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OfflineBlastrid
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'What's Real? You tell me' by blastrid
    #943691 - 10/08/02 07:42 PM (14 years, 11 months ago)

my friend you buy and borrow
you own nothing but your soul.
wish off all you possess,
free yourself and take control.

look around and soak it in
what's real comes from within.
take it now or use it never
turn in to out
the corner of my eye
turn in to out
and above the red sky

pointing toward a dream
not as pointless as it seems.

my friend you try your head
it's hum delight growing loud
rummage deep down dusty paths
ways you forgot it's all around


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Edited by Blastrid (10/09/02 11:54 AM)


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Re: 'What's Real? You tell me' by blastrid [Re: Blastrid]
    #943702 - 10/08/02 07:46 PM (14 years, 11 months ago)

So what do i think?
well, how do you do.
when thinking about thoughts, reality comes through.
So what should we do?
sit back and be.
one of us uses love, as all of us will see.
among the bush and the fake i believe there exists
the one of us is all of us
through cloak and veil persists.


thanks for reading  :smile:


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Re: 'What's Real? You tell me' by blastrid [Re: Blastrid]
    #945085 - 10/09/02 10:40 AM (14 years, 11 months ago)

Thats really good.
How did you start writing? I've tried it and it didnt work for me quite right. :crazy:


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Re: 'What's Real? You tell me' by blastrid [Re: TeKHeAD009]
    #945280 - 10/09/02 11:52 AM (14 years, 11 months ago)

Thanks!
usually something will spawn from one line, keeping the same concept of where the thought originated. they kinda sound like song lyrics, huh...
the second one came straight from stream of consciousness. i opened my binder, wrote the first line, and just thought instead of writing paragraphs, i could better explain my thoughts this way. i really recommend stream of consciousness writing. you can work out your thoughts, and you can add a poetic element and it can end up wonderful.
obvious inspiration was a book i was(am) reading called the Way of Zen, and also inspiration from lateralus.


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Re: 'What's Real? You tell me' by blastrid [Re: Blastrid]
    #948539 - 10/10/02 08:02 AM (14 years, 11 months ago)

my friend we have very much in common. i usually start from one sentence and sometimes things will just flow out of me but i have a problem with "finishing" thoughts. i've been listening to a lot of lateralus and reading some nietzsche, the twilight of the idols. i just wrote this down five minutes before reading your post. i was in the S and P forum when i thought it would be cool to see if anybody had some poetry on here. these are two snippets of ideas that kinda fit together.

while the earth fields impacts from god
you're growing and numbing and mowing your lawn
while your world expands more everyday
you're shrinking and judging and pushing away
try and cross the line
your senses are the membrane
osmosis of the mind

please feed me your thoughts, your "work" exhibits some like feelings amongst us but i'm still working on putting emotions onto paper.


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Re: 'What's Real? You tell me' by blastrid [Re: littlewing]
    #949725 - 10/10/02 03:17 PM (14 years, 11 months ago)

that's good! i really like that.
i do see how they fit together, with the general concept. as far as finishing, if you get partway thru something (at least this is what i do) read it back to yourself, see where your train of thought is going. consider the next step, fulfilling and expanding your general thought. its hard tho, i come to a stop so often, but i eventually come back to it.

I can get in various creative moods, in different areas. I like to play music (guitar), paint in PS, write, and read. usually my mood will push me toward one of those, with a specific yearning for something to create.
sometimes it is love, sometimes it is mind, sometimes it is how i'm so very uncertain.

while i wait
to me comes fate
ponder the eventual but
my decisions are conceptual
when faced with choice
i've got no voice
Realize uncertainty is certain.
tommorow is death
but today is forever
place all your bets
tomoorw could be never?
realize uncertainty is certain.


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    ex.  Blastrid!

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Re: 'What's Real? You tell me' by blastrid [Re: Blastrid]
    #950462 - 10/10/02 07:25 PM (14 years, 11 months ago)

I like ya'll poems, they are really good. i am a beginner at wrtiting poetry, but i have posted some of my poems on here. i am usually on the S&P forum =). Put some more up, i am intrigued by ya'lls poems....

peace out my brothers, for everyone has a bit of insanity in them


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Re: 'What's Real? You tell me' by blastrid [Re: GrowingVines]
    #953402 - 10/11/02 10:09 PM (14 years, 11 months ago)

hey thanks, here's another one.

lonliness is a cancer that grows in your absence
a false impression of worth is imposed in your remembrance
this longing is the result of every blown opportunity
there is no shelter behind my eyes, everywhere a mental mutiny
you're killing me

i need a women if you couldn't pick that up. tell me what you think.


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Re: 'What's Real? You tell me' by blastrid [Re: littlewing]
    #955171 - 10/12/02 04:05 PM (14 years, 11 months ago)

i like it. it describes a state of mind very clearly.
here's another
Waiting or Living?

the hand won't slow down
forever circling, faster faster.
look ahead at my life
gone-inan instant.
these words fade awsay
darken in the shadow of the past
each moment spawns each thought
so unique, but lost forever.
am i wasting my life
until i know what to do?
or do i treat each moment
as one chance for happiness?
the answer lay lost in the past,
buried for the future.


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    ex.  Blastrid!

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