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OfflineGrowingVines
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Poetry
    #917185 - 09/29/02 06:20 PM (15 years, 1 month ago)

Have any of ya'll wrote some poetry? if So are ya'll willing to post some here? I have some poems, but they fucked up, I wrote them when depressed. I also wrote them before my first trip.

peace out my brothers, everyone has a little bit of insanity in them


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Re: Poetry [Re: GrowingVines]
    #917209 - 09/29/02 06:29 PM (15 years, 1 month ago)

Most of my good poetry was written while depressed... I haven't written anything in a while though.

Go ahead and share yours  :smile:


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OfflineGrowingVines
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Re: Poetry [Re: Smack31]
    #917238 - 09/29/02 06:39 PM (15 years, 1 month ago)

Fair warning, some of these poems were writen when extemely depressed. Don't hate on them to badly.......

What I AM

I am the unlovable
I am the Hellish Fiend
I am the Hateful
I am the Scorned
I am the Beast
I am the Scapegoat
I am the Failure
I am the Fallen
I am the Lost
I am the Loser
I am the Bum
I am the Rotten
I am the Unwanted
I am the Painful
I am the Demon
I am the Forsaken
I am the Terrible
I am the Blood
I am the Wounded
I am the Scared
I am the Sick
I am the Diseased
I am the Alone
I am the Darkness
I am the Shadow
I am the Grave
I am the Dead
I am the Storm
I am the Destroyer
I am the Fear
I am the Controller
I am the Creator

I know its not very good, but was my first poem i wrote. Others are Darker.


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OfflineViBrAnT
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Re: Poetry [Re: GrowingVines]
    #917251 - 09/29/02 06:44 PM (15 years, 1 month ago)

I'd rather cut that neck in-half
I'd rather choke out that bitch as
i'd rather chop and never stop
because you fucked my Homi

I.C.P.


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Re: Poetry [Re: ViBrAnT]
    #917259 - 09/29/02 06:50 PM (15 years, 1 month ago)

ICP is pretty damn cool.....heres another fucked up poem for ya'll.

In The Dark

I love the night.
I love the Dark.
For within the darkness no one can see you.
You are just a black shadow to them.
People fear the shadows.
I strive on the Fear of others.
For in the darkness you cannot see your killer.
Most people fear the night.
I strive in the night,
the darkness.
In the Dark you can only here ones voices.
You cannot judge people by their looks, but only by the sound and tone of their voice.
For your eyes are blind, and when you cannot see with your eyes, your Mind opens up.
Your mind and thoughts go where they have never been before.
When your eyes are blind...that is when all of the truth of life comes about.


peace out my brothers, For everyone has a little bit of insanity in them


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Re: Poetry [Re: GrowingVines]
    #917265 - 09/29/02 06:51 PM (15 years, 1 month ago)

nice...

here's one of mine. i can't say it's the darkest, but it was written at one of my lowest points and thus the most sincere.

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WHAT IS IT WORTH?
another sad poem that nobody wants to read?
another tense song that nobody wants to feel?
another subtle image that nobody seems to understand?
MY WORDS ARE NOT ENOUGH TO HOLD THIS TOGETHER ANYMORE
THE MUSIC IS NOT WHAT IT USED TO BE...
NOW IT'S ALL A DARK MEMORY
but i can't fall again if i don't get back up.
you won't have to hear me scream if i have no more breath,
and that's all i have left.



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Re: Poetry [Re: GrowingVines]
    #917270 - 09/29/02 06:52 PM (15 years, 1 month ago)

i really like that second one...


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Re: Poetry [Re: Smack31]
    #917275 - 09/29/02 06:53 PM (15 years, 1 month ago)

Where is fear and darkness without physical pain?

Love is all there is.


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Re: Poetry [Re: GrowingVines]
    #917284 - 09/29/02 06:55 PM (15 years, 1 month ago)

where is that "i love the night" thing from


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Re: Poetry [Re: GrowingVines]
    #917305 - 09/29/02 07:06 PM (15 years, 1 month ago)

i wrote some a while ago. posted them here. hope you like, or can relate to them.

http://www.shroomery.org/forums/showflat.php?Cat=&Board=Forum12&Number=881747&page=3&view=collapsed&sb=5&o=&fpart=1


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Re: Poetry [Re: Smack31]
    #917435 - 09/29/02 08:01 PM (15 years, 1 month ago)

I like that poem Smack...here is another of mine, still not the darkest of mine...for i think it would freak some of ya'll out =)

I AM DEAD

I am dead to the world.
I am too cold to go on.
For the worlds' black heart casts me out.
Into Hell I travel.
Or is it into Heaven.

Hark; It is neither Heaven nor Hell.
For I am unwanted by both.
I am already forgotten.
I am just here floating away until all of eternity comes to a close.
And as life also in death,
I am alone.

peace out my brothers, for everyone has a bit of Insanity in them



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Re: Poetry [Re: GrowingVines]
    #917452 - 09/29/02 08:06 PM (15 years, 1 month ago)

Here's a few poems I posted awhile back.


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Re: Poetry [Re: GrowingVines]
    #917520 - 09/29/02 08:29 PM (15 years, 1 month ago)

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Re: Poetry [Re: ]
    #917550 - 09/29/02 08:46 PM (15 years, 1 month ago)

Didn't know about other form =)


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Re: Poetry [Re: ]
    #917583 - 09/29/02 09:03 PM (15 years, 1 month ago)

poetry could be considered spiritual. 

Besides, i appreciate it right here.  :grin: 


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Re: Poetry [Re: GrowingVines]
    #917584 - 09/29/02 09:03 PM (15 years, 1 month ago)

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Re: Poetry [Re: ]
    #918735 - 09/30/02 05:58 AM (15 years, 1 month ago)

Thanks =) poetry can be spirtual =) But i guess it fits better here.


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Re: Poetry [Re: GrowingVines]
    #918750 - 09/30/02 06:17 AM (15 years, 1 month ago)

Silent darkness..
Takes me away
I feel its embrace
Letting me know once again we are whole
As I trod through these murky depths
and deafened by the silence
envoking a sacred trust within
I know what it is to be again
Yet we flail at our judgements
Alas, tis in vain
To create is to destroy
And we become one again


....spontaneous poem written just now

I've got lots of them written down.. but nah


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Re: Poetry [Re: Shroomism]
    #920240 - 09/30/02 08:53 PM (15 years, 1 month ago)

Cool. Yah know, they say, anything too stupid to be said is usually sung.

I write some, I'll post. Making mix CD for gf. :laugh:


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Re: Poetry [Re: GrowingVines]
    #921748 - 10/01/02 07:12 AM (15 years, 1 month ago)

After my first true love went down the tubes:


(untitled)

My love is lost and my will is gone.
What can I do but go on?
How could I be so blind not to see?
Now my love is only me.


:frown:


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