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Psy Baba
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Pubbers, I need your help.
#8052537 - 02/21/08 04:16 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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A friend and I have been working on this track for about a week. And, I cannot for the life of me think of a name for it.
Also, if anything sounds off to you let me know. constructive criticism is always nice.
PS: It is not finished completely, lots of tweaking to do on it.
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Psy Baba]
#8052568 - 02/21/08 04:23 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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I like it, it reminds me of driving in the rain at night if that helps.
"Headlights in the Rain"?
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Psy Baba]
#8052578 - 02/21/08 04:25 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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Boobs n shit.
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Psy Baba
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sounds cool ferris.
Phum, dude, don't be gay.
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Psy Baba]
#8052599 - 02/21/08 04:29 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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Sorry.
I like it, it reminds me of boobs n shit if that helps.
"Boobs n Shit"?
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How would you correlate that to boobs and shit?
Not like I Am producing gangster rap or some crap.
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Psy Baba]
#8052621 - 02/21/08 04:32 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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Headlights = boobs, y'know?
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Psy Baba]
#8052637 - 02/21/08 04:36 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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That sounds good man, although the first 30-40 seconds could use a tune up.. The rest of the song sounds awesome.
song name - fertile emanation
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Streetlight Madness
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Lavender Twilight
Also, the guitar part where the clean guitar is playing 32nd notes with lots of repeating notes, I felt it would have sounded better if at the end of the progression the last two series of notes went lower. Hard to explain what I mean.
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Psy Baba]
#8052642 - 02/21/08 04:38 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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DuNeRaVeR said: A friend and I have been working on this track for about a week. And, I cannot for the life of me think of a name for it.
How about you lay out the lyrics first, then we'll come up with a name? Get Robert Smith to do the vocals, then you'll have a kick-ass Cure song.
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: boxcarguy07]
#8052644 - 02/21/08 04:38 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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Cool, thanks. I'll see if I can get that fixed.
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Psy Baba]
#8052647 - 02/21/08 04:39 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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city streets
normally I'd make all sorts of fun of it but that was pretty good, I'm gonna listen a couple more times and try to come up with something bad to say
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Quote:
andyistic said:
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DuNeRaVeR said: A friend and I have been working on this track for about a week. And, I cannot for the life of me think of a name for it.
How about you lay out the lyrics first, then we'll come up with a name? Get Robert Smith to do the vocals, then you'll have a kick-ass Cure song.
I wish I could sing . It sounded to me like lyrics would go well though. Maybe I will have to find a singer.
Male or female?
(I also suck with lyrics, so I dunno what to do there either)
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Quote:
andyistic said:How about you lay out the lyrics first, then we'll come up with a name?
Fuck lyrics
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Psy Baba]
#8052663 - 02/21/08 04:41 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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that one is fine without lyrics
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Psy Baba]
#8052673 - 02/21/08 04:43 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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Listen to some Cure songs to get ideas. Not suggesting you plagiarize at all, but it should provide some inspiration at least.
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Psy Baba]
#8052681 - 02/21/08 04:44 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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urban jungle
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Psy Baba]
#8052685 - 02/21/08 04:45 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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Trying to explain what I said better...
The progression would sound like:
Gx12, Fx4, Gx12, D# x4, Gx12, Fx4, D# x8, Dx4, Cx4
Allllso... near the beginning when you have the guitar playing G#, G, D# repeatedly,
it would sound good if you threw in G#, G, C every once in a while
(letters are notes, not chords, of course )
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Edited by boxcarguy07 (02/21/08 04:46 PM)
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: boxcarguy07]
#8052692 - 02/21/08 04:47 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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Ha, thanks tons. I will give the notes to my friend (he did the guitar tracks). See what he thinks.
When we work together it sounds better than when we work seperatly, but we bicker and argue the whole time on what needs to be done. Our particular styles collide highly.
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Re: Pubbers, I need your help. [Re: Psy Baba]
#8052695 - 02/21/08 04:48 PM (15 years, 11 months ago) |
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Haha, no problem
It's a good sounding track!
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