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Bi0TeK
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Psychedelic Trance/Techno I made on shrooms
#2548203 - 04/11/04 05:37 AM (19 years, 10 months ago) |
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So I made this psychedelic trance/techno track whilst on a afterglow from munching 8g of cubes last night. 
I'm not too sure about the vocal sample I used and was thinking about swopping it for some Terrence Mckenna samples or something similar..
It's not that big (3MB) and is in MP3 format.
Let me know what you guys think, constructive criticism welcome! 
[url=http://homepage.ntlworld.com/c0dec0rrupted/Afterglow Track.mp3]Download[/url]
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Re: Psychedelic Trance/Techno I made on shrooms [Re: Bi0TeK]
#2548345 - 04/11/04 08:32 AM (19 years, 10 months ago) |
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I like it, but i dont like the voice. The ending needs to flow better, it comes to an end too quickly.
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Re: Psychedelic Trance/Techno I made on shrooms [Re: Bi0TeK]
#2548367 - 04/11/04 08:50 AM (19 years, 10 months ago) |
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i just listened to it, it really wanst that trancy, and the techno was kind of flat, i would recomend some more structure/patterns/cycles whatever, and some more sounds.
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Re: Psychedelic Trance/Techno I made on shrooms [Re: Bi0TeK]
#2548622 - 04/11/04 10:50 AM (19 years, 10 months ago) |
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yeah, its a good start but it feels like it needs some different sounds (tho the progressions you have on the synth so far are cool)
is that a drum loop or did you sequence it? its cool 
and i agree about the ending.. its too abrupt. and the voice sample could easily be left out all together, it doesn't really add a lot of mood or atmosphere (or relate directly to the song's feeling anyway).. my 2 cents
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Bi0TeK
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Re: Psychedelic Trance/Techno I made on shrooms [Re: CerebralFlower]
#2548867 - 04/11/04 03:42 PM (19 years, 10 months ago) |
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Thanks for the feedback guys 
I agree, the vocals have got to go! I'm going to download some Terrence Mckenna, Timothy Leary and Jack Herer audio and see if I can find any interesting samples to add.
I was mainly concentrating on creating some hard acid sounds and kind of got lost in it all lol. I'm going to add some more effects etc later but I want the track to have a kind of raw, minimalist feel to it.
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Re: Psychedelic Trance/Techno I made on shrooms [Re: Bi0TeK]
#2548992 - 04/11/04 05:35 PM (19 years, 10 months ago) |
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8 gms = kinda got lost in it all
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