would couldn't get
The Felon and Midnight offering up their dregs
for a singularity to manifest
for the blood and love in their hearts, their heads
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Fell in love we did
still falling, errant lips
serenity still lives
in our memory of what we do, what we did
fell in love
just fell right in
it just felt right
my Felon felt me
your Midnight felt you
two nocturnes
crash to create one anew
just to feel right
because it felt right
fell in love right
...
fell in love we did,
among many other dids.
we did something right,
that first time flight...
Oh beautiful
I'm sure of it.
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Men look at themselves and they see flawed humans, we look at women and we see perfect
GODDESSES
Women look at themselves and they seem utterly human, when looking at men they see proud
GODS.
~Casil
Edited by Todcasil (10/28/09 12:45 AM)
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