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InvisibleMOTH
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A rant
    #2441909 - 03/17/04 03:25 AM (14 years, 1 month ago)

Part One

      The turbulent waves of heat from the red corridor barreled into her face, scalding her and mimicking her anger.  She ignored it, her skin stinging from the sulfurous gases and her breath poisoned.  Tears of blood winked from the corners of her burning eyes and trickled down her damp cheeks; a trimming of crimson liquid on pale skin.  Down the crumbling scarlet halls she fled, her leather sandals boiling against the throbbing heat of the cobblestone floor and scalding her feet.  Her ivory nightgown clung uncomfortably to her sweltering breasts, and with a frustrated cry she flung it behind her, naked to the flaming air.  When the spiraling train of her gown got tangled amongst her legs and she stumbled, she hit the blistering floor hard, pain erupting all throughout her body.  She pulled like a savage at her hair and screamed until she tasted blood and could speak no more.    Then she collapsed lifeless upon that red floor, permitting her rage to cook her to oblivion.

Part Two

The rage was corrupting her.  Eating out her heart and driving splinters into her consciousness until all she could manage was to whimper and moan in agony.  The faces whirled all around her in a frenzied dance of images and she knew them all.  She could hear them speaking to her, whispering in the twisted arc of their pride.  They thought they knew best.  They presumed to know what her life should entail in this existence.  They thought they could contain her, choose for her.  They created the heat and marshaled the flames of her oppressive, nightmarish torment. 

They fed her their morality on a holy spoon.  Silver and sanctified, and filled to the curve with hollowed pages.  They tucked her into a bed of righteous obligation and social duty.  A frilled and pillowed duplicate of their own, and they whispered, ?Sleep?. 


To be continued when I feel like it.  Fuck them. 


I'm pretty pissed off tonight.  :mad:


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OfflineStrumpling
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Re: A rant [Re: MOTH]
    #2441993 - 03/17/04 04:12 AM (14 years, 1 month ago)

holy shit you are an amazing writer!

what's with the dark twisted 'tude?

:smile: Smile!@@@@@@@@@@@##############################


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Re: A rant [Re: Strumpling]
    #2442011 - 03/17/04 04:29 AM (14 years, 1 month ago)

looks like it has to do with her


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Re: A rant [Re: Strumpling]
    #2444399 - 03/17/04 08:23 PM (14 years, 1 month ago)

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Strumpling said:
holy shit you are an amazing writer!

what's with the dark twisted 'tude?

:smile: Smile!@@@@@@@@@@@##############################




Thanks...I've been trying to release anger that I have in "healthy" ways.  It worked.  I think I will finish this later tonight.


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