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Pubbers, I need your help.
#8052537 - 02/21/08 04:16 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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A friend and I have been working on this track for about a week. And, I cannot for the life of me think of a name for it.
Also, if anything sounds off to you let me know. constructive criticism is always nice.
PS: It is not finished completely, lots of tweaking to do on it.
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Psy Baba]
#8052568 - 02/21/08 04:23 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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I like it, it reminds me of driving in the rain at night if that helps.
"Headlights in the Rain"?
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Psy Baba]
#8052578 - 02/21/08 04:25 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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Boobs n shit.
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sounds cool ferris.
Phum, dude, don't be gay.
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Psy Baba]
#8052599 - 02/21/08 04:29 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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Sorry.
I like it, it reminds me of boobs n shit if that helps.
"Boobs n Shit"?
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How would you correlate that to boobs and shit?
Not like I Am producing gangster rap or some crap.
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Psy Baba]
#8052621 - 02/21/08 04:32 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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Headlights = boobs, y'know?
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Psy Baba]
#8052637 - 02/21/08 04:36 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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That sounds good man, although the first 30-40 seconds could use a tune up.. The rest of the song sounds awesome.
song name - fertile emanation
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Streetlight Madness
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Lavender Twilight
Also, the guitar part where the clean guitar is playing 32nd notes with lots of repeating notes, I felt it would have sounded better if at the end of the progression the last two series of notes went lower. Hard to explain what I mean.
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Psy Baba]
#8052642 - 02/21/08 04:38 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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DuNeRaVeR said: A friend and I have been working on this track for about a week. And, I cannot for the life of me think of a name for it.
How about you lay out the lyrics first, then we'll come up with a name? Get Robert Smith to do the vocals, then you'll have a kick-ass Cure song.
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: boxcarguy07]
#8052644 - 02/21/08 04:38 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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Cool, thanks. I'll see if I can get that fixed.
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Psy Baba]
#8052647 - 02/21/08 04:39 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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city streets
normally I'd make all sorts of fun of it but that was pretty good, I'm gonna listen a couple more times and try to come up with something bad to say
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Quote:
andyistic said:
Quote:
DuNeRaVeR said: A friend and I have been working on this track for about a week. And, I cannot for the life of me think of a name for it.
How about you lay out the lyrics first, then we'll come up with a name? Get Robert Smith to do the vocals, then you'll have a kick-ass Cure song.
I wish I could sing . It sounded to me like lyrics would go well though. Maybe I will have to find a singer.
Male or female?
(I also suck with lyrics, so I dunno what to do there either)
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Quote:
andyistic said:How about you lay out the lyrics first, then we'll come up with a name?
Fuck lyrics
Nonconceptual
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Psy Baba]
#8052663 - 02/21/08 04:41 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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that one is fine without lyrics
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Psy Baba]
#8052673 - 02/21/08 04:43 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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Listen to some Cure songs to get ideas. Not suggesting you plagiarize at all, but it should provide some inspiration at least.
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Psy Baba]
#8052681 - 02/21/08 04:44 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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urban jungle
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Psy Baba]
#8052685 - 02/21/08 04:45 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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Trying to explain what I said better...
The progression would sound like:
Gx12, Fx4, Gx12, D# x4, Gx12, Fx4, D# x8, Dx4, Cx4
Allllso... near the beginning when you have the guitar playing G#, G, D# repeatedly,
it would sound good if you threw in G#, G, C every once in a while
(letters are notes, not chords, of course )
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Edited by boxcarguy07 (02/21/08 04:46 PM)
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: boxcarguy07]
#8052692 - 02/21/08 04:47 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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Ha, thanks tons. I will give the notes to my friend (he did the guitar tracks). See what he thinks.
When we work together it sounds better than when we work seperatly, but we bicker and argue the whole time on what needs to be done. Our particular styles collide highly.
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Psy Baba]
#8052695 - 02/21/08 04:48 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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Haha, no problem
It's a good sounding track!
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Psy Baba]
#8052697 - 02/21/08 04:49 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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Quote:
DuNeRaVeR said: ... but we bicker and argue the whole time on what needs to be done. Our particular styles collide highly.
Then you guys have just what you need to form a band.
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Psy Baba]
#8052700 - 02/21/08 04:50 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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Quote:
DuNeRaVeR said: Our particular styles collide highly.
one thing about it, most people see roughly the same thing when they hear it, anyone get visions of cars zipping by on a rainy night?
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Psy Baba]
#8052706 - 02/21/08 04:52 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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"Dark Blue"
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Prisoner#1]
#8052710 - 02/21/08 04:53 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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I thought of an aerial view of a big city with lots of lights just when it's getting dark outside and the sky is a sort of purplish shade. But yeah, that does fit in with the theme
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Learyfan]
#8052742 - 02/21/08 05:00 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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Learyfan said: "Dark Blue"
Dark Blue Sky
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: deranger]
#8052758 - 02/21/08 05:03 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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Yeah.
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Learyfan]
#8052775 - 02/21/08 05:07 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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Cool, I think I will go with that, thanks.
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Psy Baba]
#8052795 - 02/21/08 05:12 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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ooo ooo
I will come up for that name if its all soundscapy and whatnot. Is it electronic?
Dunno if you've come up with one yet haven't read the thread except for the first post...
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Robo]
#8052800 - 02/21/08 05:13 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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Give it a listen first lol. jeeez.
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Tyrannosaurus Sexcapade
Or
Pulse of Time
I dunno, I'm bad at naming things. I really liked it tho.
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Psy Baba]
#8052804 - 02/21/08 05:14 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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I will h/o
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Robo]
#8052830 - 02/21/08 05:22 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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Well someone said something about sky
so here's a whole bunch of cool ones I though that might be good (having to do with sky stuff, some not)
Skyline Horizon Celestial Aurora Hemisphere Stratus Cirrus Coalescence Stratus Vibra Tropic
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Robo]
#8052836 - 02/21/08 05:23 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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Those are my entries 
or something along those lines
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Prisoner#1]
#8052844 - 02/21/08 05:25 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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one thing about it, most people see roughly the same thing when they hear it, anyone get visions of cars zipping by on a rainy night?
I don't know that I get visions of cars zipping by on a rainy night. But I did find your suggested title of "city streets" quite apt. In light of the name, I picture a night scene with sparsely populated streets, with a vantage point from either inside the car or directly above it. No rain came to mind, though now that the thought has been planted, I can see it.
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Robo]
#8052846 - 02/21/08 05:25 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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I suppose you want a prize now, huh?
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Psy Baba]
#8052851 - 02/21/08 05:27 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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Its a nice track btw
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: geokills]
#8052877 - 02/21/08 05:35 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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nice to know there's still some power of suggestion
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Robo]
#8052897 - 02/21/08 05:39 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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Good song.
As for the name...
the Feeding.
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Cowgold]
#8052904 - 02/21/08 05:40 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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Would be awesome with some animal planet rat frenzy video. Cruel reality of nature. Hunter and prey type junk.
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Cowgold]
#8052926 - 02/21/08 05:46 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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Perhaps animated instead?
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Just as long as something dies and it's from another's instinct. To me the song has a real raw nature to it.
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Cowgold]
#8052944 - 02/21/08 05:52 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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Or maybe some dude running for his car before Parking Enforcement is able to drop the ticket onto his windshield?
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Cowgold]
#8052952 - 02/21/08 05:53 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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Animated bacteria monster slow in it's birth. Then devouring some baby rabbits.
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Cowgold]
#8052960 - 02/21/08 05:55 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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I'm guessing Animal Planet is one of your favorite stations, huh.
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Actually no, but I have seen a few dying rabbits.
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Cowgold]
#8052973 - 02/21/08 05:58 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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How does this track give you those vibes
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Cowgold]
#8052983 - 02/21/08 06:00 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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You know... the bacteria monster grows and grows... the rabbit struggles... you watch as the rabbit slowly surrenders accepting the reality of the... Feeding.
Edit. Fuck bacteria.
Make it under the sea! 
With videos like this. (might wanna turn the volume on this video)
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Cowgold]
#8053057 - 02/21/08 06:16 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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wtf is going on
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: deranger]
#8053099 - 02/21/08 06:23 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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no idea
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Psy Baba]
#8053105 - 02/21/08 06:24 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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hahaha
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: boxcarguy07]
#8053121 - 02/21/08 06:27 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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first 30 seconds needs a definite tune up. i really loved the rest of it. like LOVED.
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