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Typerwritermonky
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Inextinctus said: Got back into messing with fl studios recently Hopefully more on the way, but here's a work in progress Listen to Eat Bread
hey mate, dont take this as discouragement - but you need to figure out the timing structure on that track. Those glitched drums are not timed right nor jazzy - definitely gotta fix that. Albeit entirely it sounds good evne on laptop speakers which is saying something.
But that is definitely a WIP. Let us know when its done!
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Shroom_boi
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Rewritten thanks to my girlfriend and Typerwritermonky. After receiving feedback on the original track i got to work on this new spicy number. Removed some shoehorning bass from the original and added other symphonic elements to properly ground and drive the track. I hope now it is a more fully realized piece and more enjoyable than ever. Glitchy AF! Enjoy;)
Can't thank you guys enough! Keeps me driven and challenged. Sometimes is what we need.
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lifeiswhatyoumake
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Shroom_boi said: Rewritten thanks to my girlfriend and Typerwritermonky. After receiving feedback on the original track i got to work on this new spicy number. Removed some shoehorning bass from the original and added other symphonic elements to properly ground and drive the track. I hope now it is a more fully realized piece and more enjoyable than ever. Glitchy AF! Enjoy;)
Can't thank you guys enough! Keeps me driven and challenged. Sometimes is what we need.
I like this vibe. And I like the beat at 1:50. Great name, too. Your aura on the Shroomery has time and again given me inspiration, so thankk you
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Typerwritermonky
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@shroom boi
gregorian chants are great in intro. smoothly transitions into intro pt 2. good use of panning. albeit the transition into the first part after the intro at 1:44 needs a wee bit of work. maybe a riser into sub hit to declare it? symphonic elements are great.
sounds WAY better without the shoehorned bass. this works way better as a downtempo track. take that other glitchy bass and put into a folder labelled "sparks". then when you start another track, utilize that as a "spark" to get it going. thats what I do and got a great tip from ill gates and mr bill - those cool elements that sound great but dont quite "fit" - put them in a folder called "sparks". whether it be a bass, vocal, synth - whatever - utilize it in the next track if you really dig it.
all it needs now is at 1:44 is some sort of additional bassy-subby elements to really make that drop pop. not the shoehorned one, but something that flows in and out of the track.
Edited by Typerwritermonky (09/22/19 11:14 PM)
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Typerwritermonky
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Also finally finished this one up and mixed it down fully.
https://acleveralias.bandcamp.com/track/imur
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Shroom_boi
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Thank you soo much everyone that has left feedback. It really helps me push things forward. It is also nice to know there a people out there that will have a listen.
I listened to Imur by typewritermonky and I have to say. Pretty delicious. My favorite part was two minutes and onward. I don't know why but I really liked the vibe and sounds in that later half. My only complaint is that the track is a little short. I really wanted more. Theres a lot of different musical ideas that could be expanded upon that I wanted to hear but maybe that's just me being greedy. On the plus side great mix down. Can never really say anything bad about your tracks!
Now, to business. Remade one of my old tracks from a year ago. The original track was a turning point for my productions back in the day. The reason the track was different is because I made it for my girlfriend. My girlfriend of more than 12 years.
So it was an absolute pleasure to remake this on the anniversary of the track coincidentally coinciding with my 13th anniversary to boot!
Description is as follows, Celebrating one year since the original track! Shelly house two brings everything from the old and dips it in the finest shaman juice available. Fat drums, fat bass lead, trippy, over the top and delicious rhythm. You can really take a bite out of this house;) Just for shelly!
Have a sexy weekend everyone.
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Masked
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Re: Shroomery Originals [Re: Shroom_boi] 3
#26228696 - 10/04/19 12:42 AM (4 years, 3 months ago) |
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A new song I wrote and recorded very recently.
"Isle Of Saudade"
Thanks for taking a listen. To this day, I still just play from ear and don't know any theory whatsoever, so I'm not very good. But it has heart.
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Typerwritermonky
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Re: Shroomery Originals [Re: Masked]
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Nice man, I'll try and give it a thorough listen through later with my studio so I can give you audio quality feedback but in terms of the song - I like the guitar and the keys - gives it an almost Pink Floyd-esque feel to it. Yet, to complete that, you need more instruments. Otherwise the dichotomy of the keys and guitar don't evolve to capture enough interest in the listener.
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Masked
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Thanks man appreciate it.
In this case, I purposefully just wanted acoustic guitar and piano only. I didn't want drums or bass. Wanted a raw feel to it if that makes sense
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Cory Duchesne
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"I and I" jamming with Shroomboi from Australia:
-------------------- C.G. Jung: "Please remember, it is what you are that heals, not what you know." "I shall not commit the fashionable stupidity of regarding everything I cannot explain as a fraud." - Carl Jung Krishna, as his friends called him, freely admitted his compulsive lying. He blamed it on simple fear of having his deceptions detected." NOTES OF A FRINGE-WATCHER MARTIN GARDNER on J Krishnamurti "All your questions are born out of the answers you already have. Any answer anybody gives should put an end to your questions. But it does not." [UG-K]
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lifeiswhatyoumake
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Have a sexy weekend everyone. 
This is your best track I've heard from you yet. The whole track kept my attention and I like the kick and everything. Sounds good. I'm a big fan of that crazy bongo part
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Shroom_boi
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Thank you to Cory Duchesne for taking one of my tracks to new and exciting places. Really made my day and I can't wait to hear what he comes up with next.
Also thank you lifeiswhatyoumake for enjoying my track. Your not going to beleive it by my girlfreind enjoys the older one more? What???
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ExpelErebus
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Re: Shroomery Originals [Re: Masked] 1
#26241665 - 10/10/19 01:29 AM (4 years, 3 months ago) |
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I've been missing your music Masked! Glad to hear some more! Here's a track I've been playing around with tonight. What do you all think? It's still a WIP
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Masked
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Appreciate it man 🙏
I really dug your track. Nice intro until the beat drops. I like it
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Shroom_boi
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ExpelErebus said: I've been missing your music Masked! Glad to hear some more! Here's a track I've been playing around with tonight. What do you all think? It's still a WIP

Damm delicious! Fat 808's and that asain sounding clings and pings was just too nice. Love it, love it, love it.
Curious to hear the final piece!
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Cory Duchesne
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Celebrating 13th's eve, Saturday's fall. This song has original origin, and origins original. Thank you to Shroomboi, Jackson C. Frank and the Spectre. Enjoying Anavar.
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-------------------- C.G. Jung: "Please remember, it is what you are that heals, not what you know." "I shall not commit the fashionable stupidity of regarding everything I cannot explain as a fraud." - Carl Jung Krishna, as his friends called him, freely admitted his compulsive lying. He blamed it on simple fear of having his deceptions detected." NOTES OF A FRINGE-WATCHER MARTIN GARDNER on J Krishnamurti "All your questions are born out of the answers you already have. Any answer anybody gives should put an end to your questions. But it does not." [UG-K]
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Shroom_boi
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Very juicy Cory! I love the guitar on that one.
Here's something I put out at the end of the weekend.
-------------------- I make phat psychedelic beats! Here Soundcloud and here Youtube
Edited by Shroom_boi (10/13/19 02:08 AM)
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ExpelErebus
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#26259219 - 10/17/19 05:49 PM (4 years, 3 months ago) |
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Dark vibes Shroom_boi, I dig it!
This is probably the best beat I've made to date. Got lucky on the mastering 
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Typerwritermonky
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anyone wanna collab on a track with me for the next one I do?
anyone work in Logic Pro X?
shroom boi?
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lifeiswhatyoumake
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ExpelErebus said: Dark vibes Shroom_boi, I dig it!
This is probably the best beat I've made to date. Got lucky on the mastering 
I really liked this track.
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