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Re: Do you obsessively reread your posts? [Re: WhiskeyClone]
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WhiskeyClone said:




:lol:  Sometimes I just don't take the time to edit my posts here to pristine perfection...

As for run-on sentences and beginning sentences with "and," sometimes you have to make sacrifices in the name of style and go against the MLA grain.


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Acid doesn't give you truths; it builds machines that push the envelope of perception. Whatever revelations came to me then have dissolved like skywriting. All I really know is that those few years saddled me with a faith in the redemptive potential of the imagination which, however flat, stale and unprofitable the world seems to me now, I cannot for the life of me shake.

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Re: Do you obsessively reread your posts? [Re: MOTH]
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It's because I take myself too seriously. If I'd just loosen up and relax about writing ("it's not a fucking big deal." ) then life would be so much easier.

Hey. Is that...the ANSWER? 



The best advice I ever heard about writing is to write how you talk.  When we talk, we don't have a chance to change the words after we've said them, we just speak whatever's in our mind at
the
time, and if it seems insufficient, or inaccurate, we say something else to try to clarify. Eventually the idea emerges.  Rewriting is where it turns into tight, gorgeous prose. 

Of course, I can dish out this advice but have trouble following it most of the time.  When I write, I second-guess every word I put down, and end up getting nowhere.  I haven't written anything in a
year :sad:


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Welcome evermore to gods and men is the self-helping man.  For him all doors are flung wide: him all tongues greet, all honors crown, all eyes follow with desire.  Our love goes out to him and embraces him, because he did not need it.

~ R.W. Emerson, "Self-Reliance"

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Re: Do you obsessively reread your posts? [Re: MOTH]
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I occasionally revisit posts for quality control. Was it written clear enough? Do I still approve of my message? Is there room for improvement?

Occasionally I edit something in for clarity.

And I must say I at times enjoy the fucked-upness of some of my posts, especially in the Mod forum where my personal peculiarities show up most.

Observing my own oddness gives me the illusion of control :crazy2:


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