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NonExistent Reged: 12/13/09 Posts: 1542 Loc: Los Angeles |
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I have gotten a go from one of the moderators to start the official "post your own poetry thread " , so this should be a sticky. I love reading poems by amateurs as it seems to be free from literary criticism. I think all poems are good, and I love reading them. In this thread, let's please be polite and sensitive to people's work. For some people , it takes a lot of courage to share their art. So, please be respectful. I am hoping this can be a good thread for aspiring/casual poets to share their work with fellow psychedelic mates. I will kick things off with a poem I wrote about a girl I once knew: "This is a Sad Story" and she deteriorated slowly, never heard from again this was a sad story because all she needed was a friend the isolation grew into infinity, and forgotten were the days of sunny smiles now, her brain has worn out, from running endless self-conscious miles the knight in shining armor never arrived she was forgotten, and somewhere else he thrived so she sat with her cats, her squirrels, her pigeons… living in the zoo in her head people had cold, horrifying eyes animals and jazz were her only friends she could’ve been someone special, someone for the ages there could’ve been stories written for hundreds of pages she could’ve touched lives, if someone had touched her in the end, she died not of old age, but because no one truly loved her her story was never told no one ever knew her name there wasn’t much to tell it was really a tearless shame. especially since, there are so many silent souls that are the same. but, there is importance to every life, because we can always learn the lesson here is… take control of the wheel, press on the gas, close your eyes, and make the turn. -------------------- My entire Life is defined by this link. I beg of you to read: https://www.facebook.com/notes/t Edited by aghorrorag (02/15/10 02:40 AM)
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