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hamandcheese
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Re: get high and write a poem here. [Re: andrewss]
#9474020 - 12/21/08 05:37 PM (15 years, 2 months ago) |
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hamandcheese said: one of the few side-effects of marijuana i can't stand. it has the power to make people think their crappy poetry is good.
youre crappy
shall i dissect your poetry?
or would you rather come back in 6 months so you can see how crappy it is for yourself?
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Re: get high and write a poem here. [Re: hamandcheese]
#9474038 - 12/21/08 05:39 PM (15 years, 2 months ago) |
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6 months? you think it's going to take him 6 months to realize that?
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andrewss
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Re: get high and write a poem here. [Re: demiu5]
#9474049 - 12/21/08 05:41 PM (15 years, 2 months ago) |
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its a fuckin joke mannnnnnnnn written in like a minute, its the goddamn pub on the shroomery not poetry open mic night at your local hipster bar
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hamandcheese
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Re: get high and write a poem here. [Re: demiu5]
#9474065 - 12/21/08 05:45 PM (15 years, 2 months ago) |
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haha no he could honestly come back tomorrow, but when you wait, its more pornounced. like really? really? i thought remotely fucking decent? I MUST have been high.
i don't have any problem with people posting their crappy poetry in the pub, just so long as they realize its exactly that, crappy poetry.
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demiu5
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Re: get high and write a poem here. [Re: andrewss]
#9474067 - 12/21/08 05:45 PM (15 years, 2 months ago) |
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wait, hipsters have their own bars? oh god, we're all fucked now. (coffee shops don't count as bars)
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Re: get high and write a poem here. [Re: hamandcheese]
#9474118 - 12/21/08 05:55 PM (15 years, 2 months ago) |
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hamandcheese said: haha no he could honestly come back tomorrow, but when you wait, its more pornounced. like really? really? i thought remotely fucking decent? I MUST have been high.
i don't have any problem with people posting their crappy poetry in the pub, just so long as they realize its exactly that, crappy poetry.
so you basically have nothing to say then eh why dont you write a little poem about your frustrations!
I have to admit, I am not high from the herb right now, just high on life thats all... but its only a matter of time before I indulge
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hamandcheese
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Re: get high and write a poem here. [Re: demiu5]
#9474128 - 12/21/08 05:57 PM (15 years, 2 months ago) |
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demius said: wait, hipsters have their own bars? oh god, we're all fucked now. (coffee shops don't count as bars)
get drunk and sober up with out ever stepping foot out side.
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andrewss
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Re: get high and write a poem here. [Re: demiu5]
#9474132 - 12/21/08 05:58 PM (15 years, 2 months ago) |
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demius said: wait, hipsters have their own bars? oh god, we're all fucked now. (coffee shops don't count as bars)
I think so, but then again I guess I dont know quite what a hipster is... sort of a contemporary hippie that doesnt do psychedelic drugs, right?
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Re: get high and write a poem here. [Re: ShroomDoom]
#9474186 - 12/21/08 06:11 PM (15 years, 2 months ago) |
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what started as a hobby, robbed me of anxiety. Able to now relax, think, and breathe easy.
Becoming intimate with my intellect, caused me to appreciate the connection between "me" and mind, what's left to be of this relationship, I've yet to find.
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Re: get high and write a poem here. [Re: usefulidiot13]
#9474414 - 12/21/08 07:02 PM (15 years, 2 months ago) |
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Ode to Caffeine
Snort it, shoot it, drink it plug it if you like as long as that sweet caffeine hits my brain I know I'm feeling alright It abolishes my headaches and cures so many lethargic nights Ode to you caffeine, my sweet and lovely friend for without your precious relief nothing would be done inside my head
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Re: get high and write a poem here. [Re: andrewss]
#9474511 - 12/21/08 07:17 PM (15 years, 2 months ago) |
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My poem may suck to some I’m aware of this little fact But I’m not dumb Enough to think its gold For you the same can’t be said This you must be told When you come To grasp this in your head My work, it shall be done.
Demius: is this beer organic? this beer better be organic.
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Re: get high and write a poem here. [Re: usefulidiot13]
#9474598 - 12/21/08 07:29 PM (15 years, 2 months ago) |
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Hickory dickory
cloak...
I just had a toke.
I took off my shoes and sat down at my desk.. and I'm too blazed to think, you finish the rest
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deadHead321
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Re: get high and write a poem here. [Re: Yrtlzmo]
#9474721 - 12/21/08 07:50 PM (15 years, 2 months ago) |
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Early one mornin' the sun was shinin', I was layin' in bed Wond'rin' if she'd changed at all If her hair was still red. Her folks they said our lives together Sure was gonna be rough They never did like Mama's homemade dress Papa's bankbook wasn't big enough. And I was standin' on the side of the road Rain fallin' on my shoes Heading out for the East Coast Lord knows I've paid some dues gettin' through, Tangled up in blue.
She was married when we first met Soon to be divorced I helped her out of a jam, I guess, But I used a little too much force. We drove that car as far as we could Abandoned it out West Split up on a dark sad night Both agreeing it was best. She turned around to look at me As I was walkin' away I heard her say over my shoulder, "We'll meet again someday on the avenue," Tangled up in blue.
I had a job in the great north woods Working as a cook for a spell But I never did like it all that much And one day the ax just fell. So I drifted down to New Orleans Where I happened to be employed Workin' for a while on a fishin' boat Right outside of Delacroix. But all the while I was alone The past was close behind, I seen a lot of women But she never escaped my mind, and I just grew Tangled up in blue.
She was workin' in a topless place And I stopped in for a beer, I just kept lookin' at the side of her face In the spotlight so clear. And later on as the crowd thinned out I's just about to do the same, She was standing there in back of my chair Said to me, "Don't I know your name?" I muttered somethin' underneath my breath, She studied the lines on my face. I must admit I felt a little uneasy When she bent down to tie the laces of my shoe, Tangled up in blue.
She lit a burner on the stove and offered me a pipe "I thought you'd never say hello," she said "You look like the silent type." Then she opened up a book of poems And handed it to me Written by an Italian poet From the thirteenth century. And every one of them words rang true And glowed like burnin' coal Pourin' off of every page Like it was written in my soul from me to you, Tangled up in blue.
I lived with them on Montague Street In a basement down the stairs, There was music in the cafes at night And revolution in the air. Then he started into dealing with slaves And something inside of him died. She had to sell everything she owned And froze up inside. And when finally the bottom fell out I became withdrawn, The only thing I knew how to do Was to keep on keepin' on like a bird that flew, Tangled up in blue.
So now I'm goin' back again, I got to get to her somehow. All the people we used to know They're an illusion to me now. Some are mathematicians Some are carpenter's wives. Don't know how it all got started, I don't know what they're doin' with their lives. But me, I'm still on the road Headin' for another joint We always did feel the same, We just saw it from a different point of view, Tangled up in blue.
better then anything ive read here or could write not to hate on the people who wrote stuff..
-------------------- "They call it a trip because it takes you places" ~TC All i know is something like a bird within her sang/ All i know she sang a little while and then flew on/Tell me all that you know, i'll show you snow and rain.
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Re: get high and write a poem here. [Re: Yrtlzmo]
#9474734 - 12/21/08 07:53 PM (15 years, 2 months ago) |
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yeah well at least we posted what this thread was about, writing some poetry. Was there any mention that anyone had to be a poet, take any time writing it, or taking it seriously?
why dont you write something instead of marginal commentary
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deadHead321
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Re: get high and write a poem here. [Re: andrewss]
#9474753 - 12/21/08 07:56 PM (15 years, 2 months ago) |
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i wrote that. typed up every word as i listened to the tune
-------------------- "They call it a trip because it takes you places" ~TC All i know is something like a bird within her sang/ All i know she sang a little while and then flew on/Tell me all that you know, i'll show you snow and rain.
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hamandcheese
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Re: get high and write a poem here. [Re: deadHead321]
#9474761 - 12/21/08 07:57 PM (15 years, 2 months ago) |
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NO PLAGIARIZING BOB DYLAN!!
its ok there is some pretty crappy poetry up in here.
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Re: get high and write a poem here. [Re: hamandcheese]
#9474778 - 12/21/08 08:00 PM (15 years, 2 months ago) |
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oh as I sit here in my black cheer (chair) really high I wonder why
blah blah blah nothing rhymes with blah
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Re: get high and write a poem here. [Re: hamandcheese]
#9474795 - 12/21/08 08:04 PM (15 years, 2 months ago) |
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hamandcheese said: NO PLAGIARIZING BOB DYLAN!!
its ok there is some pretty crappy poetry up in here.
Oh I'm pretty sure its all crappy.
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hamandcheese
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Re: get high and write a poem here. [Re: Acaterpillar]
#9474801 - 12/21/08 08:04 PM (15 years, 2 months ago) |
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Rabidbaboon said: oh as I sit here in my black cheer (chair) really high I wonder why
blah blah blah nothing rhymes with blah
this thread makes me hahaha
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