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OfflineMolasses
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straight up molasses
    #7968843 - 02/02/08 01:51 PM (15 years, 11 months ago)

so, this is my second latest project, i'm working on some guitar lately too, but i don't like to sit around and make one kind of music for a while so this was me trying to take hip hop back to what i wanted.

straight up rural white hip hop.

and i'm not even a wigger, go figure

http://www.myspace.com/mcmolasses

i'm always looking for feedback. sorry for the crap quality, it'll be recorded in a better studio within the next few months.

if you're out there is based on a thread posted in the anonymous forum in a thread titled the same


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OfflineMolasses
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Re: straight up molasses [Re: Molasses]
    #7989889 - 02/06/08 11:42 PM (15 years, 11 months ago)

aww, no posts guys?

anything, i'm really looking for constructive critiscism


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Re: straight up molasses [Re: Molasses]
    #7990532 - 02/07/08 05:02 AM (15 years, 11 months ago)

listened to the first two (not whole track though)

in the first one the voice sounds way too big in comparision to the music/beats
in the second one this was better, not bad.. the rap-flow isn't bad either (I think, never listen to rap really) but it could be better, practice on that some more, you'll get there.

listen to 'a tribe calles quest' for that last suggestion (that's the only I really know, and it's good, classics. I think you can benefit from that). listen how they put more emphasis om certain (parts of) words so that is gets a little more energy/power from the speach, and maintaining the realaxeness, if you know what I mean (you already do it a little, but should be some more)

good luck and have fun:thumbup:


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