I'm writing a novel. Fantasy...and this is a dream one of the main characters has as he nears a very bad place. As he gets closer, his dreams get more fucked...but anyways, this was the first one I came up with:
Blood. So much blood. Screaming at the top of your lungs, hitting registers so high they make you sound like a wild animal. But it’s not you. It’s her. The one that’s below you, and she’s naked and pressing so hard over your own body. Her legs are squirming through your own, trying to wrap themselves around you even tighter than they already are. Opening your eyes…blood is covering everything. Her breasts are large and bare and full of it, making something in the pit of your stomach scream. You move and suck them clean of that salty red liquid that's now is flowing down your throat. Moving you eyes up the body, you see her neck is pale, long, and clean. So pure and untouched, waiting for something, and you know what that is, but not yet! She’s screaming again, but her mouth is smiling. Moving in, she bits your shoulder and dozen’t let go. Blinding pain makes you fall on your back, but pain that’s making you see stars of pleasure. Dead bodies below, dead bodies soon to be on top, but you and her are warm and wet. That’s when you see her neck again, moving with each gasp and as pale as the moon itself. It’s time, go ahead…if you want. I told you would do it. See…it’s not that bad. The first bits the hardest, but also the best, the skin breaking and the squirming turns to panic, but you don’t release. You bite only harder, tearing and thrashing, but holding her in place. She lets go of your shoulder, but you don’t notice. You clamp harder and hold tighter and feel your blood boils hotter, and feel your heart thumping so fast it’s on the verge of bursting.
Electricity firing from below, firing in very possible direction, down your limps, to the bottom of your feet to the top your head, tears flowing and making you scream. Tightening up your entire body, blinding you completely for only moments, but lasting for so much longer, and then the light dims down slowly, and you release hold, panting and gulping in air, satisfied in ways that shouldn’t even be possible.
Haha, damn. Maybe I should tone it down a bit. Anyway, I thought you guys might enjoy it.
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