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Some stuff I wrote...
    #8116686 - 03/07/08 04:15 PM (16 years, 24 days ago)

I wrote down some stuff when I was going through a bit of a "crisis period" (is there a better name for that?) Anyway, I wanted to share, because I think there's a bit of strength in these:

SCRIPTURES OF THE MIND, pt 1

Winding rivers leading to the inner stratum

The non-beating heart

Suspended in the mist of

Fuel vapor

Connoisseur of dredging memories

False actor

Misapprehender

Grasper of the dark lights


SCRIPTURES OF THE MIND, pt 2

A feeling that lonesomeness

is a slow descent

Again the mind drops,

into relativity

Not aware this is where it always stays

Over complication of the subject matter –

Being

Fear cuts and molds

a weakened substitute

to roam the house as a beggar.


SCRIPTURES OF THE MIND, pt 3

Suddenly,

The way forward is lit

By candles

Which begin to flicker in the wind

Weary now,

Effort spills from the wounds

For its own sake

Stumbling forward through faithlessness

The last destination:

Onward

--

A distant dream

Glimmering beneath the waves

Out of reach

But melting the retina

Ready to pour out the eye

And convolute the sparkling waters


The vapor of rejection suffocates the lungs

Lesser spirits recur a waged war inside me

Puppets, unconscious, dangle in the breeze

Punishment of the soul courses through the veins

--

Cycling fictional characters
Putting the taunts into their mouths
Awkward jaws and expressionless eyes
The puppeteer of self-decimation

How critical is Being?
The peak of understanding only beckons us to go back down
Which weather pattern is me?
The cyclic wash upon the shore
I’ll stall sleep with another twisted show.
Even the fear I will fear.

--

That's it. Hope you liked em.


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Wherever the hero may wander, whatever he may do, he is ever in the presence of his own essence — for he has the perfected eye to see. There is no separateness. Thus, just as the way of social participation may lead in the end to a realization of the All in the individual, so that of exile brings the hero to the Self in all.

joseph campbell


For, behold, the kingdom of God is within you.

jesus

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Re: Some stuff I wrote... [Re: burgatory]
    #8117165 - 03/07/08 06:14 PM (16 years, 24 days ago)

i like it.

you have a good way of saying alot without too many words. good imagery.

i would try to take more descriptions out and get closer to the essence of what youre saying


do you sing?

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Re: Some stuff I wrote... [Re: Grav]
    #8118263 - 03/08/08 12:05 AM (16 years, 24 days ago)

Thanks.
Ha - I TRY to sing. I sometimes think I have a good voice but - quite tragically - I think I may have altered my speech with a head injury, at least temporarily. But I think my voice, when, er, healed might be worth something in song...


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Wherever the hero may wander, whatever he may do, he is ever in the presence of his own essence — for he has the perfected eye to see. There is no separateness. Thus, just as the way of social participation may lead in the end to a realization of the All in the individual, so that of exile brings the hero to the Self in all.

joseph campbell


For, behold, the kingdom of God is within you.

jesus

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