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I think I've created a poem?
    #958712 - 10/14/02 02:15 AM (14 years, 10 months ago)

This feeling that wells up inside,
I don`t know what it could be.
Is it emotional feeling?
I think that it needs to be free.

Unhappiness describes the least,
Discomfort it is at most.
What can I do to subside this?
I despise that I`m being its host.

This feeling pent up inside me,
I may know what it could be.
Can this poem be the answer?
Its mere creative energy!

What do y'all think? Give me some credit its only the 2nd poeticish writing I've ever done. The first was on accident. I'd rather write in a way that doesnt rhyme, but this one actuially worked out perfectly so I went with it. Oh, and if this doesnt make any sence disreguard it all... its 2am and I just had the idea for this bit 'o' writing and then felt like posting it (damn insomnia  :smile: ). 


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Re: I think I've created a poem? [Re: TeKHeAD009]
    #959713 - 10/14/02 02:48 PM (14 years, 10 months ago)

nice


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Re: I think I've created a poem? [Re: TeKHeAD009]
    #960377 - 10/14/02 07:16 PM (14 years, 10 months ago)

lol - ok ok, so writing isnt my thing, I'll just stick to the half assed sketches  :grin:

I was tired - it sounded good to me at the time.  :smirk:


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Re: I think I've created a poem? [Re: TeKHeAD009]
    #960399 - 10/14/02 07:21 PM (14 years, 10 months ago)

:smirk:
I thought it was funny... 


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Re: I think I've created a poem? [Re: dee_N_ae]
    #960538 - 10/14/02 08:04 PM (14 years, 10 months ago)

:smile:  My friend your now the prowd owner of a 5 shroomie rating from me.

Ya, its kinda got that 'cutsie' factor to it... but its at least something :^)  :tongue:
 


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Re: I think I've created a poem? [Re: TeKHeAD009]
    #960694 - 10/14/02 08:55 PM (14 years, 10 months ago)

right back at'chya
Who cares if it's "cute"? Honor that creative impulse, don't deny that 'weird' feeling inside... it's the only real thing we have in this world!  I know it might feel like something will burst out 'Alien' style but trust me it'll be much less gory and more fun  :crazy:  :grin: 


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Re: I think I've created a poem? [Re: dee_N_ae]
    #961040 - 10/14/02 10:53 PM (14 years, 10 months ago)

indeed man, express yourself for everyone is different.

peace out my brothers, for everyone has a bit of insanity in them


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Re: I think I've created a poem? [Re: TeKHeAD009]
    #962047 - 10/15/02 04:38 AM (14 years, 10 months ago)

Great art! I love the bear and the person at the tree..


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Re: I think I've created a poem? [Re: Fliquid]
    #962943 - 10/15/02 02:27 PM (14 years, 10 months ago)

Cool thanks!  :smile:


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Re: I think I've created a poem? [Re: TeKHeAD009]
    #965049 - 10/16/02 03:48 AM (14 years, 10 months ago)

I wish i was able to do that. :frown: But i can express myself with music. :smile: 


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