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Offlinetheorganicdomino
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Feedback on songs wanted
    #8022718 - 02/14/08 02:51 PM (15 years, 11 months ago)
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Okay, I'm not a great singer and am a very clumsy guitarist, but what the hell I'll put my head on the chopping block.

These are rough demos of the first songs I ever wrote. Feedback will be appreciated. They're kinda folky.

This one's called "We Never Hit The Floor"


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Re: Feedback on songs wanted [Re: theorganicdomino]
    #8022730 - 02/14/08 02:54 PM (15 years, 11 months ago)
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This one's called "Renewal"


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Re: Feedback on songs wanted [Re: theorganicdomino]
    #8024497 - 02/14/08 08:53 PM (15 years, 11 months ago)

Nice bro... i like this kind of music driving home from the beach tired but insipired!


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Re: Feedback on songs wanted [Re: theorganicdomino]
    #8025358 - 02/14/08 11:53 PM (15 years, 11 months ago)

not bad, relaxing stuff for in the morning
singing melody is best in the second one, nice, my compliments!

(in the first song alll the long notes have vibrato in it, which doen't fit everywhere)


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Re: Feedback on songs wanted [Re: stefan]
    #8026155 - 02/15/08 07:57 AM (15 years, 11 months ago)

Cheers for the feedback!


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